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shonai thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!!!! they r MARRIED now...😲.
jhat magni patt biha... this update is completely unexpected...😲
its getting interesting😉
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMGGG i shd say a pleasant surprise or a shock

they got married em pleasantly surprised em glad

but like this in the hospital without letting her know who is the guy

shaan seems ti be really fast...  i dunno y somehow i feel he planned all this

but just want to know her reaction

it seems he likes her in fact luvs her but the way he behaves... he is a complete mystery

but it was lovely

update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg!
they got married shocking update...
shanaks engagement ring and mangalsutra wow!this one realy nice...i like so much...
please update ...i want how the khanak react?
waiting for khanak expression...?

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends...i dont know whether i have written upto ur expectations...please tell me if u like it...


ch :35



khanak  was damn struck ...shaan moved closer to khanak 

and he slowly moved his hand looking at her eyes he put 

that mangal sutra on to her beautifull neck...his 

hand is brushing her neck...madhavi opened a sindoor 

box...shaan took sindoor and placed in khanaks forehead 

parting khanak closed her eyes...

everyone clapped there hands...sanjay and akshay taking 

photos...

aryan:khanak chachi...(hugged khanak with joy)

but khanak was still like a doll...

both shaan and khanak got blessings from their parents...

khanak was doing everything like a puppet...

anjali:i am happy for u khanak...(hugged her)

khusbhoo:welcome to our family...(hugging khanak)...now u 

r MRS khanak shantanu kapoor...

on hearing it she came back to reality...her father is in 

joy...everyone are wishing them...she saw shaan who is 

standing without any expression...

khanak fainted...

when she opened her eyes... she was in shaans 

lap...everyone r around her...calling her name ...khanak 

quickly got up and stand little away from shaan...

vidhya:tum teek hai na beta...

madhavi also stood near her and asked her with concern 

what happened beta...

khanak:nothing ...i am alright...i...i was having a fasting for dad...

sharma: why beta...i am alright... dont do this again...

khanak nodded her head and she saw shaan... his eyebrows 

were raised then he became the same old expression less shaan...

she went and hugged her dad...

rajiv:dont worry beta...

aryan:khanak chachi is going to come to our house now..

khusbhoo:not now aryan...

madhavi: aryan ur chachi will  be with her  dad mom till 

recepition...

khanak looked at madhavi with confused look

madhavi:this weekend we r having a grand recepition for ur 

wedding...after finishing recepition u will come to ur house...

rajiv:sharma dont worry about anything we will make all 

arrangements...singanias r coming ?

sharma: s rajiv..they know ...they r happy for khanak...

madhavi : vidhya khanak is now my daughter (hugged vidhya)

shaan and khanak didnot talk with each other...while leaving 

also shaan didnot look r talk to khanak...

at night khanak did not sleep at all...

she was thinking what happened in the evening...

why god ...why do u play with my life...i told s because pappa 

should not get tension...she looked her ring ...it was 

shinning in the moonlight that is entering into her room...she 

looked herself in the mirror ...mangalsutra around 

her neck...sindoor at her forehead parting...she closed her 

eyes...shaans expression less face came in front...she 

quickly opened her eyes ...i have to talk...

next day morning khanak got ready ...she was wearing a 

beautifull baby pink saree with ivory beads work...

anjali:where r u going khanak...pappa will be discharged by evening...

khanak:i am going to temple...

anjali:shall i come with u...

khanak :no...(quickly with tensed)

anjali raised her eyebrows with a question

khanak:bhabi...i am going to my friends house then to 

temple with her...

anjali:ok khanak ...come soon...

khanak was standing in front of kapoor group of companies building(shaan was incharge in that office)...

khanak slowly took each step and went inside...in the 

recepition she told she want to meet shantanu...

recepitionist:sir someone have come to see u...(intercom)

recepitionist:madam ur name...

khanak:khanak

recepitionist:sir her name is khanak...s sir...

recepitionist:madam u can go ...there is his room

khanak slowly took steps...in front of his room she knocked 

...then she slowly went inside...

khanak lifted her head and saw ...shaan was sitting in his 

chair and starring at her from top to bottom...the way he 

looked at her made khanak to blush ..her 

cheeks turned red...she lowered her eyes...

khanak mind ...what r u doing ...u always blush or fall into 

his hands...come on talk...

khanak quickly looked up at him and said  "MR Shantanu"

on hearing that shaan started to laugh...he was laughing 

heartly...khanak saw his laugh...she was mesmerized...

she starred at him...

shaan:am i ... hot handsome...(laughingly)

khanak was ah...she became angry...

khanak:MR shantanu...i

shaan laughed again ..

khanak:why r u laughing...

shaan: i am ur husband ...and u r calling MR shantanu...

(laughs again)

khanak:i have came here to talk about that...

shaan:sit first( became little serious...)

khanak took the seat...looked up at shaan who was waiting 

for her to talk

khanak: u have married me because of ur parents 

compelsan...ur parents r good and 

they made u to do this for love and  sympathy on me...i will 

try my dad to understand...till then we will be husband and 

wife ...only for outerworld...then u can enjoy ur life in happy 

resort...khanak finished her talk and looked up at shaan ...

khanak:thats it...

khanak stood up and turned to open the door

shaan:wait...

khanak turned to see him ...shaan was walking towards her..

shaan was inch away...they were starring at eachother...

shaan brought her out by holding her hand...khanak was 

shocked...

khanak:what r u doing...

now shaan was standing in front of office people to her left 

khanak was standing...shaan put his hand on khanak 

waist...khanak heart beat increased...

shaan:hey guys...meet my wife ...

MRS KHANAK SHANTANU KAPOOR 

khanak was standing still...every one clapped there hands...

shaan :this weekend we r having grand reciption u all have 

to come...everyone came near them and wished them...

shaan didnot take his hand from khanaks waist...

khanak was uneasy and she was blushing a lot...

shaan bend towards her ear and whispered

shaan:am i doing correctly...hubby wife relation ...only for 

outside world...

they all wished them ...

khanak:i ...i have to go..

shaan:ok guys ...my wife is leaving..

shaan turned towards her and kissed her cheek...and winked at khanak...

khanak:ah...

khanak walked fast ...no she ran ... 



 
















Edited by niki_rbo - 12 years ago
sharon18 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Niki u updated😊...well actually i thought il miss it today cause il be leaving soon😊
Ummm Niki did Khanak actually mean wat she said???and even Shaan's reaction's was cute but im really puzzled wat does he want???😕 is this wat he also wanted???😕
could u plz write one update from his view cause im really finding him so puzzling...
but i liked this update,she cudn't have reacted in any other way...after all there is still a lot of communication gap to be filled between them...
plz update next part soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
me too little conphused with shaan's behaviour..did he marry her only coz of his parents??i really dont think so..i feel that he loves her..but y is he showing an expressionless face to her??
i loved it when he held her by her waist n introduced her as his wife to his staff..n bidding goodbye to her with a kiss on cheeks..
i'm loving it even though shaan's behaviour is a little puzzle..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

but i feel like killing shaan

y is he behaving like this

poor girl she has already gone thru so much and then married him without her consent and now his behavior

wht will happen plz sab kuch theek kardo

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey niki i liked ur update... 😊
bt i  jst wnt to knw dat everybody was knowing except khanak abt deir marraige...????
n hw hes behaving.. i knw he dnt marry because his family wnted him to bt der is someting else wnt to knw so update soon...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved this update
but, this Shaan is confusing me.😕... why is he doing all this??? he kissed her cheek😲... think, he is definitely didn't marry her bcz of his parents... there's something else....
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends ...everyone asking for shaans pov...but this story is mainly khanaks pov...u will know it later...please tell me if u like the following update...


ch :36


khanak walked fast ...no she ran ... 

khanak walking stopped when she entered her room...she 

closed the door and was breathing hard...khanak closed her 

eyes ...her cheeks where shaan kissed her... still she 

can feel shaans lips...the way shaan hold her waist was 

gentle...but secure way...it says  she belongs to him...

khanak felt a shiver through out her body...

khanaks mind what r u thinking khanak...forgot happy 

resort...u hate him khanak...after dad gets well u have to 

take decisions...khanak heart...but they way he looked at 

me today...his eyes were penetrating to my heart...his 

lips...she touched her cheeks...khanak mind...damn khanak 

r u falling for him ...

khanak:no..no...(she opened her eyes)

khanak:i should be carefull with him... 

except shaan others visted khanaks house daily and they 

talked to her and her family...two days before 

recepition they all came to khanaks house except shaan

khanak got blessings from rajiv and madhavi

aryan:chachi...chachi i have brought u (gave a gift)

khanak:whats this aryan...(she opened)

aryan:chachu told me to give this...

khanaks hand shook while opening it a little it was a latest model cell 

phone ...showed to everyone

anjali:wow it is nice...cell phone rang...

anjali:sweet heart (it is written on cell)...

with a smile handed the cell to khanak...

khanak:hello...

shaan:am i doing it correct...

khanak:what...

shaan:look at ur dad...

khanak:ummm...she saw her dad whose face was full of joy

shaan:is he happy..

khanak:ummm...

shaan:for outside world...he cut the phone

khanak thought to herself how dare he...he thinks he is smart...

khanak u should be smart than him...

madhavi gave her a beautifull gagra choli for recepition



khanak had a beautifull mehandi on her hand ...



recepition was held in a big hotel...

khanak was wearing that choli ...around her neck only mangalsutra...in her hand 

a beautifull diamond bangle and sindoor on forehead




khanak got ready from her house and went with anjali...

khanak and anjali entered the hall ...




hall was dim with blue light...one side dinner was prepared...her eyes 

finally landed on shaan...shaan was wearing a white suit...


his face was bright ...his eyes were sparkling...he 

was starring her from top to bottom...khanak quickly 

lowered her eyes...her face cheeks redened...khanak heart 

.. u r blushing always on seeing him...no i am not ...i 

will be keep distance...her heart what distance ...u have 

to stand close to him he is ur husband...she looked her 

dad ...he was very happy...i should act smart than him...

shaan and everyone came  there..

khusboo:wow...u r...gorgeous...

khusboo:shaan is starring u without blinking  his eyes(teasing shaan)
 
shaan:bhabi...(with a hearty smile)

khusboo:ok shaan ...u both first take photos ...later u 

will be tired...now u both look fresh...

shaan took khanaks hand and moved towards stage...

khanak was realy shocked how cooly he is taking her hand..

khanak mind ...dont fall...

they were standing in the stage...photograper started 

taking pictures...khanak became very angry at 

photograper...he asked shaan to put his hands over her 

shoulder...asked khanak to keep hands on shaans 

chest...asked shaan to engulf her from back...like this he 

was saying and taking photos...on taking these photos 

khanak noticed shaan was very relaxed and he was enjoying 

it...she was the one who struggled a lot ...she blushed 

more and more when his hand was placed on her shoulder and waste...

after taking photos their family members came there with garlands  


khusboo:come on shaan put the garland...

sanjay and anjali moved khanak back...

shaan suddenly pulled khanak and she missed balance and 

shaan hold her by waist and starring at each other...shaan 

slowly put the garland...khusboo everyone 

shouted...khanak came to reality...now it was khanak to 

do...shaan was pulled by khusbhoo and akshay...khanak 

smiled at him ...shaan was seeing her..khanak pulled his 

tie and he was struck by this..khanak quickly put the 

garland...a  chocolate icecream cake  was brought..


khusboo:come on cut the cake...

shaan:bhabi...

khusboo:what...

shaan:knife bhabi...

khusboo just shrugged her shoulder with a laugh

shaan smiled and he took khanaks hand khanak looked up at 

shaan...he took her index finger and hold her hand and 

cutted the cake...everyone shouted and clapped...

since it is icecreamcake khanaks index finger is full of 

it...shaan looked at her eyes..she was also looking at him 

...he slowly took her index finger to his mouth and licked it...





tell me if u like the update and the pics
nikita



 










Edited by niki_rbo - 12 years ago