FF: It wasn't just love -Chapter 45-The End(03/28) - Page 70

Posted: 12 years ago
😛Plz plz update soon.. M dying wid anticipation howz d wedding is going to be.. 😛
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by munnihyderabad


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yipee me first🥳

harini ... i just loved it ..loved it and loved it...🤗

i was grinning from start to finish

- Kokiji is a task master and gopi is just more than perfect bahu for her,,,she made her job easy
loved all the conversations...hetal-koki, GoKi, Kinjal-Ahem, and above all Gopi and Ahem just endearing to read their conversation
- the whole Mehendi function was super cute,, the reasoning was very well written,,,,and the haila harini... A in the heart and G in A ..can it get any better😳
-the scene in the swing was sooo beautiful and endearing brilliantly written... i could see myself in the swing , ofcourse with my real life Ahemji😉
- harini the whole wedding prep work... the decorations, the items... the terminology all are beautifully written with intrinsic detailing😛 
-What is the gift Ahem and gopi are giving,... and precap.. my god Deepu also involving in hiding his shoes ,,, this is superly cute
-and harini thank you so much 🤗for the maroon saree and cream sherwani with maroon stole
do i even need to tell... how excitedly ...i am waiting for the wedding😛


Thank you so much Munni 🤗..
So generous of you😃 The mehendi scene was something I always remember because of SNS.. Gopi lookes so expectantly at Aham that day. It was the start of her dreams coming true.. I just wanted to give her one more chance to enjoy her Ahamji's attention and this time he would not fail her😳
Deepu is a firecracker.. She wants to be in the middle of anything and everything😆 Will try to update tomorrow.😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by abbay


👏awesome!!!!!!! 👍🏼really loved it!!!!!!!!⭐️ I have been feeling restless all over the day and required this dose!😉!!!!!! WAITING for the next update!!!!!!😆


Thank you so much Abbay😃
I am glad I was able to help.. Will try to post soon. Have been caught up in some stuff😕

Originally posted by Sandy914


Wow.. Harini.. u made it.. awesome, love filled update,, please update the next part also. i can't wait anymore


Thank you so much Sandy😛
I apologize .. I do not usually take so long.. But have been caught up in some things at work. Will surely update soon😊

Originally posted by sks21


loved it harini...
i just love how u show ahem's and gopi's relationship...they are so cute and adorable
the mehandi ceremony was very nice and loved the A and G thing a lot...
wonderful update harini...it was brilliant
cant wait for the next update


Thanks Kavya😃
GoHam are my favorite too.. They are a world apart..😳 Thank you so much for your comments. I will update very soon..
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by sbp1971


Harini, I didn't like it...but I loved it very much. 😊

Sorry couldn't resist.

I really, really loved this update. Once again I am just left stunned at the amazing relationships all around. Koki and Gopi, Koki and Hetal, Jigar and Deepu, but most specially Gopi and Ahem. You have written them so well I smile at their every interactions.

Such is their bond now that they are always looking to make the other one happy.

Loved the Mehndi design concept, and how he immediately spotted the A.

G within A, this is their relationship, their everlasting love.

Precap: Loved it and I can't wait to read more. Thank you so much.


Thank you Shilpa😆 Glad you liked it this much😳
I somehow cannot make them unhappy at all.. Hence my story is not going to have any big twist or suspense😆
Aham and Gopi and the relation that they share goes beyond just love. Theirs is a bond that never lets go..
I wanted to update pretty quickly but have been caught up in other things.. I will try to update soon.😛
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by CHIKA784


Loved it Harini!😃

  1. Gopi being shy and so cute, It was just adorable and oh god the way she whispered'I love you Ahemji' in her sleep put a big and bright smile on my face!😃
  2. The 'A' and the 'G' on Gopi's hands was just the cuuutest thing ever and Ahem immediately finding the A first!😳
  3. Jipu were hillarious!😆 Deepu running after Jigar and Jigar not realising where the J was on Deepu's hand and blamed it on the complex mehndi!🤣
  4. The wedding in the next update, This is going to rock!
Update sooon Harini, I loved it!😃 and thanks for the PM!🤗

 
🤗 You are most welcome and thank you😛
Bulleted points of likes.. Brilliant Chika😃 Ahamji also slept with a big smile.. His Gopi did whisper her love to him😆 Deepu and Jigar are in a different league.. We need two pranksters among two very mature and level headed people😉
Will update soon Chika.. I am trying my best.. Will do it by tomorrow.😊

Originally posted by vibz88


Really nice harini! Gopi and ahem are so cute and the mehendi idea was so cute! A and g !! But jigar with deepika makes me really sick sorry no jipi for me . I just wish it was rashi.you can still stop the wedding and get rashi back ha ha!


Thanks Vibz.😛. I am glad you like Gopi and Aham in the FF😊
I understand about JiPi😆 What a name..😃 Rashi huh.. Maybe in the next one 😉 Thanks so much again Vibz😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey harini long time no see...mostly my fault...oh well all my fault but how have you been ...updating  2nite?
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by tina_1234


awesome cute part..i guess gopi is preggy 


Thanks Tina😛... No not yet.. Gopi is not pregnant😊

Originally posted by Debalina_Paul


😛awesome story harini.. loved the mehendi concept especially.. waiting eagerly for ur next update.. do pm 😛


Thank you so much Debalina😃
Glad you liked it.. I saw your other comment too.. I apologize 😳
I have been trying to update since the weekend but I am caught up in the middle of something. I will surely try to make the update tomorrow..😊

Originally posted by Xarina


Lovely story and wonderful update. 👏 Read through it all.  Can't understand how I missed this?  Thank you so much for updating today.. It has soothed me.🤗


Thank you so much Xarina🤗
Glad it could be of some help😳

Originally posted by swasthi


Harini that was just so beautifully written.
 
The interactions between Gopi and Kokila, Hetal and Kokila, Jigar and Ahem, Jigar and Deepu, even Kinjal and Ahem, and not forgetting Ahem and Gopi were well executed.
 
For me the moments that were really touching was: one, when Ahem was able to find his name on her mehedi design. Thereafter to admire it so thoughtfully when he noticed the G wrapped within the A. And two, when Gopi snugged up to Ahem and muttered that she loved him. This sent him rocketing through the sky.
 
Now looking forward to the actual wedding and him reliving now the good moments.
 
Update soon.


Aww... Thank you so much Swasthi😛 That was so nice of you to comment in such details.. 😃
The first time I saw the mehendi scene in SNS, I was mesmerized..  If nothing else, Gopi's innocence and her shy expectation is very visible in that one scene.. I wanted Aham to notice that this time.
Gopi breathes her Ahamji... She loves him and is now so comfortable with him that she also dreams of him all the time😳 Will try to update tomorrow..
Thanks again😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by varshu27


terrific update harini...just what the doctor ordered...loved that ahem could find his initial in the mehendi...i still remember the shy,innocent gopi trying to show her hands to ahem...with her head bent down...the first time...this instance ahem parcipated and what a good memory for gopi...loved the A and the G symbolism...jigar and deepu are made for each other...gopi has grown so much in confidence and her organisation skills are wonderful...loved the update...it felt like watching one of those awesome hindi films ...with all the ceremonies associated with a wedding...thanks for the pm...


Thank you so much Varshu..😃
🤗  Me too.. I remember that scene too well.. That one look of expectation in her eyes when she shows Aham her mehendi is embedded in my mind forever.. I wanted to give Gopi and Aham a chance to relive that moment and this time both needed to enjoy it especially Gopi needed to feel special.. I had to make it special for her😳
Jigar and Deepu are my jolly pair.. Deepu will make Jigar toe the line. 😆
Thank you so much again for those generous words.. and you are most welcome😃

Originally posted by kamjal


great update


Thank you😃

Originally posted by tangam


Harini Loved the update...so feelgood...absent of all the -ve Kalakhari stuff...luv the pace and the husband wife familiarity yet devoid of contempt...

Thanks Tangam😛
If there is one thing in SNS that bores me, it is those KK especially the ones that have no meaning at all..😕 Thank you.. 😃
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by tangam


Hey harini long time no see...mostly my fault...oh well all my fault but how have you been ...updating  2nite?


Hello Tangam..😛 Yeah.. Not able to see you around 😕
Been keeping busy?😊 I am good.. But have to apologize.. Will make the update tomorrow night.. 😕 But surely tomorrow night😛
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by NazmaJ


Oh My Gosh!!!

I absolutely loved this!!!! 

You're such a brilliant updater!!! It just keeps getting better and better!!! Your Ahem and Gopi are like the perfect Ahem and Gopi!!!!

I cannot wait til the wedding!!


Thank you so much Nazma😃
I want to see a better version of Aham and Gopi on screen. they do have the potential.. I am just waiting for that day when I can drool over the couple😍
Wedding coming up tomorrow.😃

Originally posted by navyab


Oh Harini...I read the update in a hurry when I was stuck with work last week...today Im finally reading it in peace & it was such a pleasure...loved every bit of it...
 
People assume Gopi to be meek & soft but she handles her responsibility of being a badi bahu of the house with ease. She ensures her responsibilities are well taken care beyond the call of the duty. She is slowly becoming the backbone of Modi house.
 
Love between Ahem & Gopi is just growing by leaps & bounds between them...what Ahem missed at the 1st time, he is lucky that life is giving him a chance to make it up for Gopi the 2nd time 😉...Ahem also enjoys so much by troubling his innocent wife !!! Well Ahem is right...he is in Gopi's heart & Gopi so rightly got the G in A...that she has completely become his forever !!!
 
Whatever it maybe , Kokilla still has a hold on Ahem 😆 ...He just jumped out of the bed 😉...& loved Ahem for taking care of Panna & her feelings...she has truely become his daughter !!!
 
Ahem gets to see Gopi's love for him thru different ways...she always puts him before she comes...& it touches his heart at every point 😉 
 
 
Also liked how Ahem was trying to justify the broken button😛...With Ahem around Jigar will have to buckle up to keep pace with him in reaching out to their partner's hearts 😆
 
So whats the gift that Bhai & Bhabhi have planned for Jigar & Deepu??? Waiting for the next part 😊

Thank you so much Navya😛 That was so wonderful of you to take time and comment in this detail.. Thank you😃
You are absolutely right.. Gopi takes her responsibilities seriously. It takes a lot of hardwork and most people forget that..
Aham is making up for all the missed chances from before. He will keep doing his best to make up for the past. It does not give them pain any longer. But Aham does not want to ever repeat he past again.
Their love for each other will keep growing.. There is no turning back😃 And Aham is reminded of how lucky he is all the time.. Gopi effortlessly makes him fall in love with her more and more..😳

Now for the present.. Will update tomorrow.. They will be the perfect Bhai and Bhabhi😉

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