OS: A Level Playing Field - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great OS...both 'em so emotionally attached. 

-Sona
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful...loved it...expecting more from you...
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was brilliant πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
thankx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely...are u going to continue writing it...please do...would love to see which direction it will go
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey jaan great great os... Mwah thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi asma di...
again iam very late...sorry...
i loved it...
i loved how kushi broke down in his arms...
omg arnav was so sweet...
thanks for this breathtaking os 
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was one rocking OS
Loved it πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow ... that was sooo soo gud ... beautifully written πŸ˜ƒ thanks for d pm dear .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: the_rain



Whoa!

I was literally buried into your story while reading. To say that I loved it would be an understatement. This was absolutely surreal.


I loved their embrace to the core, I loved how he was like a rock supporting her. If we get a scene like this in real show, God save me..it was beyond brilliant..❀️

And I also loved the fact that he collected her hair clip...old habits, πŸ˜†!


Excellent piece of writing Honey, take a bow for this..πŸ€—



 
Hey! Aww thanks for this awesome commentπŸ€— 
 
Happy to hear u were lost in the story, thats kinda how i get while writing😳 I would love something like it to happen in the show...😍 Oh and the clip collecting - yep he is aadat se majboor thereπŸ˜‰ 
 
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