Awesome ! 😳
Thanx a lot yaar 2 updts back to back and the lentgh of the 5th was more than pleasing ! Thanx a lot ! Want to kiss ur poor hands and fingers 😉 😳
Ok story is going well, loved it so far, loved the way maan behaved when geet was at Arman/Ridzy's place, he was protective toward her, hmmm here we can see the change i was talking abt in my previous comment, well done and to emphasize you came up with the right twist at the right moment ! ^^ Being away one week from one another is just what they need to think about what's happening...
I am expecting a monologue from both of them, thinking abt the actual situation, the advantages and drawbacks that it involves and ultimatly consequences of all this... hope that's what you are planning... 😛
But there is one thing i didn't understand : why this title : Chocolate mousse ??? so far i didn't find the link 😕 hope you will give justice to your title soon !
One advice ( as usual koi na koi keera to muje nikalna hota hai... 😉 😆 ) : Hope geet will not give herself that easily to him, she should be reluctant for some more time , i mean ok he is nice and evrything but yaar look how many girls are throwing themselves at him... anyone will feel insecure...You did it really well in the previous part bdw. 👏
Ok as always
My love and support are with you
Zubi 😊
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