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FF-BIRTHDAY GIRLS(UPDATED PART 8) (Page 19)

swaronfan Newbie
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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 2:08am | IP Logged
NILESH-
"IDHAR REY AUR SWAYAM HAIN PARESHAN"
"KAISE HOGE KRIYA AUR SHARON UNPE MEHERBAN"
"OH GOD MERI HAIN APSE YE REQUEST"
"HO JAYE PURA REY AUR SWAYAM KA YE QUEST"

Amazingly writtenClap

Flame.Of.Rose IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Yar plz jaldi post karo nae to mai pagal ho jaungi... Plz plz plz...
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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
it was awesome...loved it...waiting for part 6
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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 12:10am | IP Logged
Hey plz pm me too...

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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 12:11am | IP Logged
hey update soon...and PM me
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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 2:03am | IP Logged
WOW..!! this FF is wonderful...!!!!!! sooo CUTE...!!!!
 
please update soon...and please PM me when u do...!~
sukanyaa IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 3:31am | IP Logged
hey wonderful part...cant kriyaansh part...plz update it fast n do pm me wen update nxt...
anamika143.. IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 7:18am | IP Logged
PART 6:
  As soon as REY saw swayam hopping inside sharon's window, he quickly took the ladder and adjusted against kriya's window.To his relief, the window was open(coz kriya is afraid of darkness she keeps the window openSmile)
   He peeped in through the window, kriya was sleeping facing the window with the moonlight falling on her face, her face twinkling lyk a star(Starshe's lyk a starStar).REY stood on the ladder staring his star.Suddenly he realised wer he was standing and quickly tried to get inside the window...
BUT...
...AS he was trying to get in his leg dashed into some object placed by the window & fell inside the room with a thud...
KRIYA woke up due to the noise & started shouting...REY quickly dashed 2wards her and kept his palm over her mouth...
REY-Shhh!!!!! its me...
  (imagine kriya sleeping on her bed with her eyes wide open and rey leaning over her with his palm over her mouth)
REY got lost and started singing

"KABHI KABHI MERE DIL MAIN,
KHAYAL AATA HAIN,KE JAISE TUJKO BANAYA GAYA HAIN,
MERE LIYE,
TU ABSE PEHLE SITARO MAIN BAAS RAHI THI KAHI
TUJHE ZAMEEN PE BULAYA GAYA HAIN MERE LIYE"

((((look look hawa hawa))))
with ohohoho in the bg

Suddenly REY got up and kriya sat straight as well...
KRIYA(hyperactive mode)-
REY aap yaha kaise aaye,
is waqt,
kisi ne aapko dekh liya to,
oh universeji!!!!!,
ye rey ko kisi chizz se darr kyu nahi lagta,
rey aap yaha kyu aaye.

REY-Shhh!!!!!(keeping a finger on her lips)...baatcutter koi agar dekhega to yahi sochega ki ek bf apni gf ko milne aaya hain...(ohohohoho again)

SUDDENLY REY GOT UP STOOD STRAIGHT IN A TYPICAL GAONWALA STYLE (HAHAHA U ALL MUST HAVE GUESSED IT...)

REY(CHABILAL MODE)-
u ka hain na, humne e socha ki hamri girlfarend ka barthday hain to humne e socha ki wo tumka bish(wish) karde aur ha tumka gifat(gift bhi dede)...
   e lo filawars(flowers) and rey gave her bunch of flowers...
kriya(romaira)-wow chabilal u r so sweet...
then he gave her a big box and told her to open it...
inside there wer cards...
KRIYA-yeh kya hain...
REY-ye 17 cards hain un sab b'day ke liye jab main tumhare saath nahi tha...
KRIYA-awww rey u r so sweet!!!!! but i m 18!!!!
REY took out a big card frm his jacket and said-ye us b'day ke liye jo tum mere saath manaogi...
REY-ye sab maine apne haatho se banaya hain...
kriya got up hugged rey, kissed him on his cheeks and said-oh rey,
u r sooo sweet,"I LOVE U"
REY-"I LOVE U TOOO BAAT CUTTER"
REY- and last but nt the least, rey took out a box frm his jacket and opened it...inside was a diamond necklace...rey instructed kriya to turn around...
and apne haathon se kriya ko necklace pehnaya ...
KRIYA hugged rey again...
REY(breaking the hug)-DANCE?????...
and they danced on kaisa yeh ishq hai(same as kriyaansh were dreaming in kriya's bed room, but for real)...


PRECAP:THE RAIPRAKASH FAMILY GATHERING(HEHE IT WOULD BE FUN)

HEY frnds hws it???
less people giving me long commentsCry
hahaha...but u will have to now...
and do hit d lyk button lyk always...

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