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I Won't Fall In Love With You...*Manveer FF* Pg 60 (Page 59)

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Posted: 20 May 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by thejazzgal

Nice update ..

do cont sooonn... 

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Posted: 20 May 2012 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Surya.Ravi

please update soon..Smile

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Posted: 20 May 2012 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tvlover92

 First and foremost, your Author's Note cracks me up!!  

The best ones:
- *recalls a coconut* *yummy*
In the next part, Manayata behaves like a civilized person *hard to believe* and Unnati takes her brother's side *Unlike the devil Unnati in DEK*
ROFLROFLROFL

Anyways, the update: 

Oh, poor Uday Ouch He isn't spared here nor is he spared there. Ouch 

LOL Great update, Mahak! Big smile

Can't wait for civilized Manyata [*coughcough* - You are right. It is hard to believe Tongue

Looking forward to the next update! Do PM me!

TC.


Hahaha... My author's note is only noticed by you!

Well, Manyata is awesome here... unlike there :/ My manyata is sensible and despite her hatred *rolls eyes* for uday... she wont ridicule him.


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Posted: 20 May 2012 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --ANGEL--

hey mahak...Smile..
 
awesome update..Clap...loved reading udays point-of-view..Thumbs Up...but also wanted to read manyatas point of view to...Ermm... or atleast what was going on in her dream while sleeping..Sleepy...looks like manyata is tempting uday too much *winks*.Wink...plz try to mae the parts a bit more lengthier..Unhappy...once i start reading, i dont feel like to stop reading..Smile...so i read it over and over again..Embarrassed...ur ffs are addictive.Evil Smile...after waiting for a whole week i was waiting for some intense romantic part..Day Dreaming...but i guess the story is just beginning...Smile...will wait eagerly 4 the next part...Big smile...
 
with love
angel...Heart...
 
p.s - i think u should post ur os on manveer in dek forum and also post original ones in ur thread and link it to the manveer post too...this way people who are not in ur pm list will also read the os...and people who are from other forums will also read it...like my suggestion?..Big smile...


Well, I don't exactly have enough words to thank you right now.

Well, you are right. I love your suggestion. :D


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Posted: 20 May 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged

Hi... I am back. Thank you so much for being there with me :)

I know that this time, I took almost 3 months! I am EXTREMELY sorry for that. Really. I have been sooo lazy and then caught up with my end-sems and then became lazy... I know that this is NO excuse, but forgive me plz?

All of those lovely comments, made me blush... various times! and also I had this ghost of a smile... every time I read a comment. Also, I couldn't reply properly to every comment because of shortage of time.

And wait a second... 92 LIKES? Are you serious? Seriously, you all flatter me so much... Thank you. Also, the still frequent buddy-requests that I get or Anchal gets, make me feel honoured.

Thank you... for motivating me to update :)

thahu,  coolhappygirls,  laila889,  greenbutterfly,  sheeza98,  heyittsme,  Prachi_12,  Tahreem-Ali1,  niniinavinahun
,  -SweetDreams-,  hermione24,  missblue,  a.anu,  Manveerfan123,  princessaaliya,  arya009Arieltabi,  ultravioletray,  kajenvirman,  Zaynmohin,  tejuangel,  Nakita19,  K.K.Monster,  kkate,  tvlover92Manahil192,  linete,  akshaaya,  suria1,  Peda,  hp07,  chitra_rao,  nuts,  sheena_123,  soulful,  nina282Udaykideewani,  sweet_charmed,  -divya-,  illa8,  shivu124,  Vampgirl,  aditee_00,  Suman_4_NivRenCleviveDsouza,  Kajol17,  salekh1,  love...OMG,  Ritika_11,  capriya,  shrarrti,  luvzindagi,  sanj1234Hubze,  -JEHAN-,  princessofkesar,  dreamyjennice,  Shals9,  MsLuscious,  _Simmy_loveArnavnUday,  nityah,  moksha89,  prachurya,  austenrox,  bluedreamz953,  filmyprincessnidzlovekinrul,  Nirjhor105,  dmg_roks_antara,  gopi06,  *|Heena|*,  -Tannu-,  shiv-gauri4evadbr_kmichi,  --ANGEL--,  -Vishwa-,  zigzagway_sadi,  rsk16,  minizz,  jasminedayal,  rainurubal...Binny...,  arryline,  Phoenix.Xeelan,  -Priya01,  thejazzgal,  adventure_gurl,  -Swetha-,  dumasbrainychild92,  Surya.Ravi

Thank you... Each one of you.. For being there :)

Thanks to all the above readers for pressing the LIKE tab and letting me know of their support :)

And to all those who commented, I have replied back to each one of you. Thank you. <3

I have added each one of you to my PM list :) And anyone, who wants to be added for this FF, can comment here and be automatically added to the PM list :)

Love you ALL... Immensely!

- Mahak


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Posted: 20 May 2012 at 11:46am | IP Logged

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- This update is dedicated to Arya... for encouraging me to update this one.. on my FB page :)

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 5.
Manyata's pov-


I got up to the rays of sunlight falling on my face. I stretched and heard a voice saying, "Ahah princess. Wrong move. Don't stretch. Or I would end up doing something you won't like, only… enjoy."


I immediately got conscious. I got down from the bed, all ready to pounce on him like a tigress. I made my way towards the dressing table, where he was currently applying some gel to his hair.


He was standing there, wearing black t-shirt with blue faded jeans. I saw that his usual smirk was missing. His smile was almost…fake. I noticed everything yet I kept quiet. He suddenly turned around and looked at me with hollow eyes. What the hell is wrong?


I wanted to fight with him, but before I could say anything, he said, "Please Manyata. Not today. Usually, I love fighting with you but today, I am not feeling like that. So, save it. I have to rush somewhere. Goodbye."


There was something gravely wrong with him. He was never this…quiet. He looked as if he was hurt. Was I the one who had hurt him? Did I do something wrong? Was I wrong in my assessment of his character? As he made his exit, I felt thoughts enclosing me.


After all, he wasn't the only one who was drawn in the kiss. Even I wanted it to happen.


God! What is wrong with me? Why am I thinking so much about a simple kiss-that-did-not-happen? Maybe, I need a shower. Yeah, that will calm me down.


After getting all washed up, I sat down on my dressing table. It was huge and there were all kinds of cosmetics on it. Uday had already taken care of everything.


A soft smile came on my face, as I realized how much that fine specimen of male species, took care of me. Why was he doing so, I had no idea. Why was he making my life easier?


Clad in a red transparent type, plain saree with beautiful blouse, I combed my hair. I applied all the cosmetics and even finished the effect with the jewellery. But when it came to sindoor, I felt different.


It was as if, applying that held some grave importance. I could not do it myself. I know it sounds very foolish, romantic and childish - but I had always dreamt that after marriage, I will make my husband apply it on my maang, every single day.


But, should I hold on to this dream? I mean, Uday is not exactly the one I wanted. Should I go and ask him to apply it for me? What if he said no? Or worse, laughed on me? Why am I even thinking about it?


I came out of my thoughts, as I realized that Udayveer had entered our room. 'Our' room felt so strange on my tongue. But then, everything belonged to us. God. I am hopeless. He was searching for some documents in the cupboard. I made my decision and went towards him.


"Udayveer?" I said in a meek voice.


Without looking up, he said, "Abhi nahi princess. I am busy. Baad mein lad lena."


This made me realize if I always fought with him. Had I really, never, paid attention to him? Was I always fighting? Now that we are married, this had to change. I refuse to fight with my husband, unless necessary. Despite my hatred for him, I cannot let myself forget that he is my husband.


I went and nudged him. As he looked up at me, I gestured towards the sindoor-case in my hand.


When he looked dumbly at me, I simply said, "Dekh Udayveer. Hum dono ek doosre se nafrat karte hain. Yeh shadi bhi nafrat ki buniyaad par tiki hui hai. Par iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki hum yeh bhool jaayein ki hamari shaadi sach mein hui hai. Aur main chahti hun ki tu meri maang mein sindoor bhar kar, apna farz nibhaaye. Yahi sahi hai."


He was shocked. Well, it's better than him laughing at me. He quickly came out his trance and smeared my forehead with sindoor.


Even though this was nothing, but somehow, this gesture felt intimate. I am stupid for considering it, but it felt like the most romantic thing for him to do. It was like we had overcome some kind of barrier between us and had moved one level ahead.


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That's it for today :) Hope you liked this one. *eager to know*

 I hope that it was up to the mark. I am extremely genuinely sorry for the late thing! * apologies with her big puppy eyes*

I know that this update was not up to the mark. It was just a filler update.

How many of you will like Manyata manaofying Uday? *me wud* Do tell me what you wish to see in the next update. I will look forward to listening that. And one of your ideas will definitively be selected!

Waiting desperately for your encouraging reviews *puppy face* Please do leave some *innocent eyes*

- love, Mahak




Edited by ...Mahak... - 20 May 2012 at 12:15pm

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Posted: 20 May 2012 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Hey Mahak. I read this FF of yours in one go and I'm loving it Smile
I love how you described Uday's feelings in so much detail. Eagerly waiting for the next part. When are you updating it??

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Posted: 20 May 2012 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fia21

Hey Mahak. I read this FF of yours in one go and I'm loving it Smile
I love how you described Uday's feelings in so much detail. Eagerly waiting for the next part. When are you updating it??

Thank you so much Fia :)

I am glad that you love it.

Well, Uday has always been VERY close to my heart. So, thanks.

and I updated :)

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