Originally posted by: CHIKA784R E S : )
*EDITED*Awww that was a lovely update Harini, Kinjal and Parag's conversation was really sweet, Awww and Jipu and Gohem are very cute, Haha i agree with Ahem, Gopi looks wonderful in pink!😳 Hmm i wonder what Ahem wanted to say to Gopi P.S a quick request Harini, How about instead of Deepu Jigar marries me!😳 Although he would get arrested because im 17🤣 Scratch that, I think Deepu is fine and i'll be satisfied with my Tejas!😃 Anway loved the update, Thanks for the PM and please do update soon!<333 Literally everytime i see your FF come on the forum and see the last person to reply is 'JustLikeThat1', I check it and your replying to people's comments and i get happy, Thats the first sign meaning your going to update soon!😆 Heyy look this is a real long comment now hehe :P Anyway Harini, Update sooon! : ) and thanks for the PM!
Originally posted by: sbp1971
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Just once I want to be first somewhere, but to my bad luck Chika beat me.😆 >sigh<
Okay now down to the comment, what can I say, it is once again perfect. I loved the fact that you showed everyone's feelings, including how Kinjal was feeling too.
Hmm..the way he gave her the roses during the party was my favorite part, and Deepu putting Savitaben in her place was executed brilliantly.
Harini this was a fabulous treat, thank you so much, and I am looking forward to the next part and the wedding.
Originally posted by: munnihyderabadrES
chika u beat me again😛***Edited ***ok harinin finally read it and i am at peace...very lovely update and the scenes were brilliant⭐️- the piece of the cake... Parag kinjal conversation👏...made me emotional in the scene 😭 wow what a way to write parag's view point about koki and her being strict and her raising her kids as her reflection👏.. can it get any better harini ... awesome... KoRag are something😳-this is scene is just written so brilliantly... parag being the perfect dad and perfect husband knowing koki's views and beliefs by heart👏-so girls having problem choosing jewelery that has to happen when there are so many-wow gohem scene haila...so adorable Ahemji... making gopi go weak in her knees😳 and deepu is the new KMH...😆 such a cute scene hariniwow cute little confusion ...Ahem get a hold ,.. ur wife is not running away😉- wow Ahem is running his own channel in the background with the roses for the lady in pink😳-Yaay JiDi finally engaged🥳loved the very cute and tiny scene in the kitchen😛-haila... how cute was deepu handling savithaben... koki nice backup for you... 😛precap - harini fab precap... gopi fell asleep in ahem's arms on the swing on the terrace,... how romantic is that😳 ... by the way what was he about to say😛will wait for the next one with the same excitement
Originally posted by: kaka.lg
very nice...and Gohem scene is always the best...thanks Harini
Originally posted by: tangamHarini got your pm and zipped thru the updated but it call for a cuppa cocoa and a huddled corner just me and my lappy ...that is df not gonna happen 2day...so will get back to you when I get my chance to read at my hearts content
Originally posted by: varshu27loved the update harini...got to see a wonderful side of parag...glad to see him stepping up to the plate...loved his convo with kinjal...ahem giving gopi pink roses all through the ceremony was romantic...loved how deepu handled savitaben...was a hear twarming update...thanks for the pm...
Originally posted by: sks21brilliant update harini...
it was good to see parag advising kinjal...loved their convo
and loved the ceremony it was very sweet...
and gohem just love them
cant wait to read the next update
Originally posted by: AhemjiLoved ur update😃. nice one😊. Continue soon.⭐️.
Originally posted by: kamjalIt was perfect, lovely update full of emotions...love Kijal parag talk...amaging having someone other than kokila shut Savitha for good.
Wished it was longer but looking forward to the next
Originally posted by: shruts18Harini I had read first 9 or 10 parts when you had started with it and I had really loving it then and donno how I missed it afterwardsAnd of course my lazy bones didnt let me comment then😆
Anyhow I went through the first 12 parts again and the story is outstanding and I am glad that finally I decided to read it 😊You are a doing a great job in your FF⭐️And I am really liking the story with how Ahem is going to realize his love for Gopi with other characters also playing their part in that!Keep up the good work 👍🏼And thank you so much🤗
Originally posted by: navyabreally wonderful update Harini...😊
loved how Kinjle is adjusting & waiting for her Mom & Ahem bhai's forgiveness...Liked Parag explaining Kinjle on how her mistake had effected Gopi...Both the brothers seem to be hopelessly in love with their companions 😊 ...Ahem just cannot seem to get enough of Gopi...all he can think is just her...& his love just keeps flowing for her...😉Loved how Deepu handled Savita Ben...she deserved it 😆Waiting for the next part 😊
Originally posted by: abbayawesome!!!👍🏼 great update indeed!👏! and thanks for the pm!!🤗
Originally posted by: ruchshahWow...a dreamy part!!
Thanks for the PM...truly delighted to recieve the next dose...😊update soon...
Originally posted by: Sandy914Harini.. So sweet.. I am just going crazy with Ahem's love to Gopi.. Jiger & deepu relation is very cute/..
For goodthing Kinja is changing hopefully that is not fake.. :)))
thank you Somuch for the PM & such lovely story...
Love u
Originally posted by: Debalina_Paulawesome one harini.. 😛 do continue wid the next one soon.. will be waiting eagerly..
Originally posted by: X.Sisi94Amazing Update Loved it
Originally posted by: swasthiHarini this was a super update and you sure was spot on with the feelings every character.
It was enjoyable reading Ahem's admiration for his wife and the father daughter talk as well.Looking forward to knowing more about the question Ahem was about to ask Gopi. Update soon.
Originally posted by: tina_1234amazin part !!
Originally posted by: NazmaJLoving all your updates!!!
My brain is on vacation though so I can't think of many words but I did absolutely adore it!!I will write more when I can think clearly!!!
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