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OS: It was that moment - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful work.👏 
Gives a thorough insight into Lavanya's feelings.😔😭 
Please PM me for all your future updates.
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the PM. Loved it. Happy that La found someone.
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Posted: 12 years ago
ARGH! YES! EXCITING! HOW EXCITING! La deserves all the happiness she can get, she's become such a sweet girl!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome as usual, Lyraa! :)
"Lyraaa LYRAA!!" *keeps chanting*
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmm it was truly fantastic lyraa... very few posts abt lavanya's POV right now..
 
even she might be hurt as much as khushi during diwali night.., poor girl.. good for her atleast now she has realised the truth and decided to move on...
 
very good post!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was grt...exactly portraying z emotions of lavanya :)
fnx 4 z pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was beautiful. Lavanya's feelings described her heart-broken situation. And then the flicker of hope  in a pair of softest warmest brown eyes I had ever seen. It was that moment...
I really do hope that Lavanya finds her someone. Thanks for the PM.
Edited by -Dee- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
So heart touching. Beautifully written.
I so love the ending though wish saw the face with the warmest brown eyes...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww superb
 
Just fabulous =)
 
Really liked the way you have wriiten la's emotions and all =)
 
Brilliant =)
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lyraa.
A beautiful OS hun.
You've penned Lavanya's thoughts and feelings perfectly.
I love the way she looks at Arnav and Khushi, as if with a fresh pair of eyes.
I'm glad she fell in the arms of someone she would love forever, and hopefully be loved in return.
Nicely done sweety.
Thanks for the PM.
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