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FF: It wasn't just love -Chapter 45-The End(03/28) (Page 96)

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Posted: 30 March 2012 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
That was a superb update Harini.
 
You have captivated the mischeviousness of the womenfolk and their attempts to hide the shoes effectively through the flashbacks.
 
You have ended on an private conversation, leaving the reader guessing just what did Gopi ask Ahem for - perhaps a baby!
 
Looking forward to the next update - hopefully we will get to find out just what Gopi's request was. Also for the honeymooners to go off on their holiday too.
 
 

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Posted: 01 April 2012 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
ClapHarini...enjoyed the part...well nani makes things lively !!! she got the girls & the boys to have fun & enjoy the wedding Wink !!!
 
 
Well as much as we talk about Ahem being romantic in his own way...Jigar also seems to be romantic in his own way...gifting his wife before the wedding was cute Smile !!!
 
 
Ahem's advice on getting married was the best part of the whole part...the one who despised his wedding is now telling his brother to believe in getting married LOL ...
 
 
Ahem & Gopi played a sweet bhai & bhabi...Gopi understanding Deepu's thoughts before the wedding & offering to take her parent's photoframe along with them...both being happy when Jigar & Deepu were getting married...& then the gifts to the newly wedded had their love in it Smile !!!
 
 
Ahem & Gopi are so atuned to each other...while giving the gifts, looking at each other, nodding at one another shows how much both love for one another & give importance to one another in their marriage...every partner wants that kind of importance from his or her spouse & out of love...u got the emotion so correct Clap
 
 
 
Well Ahem & Gopi are soul mates...agree on that but your heart years for more...& thats what Ahem is yearning...he wants a wife who makes demands on him...holds him ransom ...who gets him mad in anger...different opinions...suprise gifts...suprise seduction...may not be always but this brings spice in life...so will Gopi be able to understand him...& make it spicy for him...at the same time will Ahem also be able to make life spicy for his love Wink
 
 
 
Well Gopi loves Ahem so much she wants to bring his love into the world...when you love a person so much...you want to carry & bear his child...& she seems to have reflected Ahem's thoughts as he also loves her so much that he wants to see his love grow in her...so will both be able to fulfill each others love requests EmbarrassedWink ???
 
 
Well a mole...cant put it past Urshi coz they have been silent for sometime now or is there a new enemy in the wing !!! well at one point it looked like the story would end...but then the story continues with new twists & new challenges for all 4 of them together as a family, as couples & also individuals...hope the CVs get some gyan & also look at SNS this way Wink !!!
 
 
Waiting for the next part Wink

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by munnihyderabad

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Harini that was fantastic and awesome update ...loved itHug

i was grinning like an idiot all the wayBig smile

- Aww gopi and deepu ... both the girls with no parents will have their parents in the form of their in-laws and what great bonding and love between gopi and deepu amazingClap

-The whole wedding and the shoe hiding was real fun... and exciting boys vs girls.. LOL koki and parag were the best ... koki asking for cashew and parag feeling pride in itLOL
- so even though Ahem knew the location... he chose to loose the game...so that he can see the smile and happiness in the girl's faces or rather his wife's face... so he won it in the end..even though he lost it technically... smart man,,,, harini how sweet and smart is ur AhemjiDay Dreaming
-Wow Mauritius...that is the perfect place for honeymoon... what more can i sayEmbarrassed...
-so we have a farmhouse outing coming up

- and harini... i know what gopi asked for ... what will a wife ask a husband when she has everything in her life ... she asked for baby am i rightTongue

and u r adding a new track to ur happy romantic story...by planting a mole in the office... now who is thisConfused new twist ..will wait for itTongue

Thank you so much MunniHug 
I am real glad you liked the update.. Koki and Parag was my favorite part. Wink Parag poor man was happy to be assisting his wife while she wanted the girls to win..
Ahamji.. Well what can I say. He is smart and perfect for his Gopi. He will do anything to keep her smiling..Tongue
Well you seem to have guessed what Gopi asked for.. Development on that in the coming updatesEmbarrassed
Thank youSmile

Originally posted by Sandy914

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harini... always Hug, wonderful update.. it is wroth for waiting o long :)  I just loved the update, how beautifully u have put into the words about relations... Clap Jiger & deepu got married.. nani&baa are really playful.. koki is too good to get shoes, Big smile

and what was that gopi asked him? was it something related to the jiger's gift thsat ahem was talking??

and what is happening a Modi industries? your precap is increasing anxiety?? 

waiting for the next update Tongue

Thanks SandyBig smile
I am glad I was able to entertain you with the update.. What did Gopi ask Ahem.. A lot have guessed correctly and you will know in the coming updates.. 

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhruti

superbbb update!!!!!! Clap
loved it!!!!!!!
pm wd d next update

Thank youBig smile
Will pm on updating.. Will be updating todayTongue

Originally posted by sks21

wonderful update harini...loved it
koki helping the girls to steal the shoes liked that a lot...
finally jigar and deepu are marriedSmile...
and the big question what did gopi ask ahem???cant wait to know what it is
update soon
Thank you kavyaSmile
I loved the Koki - Parag scene too..Wink
You will know what Gopi wants very soon.. In the coming updatesBig smile

Originally posted by abbay

Clap loved it!!!!
Thanks Abbay.Smile

Originally posted by hanaGoHem

supurb lovely  update im sure she ask about a baby  

Thank you. Tongue Maybe you are right. The secret will be out in the next updateSmile

Originally posted by vibz88

You actually got them married:-( :-( :-( oki. Am more excited about the precap!thanks 4the pm.

LOL Looks like I did.. afterall Rashi was not around and Jigar had to have a saathiyaWink
I am glad you read it though.. And Thank you so muchBig smile

Originally posted by shruthi2010

that was another superb update.
i enjoyed the whole wedding scene
my guess is gopi wants a child from aham.


Thank youTongue
I am glad you liked the update.. What Aham and Gopi want is an open secret nowLOL Coming updates will tell us what it is.Smile
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sathya.s

Harini, you are a great writer. An awesome update. I loved each and every line! What did Gopi ask for? For a child? Please update soon. Waiting for more beutiful moments with the Modi family Tongue

Thank you Sathya.Tongue Those are very kind wordsSmile
I hope I can give you what you look forward to.. Update in a few minutesBig smile

Originally posted by Xarina

Excellent, interesting and uplifting.   Intrigued with the mole in the office and Gopi's request.  Please update soon.

Thank you Xarina. Tongue
The mole problem will be taken care of very soon. I am glad that you liked itTongue

Originally posted by 5cents

HariniHug, abs wonderful update...LOVED it so muchClap. Apart from the wonderful characterization, you have described all the relationships and ceremonies with utmost details... kudos to youStar. I had to read then re read to get all the fine and minute detailsEmbarrassed
Gopi has asked for a bonny baby lolWink. Ahem can help in baby making but bonny nor not is not in his hands LOL. Nice suspense and turn in the story.  
Waiting eagerly with anxiety for the next partBig smile 

Aww Thank you so much TinaHug
Those are really kind words and I cannot find words to say what they mean to me. 
You guys always find my suspense out, don't youLOL That is an open secret now.. Further updates and we will see if the secret comes out completely in the open.
I am glad you liked the characters.. If only they become a little lose in SNS, this family is a very nice one to beTongue
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by varshu27

fantastic update harini...loved seeing the whole modi family happy and having fun at the wedding...deepu and gopi get along so well...i liked that hetal and koki asked for a week in the farm ouse...the ladies do deserve a break...ahem being so open in front of his family is a revelation...jigar and deepu are going to mauritius for their haneymoon...they will definitely have fun...i think i know what gopi is going to ask for...so whats up with the mole in the office...cant wait to read more...thanks for the pm

Thank you VarshuTongue Your words always make me smileSmile
I just could not get the ceremony details without the emotions..  Aham has learnt to be happy openly with his family. Gopi taught him that.. 
Jigar and Deepu will certainly have fun. And I know that you guys know what she asked for.. Your guess is correct. Let us see how that develops furtherBig smile
You are most welcome. Will pm on the next updateSmile

Originally posted by luckylucky1

nice update harini...loved it... Clap
ThanksTongue
Glad you liked itSmile

Originally posted by angl143

Fantastic Update!!! Star Loved the Deepu-Gopi scene and the Gohem scene !!! Their silent unspoken communication is definitely really beautifully described!! U r a genius !!! Clap

Thank you so muchTongue
GoHem are a shy couple and they understand each and every action and gesture. They need no words spoken. Their silent love is unique and beautifulTongue

Originally posted by Debalina_Paul

Thumbs UpThumbs Upsimply  tooo good.. Tongue Thumbs Up Dancing
Thank you so muchTongue

Originally posted by minoushka93

harini that was superb!! i laughed so much at koki's prank to get the shoes! this is exactly her doing LOL and parag was so pleased to help for once that he completely forgot his mission
 
I love ahem, he's so tender ith gopi, he lost in puurpose to make her happy, and he is wo willing to oblige her. I love it
and gopi was so sweet, she's so happy with her family that she has nothing else to ask for. so cute!
 
and once again you ended your chapter with a cliffhanger, I wonder what is happening in modi office and what gopi asked for that is same than what ahem wants..;
 
in a word your chapter was SUPERB Hug

Aww Thank you so much for these words and encouragementTongue
The Koki-Parag scene is my favorite too.. .I am sure there is a funny bone to Koki except that she hides it wellWink
Aham is just so much in love.. He has his wife to show him what it is to keep losing for another's joy. When she does so much, he will do everything to make her happy. Big smile
Thank you againHug

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tina_1234

nyycc cute part !!

Thanks TinaTongue

Originally posted by Chammak.Challo

Very nice ff 

Thank youBig smile

Originally posted by tangam

Harini a happy wedding like the detail you put into it just enough to enjoy and not so much that would drag the shole update...the emotional 1st part between Gopi and Deepu was touching esp Koki being witness...(actually spoke volumes about your love for koki's charactor)...
I'm guessing its a baby they both want...
Also clever man Ahemji he knows where to lose...
So we go into a new era of the mole...lets see how this saga carries on...
Thank you TangamTongue
I do love Koki a lot..Embarrassed And she is perfect mother material.. She does not show her love but she does love everyone.Smile I am glad you found the update interesting. Mole and secrets coming right up

Originally posted by goody7775

awesome harini HugSmile
Thank you..Big smile

Originally posted by aamirkhanfan

awesome update
loved the marriage scene
Thank you.. I am really glad you liked itTongue
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _naksh_raz

wow...
what can i saw...firstly i will introduce myself..im Raz hiii...lol..
i was reading your ff...came across it when i was strolling the forum..and from the time i started caught my attention
Mashallah...you are a brilliant writer..and another good thing is your updates are sooo long..and not monotonous...i loved it...
now  talking about the last part...which i was upset...after taking two whole days sitting on the cell reading...and that was the end..i was praying you will update...
ofcourse gopi asked for a baby...
i love this whole ff...pm me plz

Hi Raz.. Welcome to the forumTongue
That is so very kind of youEmbarrassed I am really glad that you liked it. My updates usually are long.. I do not know the right place to stop and by the time I want to  the update is longer than mostLOL

I will surely pm as soon as I update.. Thanks againTongue

Originally posted by swasthi

That was a superb update Harini.
 
You have captivated the mischeviousness of the womenfolk and their attempts to hide the shoes effectively through the flashbacks.
 
You have ended on an private conversation, leaving the reader guessing just what did Gopi ask Ahem for - perhaps a baby!
 
Looking forward to the next update - hopefully we will get to find out just what Gopi's request was. Also for the honeymooners to go off on their holiday too.
 


Thank you SwasthiBig smile
The marriage in SNS was marred by Kalaakaris and I could not enjoy the shoes getting stolen because Rashi was doing it for a purpose. Plus Gopi never got a chance to enjoy.. So why not hereTongue
Will be updating today. The secrets will be revealed in the upcoming chapters though most of you have guessed it LOL


Edited by Justlikethat1 - 08 April 2012 at 8:42pm

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