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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was really sweet...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ‘πŸΌ
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That was really sweet...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ‘πŸΌ

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Chapter 7

Peshwae palace,12 pm

Uday walked in  study room where Aaisaab ,Maharaja Brijraj and Doctorsaab were already present and they were having serious discussion over Manyata.

Mb: Aaisaab  we can't lock her up like criminal. Woh  humari beti hai! Kalse ussne kuch nahi khaaya. I m really worried for her now, agar woh  bimar ho gayi toh?

Uv: chinta karna chod dijeye Brijraj Uncle, hum apni Princess ko khana khilakarhi aarhe hai. Brijraj looked at Uday in surprise.

Mb: beta aap sach keh rahe hai ?

Uv: haan uncle aur abb aap dono bhi apna hungerstrike khatam kar do please. He quipped deliberately  to lighten the tense atmosphere.

Mb: par beta how did this miracle happen?

Uv: jab hum hai toh miracle ki kya jarurat hai uncle?

As: sach keh rahe aap Uday , aap humaare liye kisse jaadugar  se kam nahi hai.itne dair se hum log jo nahi kar paye woh aapne kar diya , thanks beta.

Uv: thanks toh paraaye  logon ko kaha jaata hai  , lekin  hum toh aapke apne hai As.

Mb:  I know beta, isseleye hum apni problems aap ke saath comfortably share kar sakate hai.

Uv: aapki problem abb  humari problem hai. Aur hum milkar isse solve karenge. He assured Aaisaab and briraj with his words.

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Car parking area of peshwae palace, 3:30 pm

"Hello Uday". Uday was about to sit in his car when a familiar female voice stopped him. He turned back and saw jaynandin and vijay  coming towards him.

J: itne jaldi kya  hai darling hum toh abhi –abhi yahaan aaye  hain.

Uv: for your kind information hum tumse nahi Rajkumari  Manyata se  milne aaye thae.

V: what ?usse jisne tumhara  yeh haal banaya hai? I mean look at you tumhe dekhkar aisa lagata hai ki tum chawl se rajkumari Manyata nahi balki koi jungle se sherni lekar aaye ho. Come on 'j' bhai let's go back warna yeh ladki humain bhi noch laege! He said in his typical feminine attitude.

Uv: Vijay Be a man. Tumse jayada  toh Manyata kitne brave and challenging hai ,woh bhi tumhari younger sister hone ke bawajud.

J: oh pahlease don't call that gatar girl as our sister. Aur yeh tumhe kya hogaya hai Uday tum use ladki ko praise kar rahe ho ,jisne tume itne buri tarah se naakhun aur daant lagaye hai. I can't believe , aisa kya jaadu kar diya hai ussne?

Uv: aur tumhe kya hogaya hai jay ? tum kyun itne jal rahi  ho? You know tumhara pet name tume bahut suit karta hai, 'j' for jealous nandini! He winked at her mischievously.

J: shut up Uday!

Uv . :  o hello , I don't have enough time to waste on you and on your cartoon brother ok. Mujhe  ek  important kaam se police station jaana hai ,uncle brijraj  and  doctor uncle wahaan humara wait  kar rahe hoge , so please excuse me jealous nandini.  He entered in his car before 'j' could reply back and keep him stuck at same place fighting with her  and drove away.

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Mumbai police station , 4 pm

Brijraj , Udayveer and Doctorsaab entered lockup room to confront Muralilaal , who was staring  them with anguished looks.

Ml: meri beti ko toh cheen liya abb  kya lene aaye ho tum log?

Mb:  woh  humari beti hai samjhe! Namak haram  aaj tujhe hum zinda nahi chodenge! And he rushed towards muralilaal in rage and pulled him up from chair holding his collar.

Ml: maar daalo humai , jaise humari behan ko maar daala tha . phir kisski baari hai? Manyata ki?

Mb: tumhari  isse misunderstanding ke wajah se hum apni beti se itne saal dur rahe hai. par aur nahi , iss se pehle tum phir se unhe  humse churakar bhaag jaao hum tumhai aaj he khatam kar daitein  hai! And  he held murali's neck with his both hands to choke him, but uday and doctorsaab pulled him away from muralilaal.

D: maharaj shaant hojaaye, woh aapko bhadaka raha hai taaki aap koi galati karein.

Uv: haan uncle Brijraj  Doctoruncle sahi keh rahai hai. He looked at doctorsaab and said" aap please uncle ko yahaan se lejaaye, humai iss muralilaal se  kuch baatein karni hai "Briraj  glanced at murali with hatred  before leaving the lockup with Doctorsaab.

Ml: tum bhi chale jaao , mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karne.

Uv: chale jaayeinge, lekin jaane se pehle hum tumai batna chahatein hai ki tum  bahut khudgarz(selfish) insaan ho. Manyata se pyaar ka jooth natak karte ho aur dusri taraf use apne parivar, uski aisho-aaram ki zindgi se dur  rakhtae  ho, kyun ? taaki woh chawl mein rehkar mushkil zindgi jee sakae? Tum uski shaadi kisse rajkumarse nahi balki koi mamuli admi se hote huae dekhna chahatein ho!  Tumhare wajah se woh apne logon ko nahi apna rahi, buhki-pyaasi sirf tumhare baarein soch rahi hai! Aur tum ho jo sirf apne bare mein sochte ho. Agar tum Manyata ko sach mein pyaar  karte ho toh use sach batao aur use apne asli pehchan(identity) aur parivar ke saath kushi se  jeeleinae  do.  Humai jo kehna tha woh humnai kehdiya, baaki  tumhari marzi. And he left the lockup room leaving Muralilaal behind  in contemplative state.

Edited by Kesarmania - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the story so far , keep it up!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Update is really nice 😊...liked the way uday tauted J for jealous...i hope murari will tell manyata everything...waiting 4 more MaanVeer moments... do continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hayiii
loved how uday feed her food indirectly
LOVEDDD IT
very well written
Please PM me if possible
Pleaseee continue sooon
Cant waitπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love your story and can you be a dear an pm me updates!!!!!! PLEASE!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful update Shradha...J for jealous JN lovely suits her very well

Plzzz update soon and look forward for more ManVeer scenes
 
Thxs for the pmπŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shradha,I am loving how you are giving your own unique twist to the scenes from the show.Brijraj is quite different from the show na.I like that.loved the UV-J and Vijay Bhai scene.I could totally imagine that scene with the actors.and the last scene-how I wish this had been shown on the show.Great job and please agli baar mujhe bada sa chapter chahiye okπŸ˜ƒ