Originally posted by: munnihyderabad
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**Edited ***yipee me first🥳harini ... i just loved it ..loved it and loved it...🤗i was grinning from start to finish- Kokiji is a task master and gopi is just more than perfect bahu for her,,,she made her job easyloved all the conversations...hetal-koki, GoKi, Kinjal-Ahem, and above all Gopi and Ahem just endearing to read their conversation- the whole Mehendi function was super cute,, the reasoning was very well written,,,,and the haila harini... A in the heart and G in A ..can it get any better😳-the scene in the swing was sooo beautiful and endearing brilliantly written... i could see myself in the swing , ofcourse with my real life Ahemji😉- harini the whole wedding prep work... the decorations, the items... the terminology all are beautifully written with intrinsic detailing😛-What is the gift Ahem and gopi are giving,... and precap.. my god Deepu also involving in hiding his shoes ,,, this is superly cute-and harini thank you so much 🤗for the maroon saree and cream sherwani with maroon stoledo i even need to tell... how excitedly ...i am waiting for the wedding😛
👏awesome!!!!!!! 👍🏼really loved it!!!!!!!!⭐️ I have been feeling restless all over the day and required this dose!😉!!!!!! WAITING for the next update!!!!!!😆
Originally posted by: Sandy914
Wow.. Harini.. u made it.. awesome, love filled update,, please update the next part also. i can't wait anymore
loved it harini...
i just love how u show ahem's and gopi's relationship...they are so cute and adorable
the mehandi ceremony was very nice and loved the A and G thing a lot...
wonderful update harini...it was brilliant
cant wait for the next update
Harini, I didn't like it...but I loved it very much. 😊
Sorry couldn't resist.
I really, really loved this update. Once again I am just left stunned at the amazing relationships all around. Koki and Gopi, Koki and Hetal, Jigar and Deepu, but most specially Gopi and Ahem. You have written them so well I smile at their every interactions.
Such is their bond now that they are always looking to make the other one happy.
Loved the Mehndi design concept, and how he immediately spotted the A.
G within A, this is their relationship, their everlasting love.
Precap: Loved it and I can't wait to read more. Thank you so much.
Originally posted by: CHIKA784
Loved it Harini!😃
- Gopi being shy and so cute, It was just adorable and oh god the way she whispered'I love you Ahemji' in her sleep put a big and bright smile on my face!😃
- The 'A' and the 'G' on Gopi's hands was just the cuuutest thing ever and Ahem immediately finding the A first!😳
- Jipu were hillarious!😆 Deepu running after Jigar and Jigar not realising where the J was on Deepu's hand and blamed it on the complex mehndi!🤣
- The wedding in the next update, This is going to rock!
Update sooon Harini, I loved it!😃 and thanks for the PM!🤗
Really nice harini! Gopi and ahem are so cute and the mehendi idea was so cute! A and g !! But jigar with deepika makes me really sick sorry no jipi for me . I just wish it was rashi.you can still stop the wedding and get rashi back ha ha!
Originally posted by: tina_1234
awesome cute part..i guess gopi is preggy
Originally posted by: Debalina_Paul
😛awesome story harini.. loved the mehendi concept especially.. waiting eagerly for ur next update.. do pm 😛
Lovely story and wonderful update. 👏 Read through it all. Can't understand how I missed this? Thank you so much for updating today.. It has soothed me.🤗
Harini that was just so beautifully written.
The interactions between Gopi and Kokila, Hetal and Kokila, Jigar and Ahem, Jigar and Deepu, even Kinjal and Ahem, and not forgetting Ahem and Gopi were well executed.For me the moments that were really touching was: one, when Ahem was able to find his name on her mehedi design. Thereafter to admire it so thoughtfully when he noticed the G wrapped within the A. And two, when Gopi snugged up to Ahem and muttered that she loved him. This sent him rocketing through the sky.Now looking forward to the actual wedding and him reliving now the good moments.Update soon.
Originally posted by: varshu27
terrific update harini...just what the doctor ordered...loved that ahem could find his initial in the mehendi...i still remember the shy,innocent gopi trying to show her hands to ahem...with her head bent down...the first time...this instance ahem parcipated and what a good memory for gopi...loved the A and the G symbolism...jigar and deepu are made for each other...gopi has grown so much in confidence and her organisation skills are wonderful...loved the update...it felt like watching one of those awesome hindi films ...with all the ceremonies associated with a wedding...thanks for the pm...
great update
Harini Loved the update...so feelgood...absent of all the -ve Kalakhari stuff...luv the pace and the husband wife familiarity yet devoid of contempt...
Hey harini long time no see...mostly my fault...oh well all my fault but how have you been ...updating 2nite?
Oh My Gosh!!!
I absolutely loved this!!!!You're such a brilliant updater!!! It just keeps getting better and better!!! Your Ahem and Gopi are like the perfect Ahem and Gopi!!!!I cannot wait til the wedding!!
Oh Harini...I read the update in a hurry when I was stuck with work last week...today Im finally reading it in peace & it was such a pleasure...loved every bit of it...
People assume Gopi to be meek & soft but she handles her responsibility of being a badi bahu of the house with ease. She ensures her responsibilities are well taken care beyond the call of the duty. She is slowly becoming the backbone of Modi house.Love between Ahem & Gopi is just growing by leaps & bounds between them...what Ahem missed at the 1st time, he is lucky that life is giving him a chance to make it up for Gopi the 2nd time 😉...Ahem also enjoys so much by troubling his innocent wife !!! Well Ahem is right...he is in Gopi's heart & Gopi so rightly got the G in A...that she has completely become his forever !!!Whatever it maybe , Kokilla still has a hold on Ahem 😆 ...He just jumped out of the bed 😉...& loved Ahem for taking care of Panna & her feelings...she has truely become his daughter !!!Ahem gets to see Gopi's love for him thru different ways...she always puts him before she comes...& it touches his heart at every point 😉Also liked how Ahem was trying to justify the broken button😛...With Ahem around Jigar will have to buckle up to keep pace with him in reaching out to their partner's hearts 😆So whats the gift that Bhai & Bhabhi have planned for Jigar & Deepu??? Waiting for the next part 😊
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