Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

OS: It was that moment (Page 12)

..MorningStar.. IF-Dazzler
..MorningStar..
..MorningStar..

Joined: 13 March 2012
Posts: 3887

Posted: 30 April 2012 at 3:28am | IP Logged
perfect...Thumbs Up

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Addie07

-memorable- IF-Rockerz
-memorable-
-memorable-

Joined: 23 September 2010
Posts: 6851

Posted: 29 June 2012 at 5:23am | IP Logged
wow
one moment that changes life 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Addie07

WordStalker Groupbie
WordStalker
WordStalker

Joined: 12 July 2012
Posts: 58

Posted: 22 July 2012 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
Wow! How refreshing (and painful) to read something from Lavanya's POV! Glad she finds her soul mate in the end. She deserves to be happy, too!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Addie07

Happy-go-lucky Goldie
Happy-go-lucky
Happy-go-lucky

Joined: 04 July 2012
Posts: 1081

Posted: 22 July 2012 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Really, beautifully written... You described the emotions so wellSmile


Edited by Happy-go-lucky - 22 July 2012 at 2:19pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Addie07

sanyukta90 Senior Member
sanyukta90
sanyukta90

Joined: 16 May 2012
Posts: 254

Posted: 22 July 2012 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
Hi Lyraa,
             Lavanya's feelings were so poignantly expressed in your OS.Each sentence was full of emotions. It was brilliant.Loved the happy endingClapClapClap
swati-89 Goldie
swati-89
swati-89

Joined: 08 February 2012
Posts: 2269

Posted: 27 August 2012 at 5:16am | IP Logged
In all the FFs and SSs and OSs that i have read i had never come across any written from Lavanya's prospective, the girl who had been vengeful and spiteful and yet who had changed so drastically and become the sweet friend of her Chamkili, who had seen and understood their love even when they themselves hadn't done so.

I really liked reading something from her perspective. Liked the way u have put her thoughts out without even naming her.

lakraj80 IF-Dazzler
lakraj80
lakraj80

Joined: 05 April 2012
Posts: 3584

Posted: 28 August 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Tht was really really sweet.
UV_Arshi Senior Member
UV_Arshi
UV_Arshi

Joined: 17 March 2012
Posts: 686

Posted: 03 September 2012 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
wow..that was quite something..so moving. Thinking of it this way from Lavanya's point of view..such a brilliant thought. And so well executed! the writing is beautiful! emotions so well portrayed...my fav lines, 'it was that moment' & 'watching my dream through the eyes of a spectator'..wow..perfect! This for me is the best OS of your's that i've read so far..and they're all pretty good! Clap

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
SANRAJ*Moment** WATCHING Part 6** (P48 Pg143)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 142 143

Author: Shahara3   Replies: 1139   Views: 122485

Shahara3 1139 122485 24 July 2011 at 4:26pm by Angry_Birdie
That Moment (AR) One shot

2 3

Author: pritam_bablu   Replies: 16   Views: 2330

pritam_bablu 16 2330 18 June 2011 at 11:54pm by pritam_bablu
ThE mOmEnT wE kIsSeD....[AR]

2 3 4 5 6 7

Author: ksgmyluvmylyfff   Replies: 53   Views: 5499

ksgmyluvmylyfff 53 5499 27 April 2011 at 7:11am by Hellotomylife
The World Stopped That Moment AR FF Epilouge Pg99

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 97 98

Author: AR_LOVER   Replies: 782   Views: 107830

AR_LOVER 782 107830 26 March 2011 at 1:31am by shiv-sunaina
MayUr FF - Until The Last Moment (Ch. 4 - Pg 24)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 25 26

Author: -Sindhu-   Replies: 204   Views: 13815

-Sindhu- 204 13815 16 January 2011 at 2:51am by dynamic_doll

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index