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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi friends

ch: 11


Next morning Khanak was getting ready for the office. she was thinking about what 

ani said yesterday...then khanak shook her head and what am thinking shit...it is 

getting late so she left to the office...

AT The Office:

khanak went to her place and saw anita was sitting in her place. she and khanak had 

a little talk..then she went to GM room .. Mr prasad was General manger of the 

office and his age is about her fathers age and he is a kind man..

prasad:khanak beta u came ..

khanak : told him why she did not came yesterday..

prasad:yesterday our new MD asked about you..


khanak thought   ... on coming in to office i have to go and see that lion in its cave 

.little fear shook her .

khanak:Is MD not here sir?since i have come to office by 9.30 i did not see him 

come.

prasad:MD is a different person. he is very young ,energetic ,dynamic,strict 

person beta  if it comes to work he does not see any timing for it . he came early beta .he is 

in his cabin . he asked u to come and see him when u arrive..

on hearing this she was feared a little.her fear was reflected on her face.

prasad: khanak beta dont be afraid.he is not that bad ..shall i come with u beta

khanak: no sir it is ok ..i am not afraid it is a little tension thats all she 

said to him and she walked towards MDs room.

she knocked the room and went inside there was no one in the MD seat. U can take 

ur seat a voice said from the side room ..at first she was about to sit. then that 

 voice made her heart shiver so she turned to see in the direction of the voice 

that came..khanak was shocked on seeing him .Her new MD is Shantanu...

 

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi friends

ch 12:


Khanak was shocked on seeing him.. Her new Md is shantanu..shaan was talking in 

phone and carring a file and came towards his chair and sat and his one  eyebrow  

was raised.. starred here from top to bottom still talking in the phone.

khanak was just starring at him 

shaan: i told u take the seat

khanak came to her sense and she composed herself and took the seat.

khanak: s sir

shaan: kamini i will talk to u later and cut the phone

khanak on hearing that name her face little frawned but then managed before he 

could she her face


shaan was watching her


khanak: Prasad sir told me that u wanted to meet me..

shaan: s khanak...

khanak :sirf khanak sir.

shaan: did u brought the notepad

khanak : s sir

shaan:first job u have to collect all the information about all the office staff 

and put their photos in their file and he dictated some letters

khanak has noted everything that he said


when she was writing the note he was starring at her.

she could feel that..

after writing

khanak :is anything more sir?

shaan : noded no

khanak eyes met his .they were starring at each other .khanak heart whispered 

mesmerizing eyes .khanak looked down 

khanak: if there is no work i will go sir and prepare this letter sir 

khanak has got up and she was about to go


shaan: wait..

khanak was standing looking down

shaan: from today onwards ur job is changed. i am going to send our old personal 

assitance Mrs sara to the senior managers secratary .Mrs sara place that is MDs PA 

is u... u r my new PA.

Prepare letters for these  changes and bring to me for my sign .from now onwards 

ur place is ..he showed the place. a small cabin that was made inside his own 

room...  
Edited by niki_rbo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi friends .i read lot of novels ..i thought of using those scenes and dialogues too ...
from now onwardsi want to know whether i can use them here...the scenes and situations are nice in some of the novels  . i want to see shanak in those situations .. so when i write those, those will be from novels
not my own one. 
it is like copy from them can i continue it i want to know from u guys.

the start of this story is mine .the start of next will be from novels 

can i do or not u have to say


regards 
nikita
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Posted: 12 years ago
hei nikita,
awesome..so did shaan know that she got married??they were in same class na??did he get to know that she is a widow now..

yay!!i'm so excited n happy..khanak is going to be his PA..looking forward to more..

do continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: niki_rbo

Hi friends .i read lot of novels ..i thought of using those scenes and dialogues too ...

from now onwardsi want to know whether i can use them here...the scenes and situations are nice in some of the novels  . i want to see shanak in those situations .. so when i write those, those will be from novels
not my own one. 
it is like copy from them can i continue it i want to know from u guys.

the start of this story is mine .the start of next will be from novels 

can i do or not u have to say


regards 
nikita



if it is not a word to word copy u can always go for it..if not some plagiarism comes over..

n always people get inspired from wat we read/see..so u can always get ur inspiration from the novels u read..i'm enjoying the story u r writing..
so get inspired from those novels n write ur thoughts..
ALL THE BEST for ur writing..
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Posted: 12 years ago
heyyy niki...awesome writing👏
Khanak is a widow & now she is Shaan's new PA...interesting😉

& regarding ur note...go ahead 👍🏼...it would b a treat reading it😃
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update

em luvin the story and the super fast updates

aww poor gurl at such a young age she became a widow and i guess that was an arrange marriage as she said she'll marry the man her parents will choose

is her chachi some one from the in laws

but em glad that he's her new MD and she his personal secretary ... wow

she mesmerized by hi eyes and em lukin when he'll be  mesmerized by her eyes her smile her beauty... in all her

update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Niki  great update🤗i had this feeling after reading ur update that shanak were actually dating before,and she was forced to marry someone else😕...well i jus have one doubt ,reading ur initial updates it was clear khanak didnt want to get married immediately after her college,thn how cum she didnt protest??or is there a mystery element...well hope u give a flashback soon...ooo i have a feeling that the MD and his PA are gonna make have a really tough time with each other😆loved it...update soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update niki...bt i dnt understand y he immediately made khanak as his PA?? do he also loves khanak?? desperate to knoe wht happ in last 5 months...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends  i have written this update some of mine some r from novel tell me whether i can continue 


ch 13:


Prepare letters for these  changes and bring to me for my sign .from now onwards 

ur place is ..he showed the place. a small cabin that was made inside his own 

room...  

Khanak mind:
In his room in the small corner of the room was the cabin..so have to sit with him 

all day and do the work..that thought made her startle a little

khanak: sir witheveryone ...

shaan cut her and said U r my PA... for each and every i have to come there and 

call u and give the work.. that is not ok..he said with a stress.

 khanak thought with anger  he is using his MD power ..while going to her place 

that is in his cabin



khanak finished her letters and took that to him for sign.

on seeing the letters shaan said good there is no mistake.

on hearing this khanak heart was proud but also alarm rang inside her.

without showing any expressions she stood there.

while she was about to go to here place

shaan : wait khanak

on hearing her name from him she felt butterflies r flying in her stomach.

she turned towards him but he was just behind her and she was to fall shaan made 

her to steady in a sec and he stead  in a little distance..

shaan gave her a basket full of letters to her..she was surprised on seeing that.

on seeing her surprise

shaan:U r my PA daily u have to check the letters separate the important letters 

separate the important and important circulars and arrange all the bills  all 

these things u have to check it by urself.u have to look after my  table and this 

room decoration .daily u have to arrange different flowers in the flower vase.
 
khanak eyes was wide opened. like he did not see her face reactions  he continued 

in that room there is a small microwave a kettle milk ,tea ,coffee powder r all 

there. when i am needed that is morning 11 o clock and in the evening by 3.30 u 

have to prepare me a tea or coffee .

khanak was shocked on hearing this and her head spinned..

khanak: thats all sir or i have to make a  snacks too ( after saying this she bit 

her lip) 

a small smile appeared but then he controlled and said there is no problem in 

doing that too.(his face had no expression .he said that very causally)

she was about to go to her place


shaan: khanak

khanak: s sir

shaan: bring me a cup of coffee..(cool,casuall tone)







Edited by niki_rbo - 12 years ago