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Dekha Ek Khwaab

I Won't Fall In Love With You...*Manveer FF* Pg 60 (Page 13)

FragranceOfLove IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged

Literally, I am overwhelmed with love and affection.

I never thought that I would get SO much of love and care, here also. Thank you so much. There simply aren't enough words :)

Today, when I opened my friend's ID, I got 15 pending buddy requests and I was like 'OMG! Really?' Trust me when I say, that I owe it to you all.

Besides, the sizzling chemistry of Manveer, your comments are the only thing that motivates me to update sooner than possible :)

Thank you... Each one of you.. For being there :)


Thanks to all the above readers for pressing the LIKE tab and letting me know of their support :)

And to all those who commented, I have replied back to each one of you. Thank you. <3

I have added each one of you to my PM list :)

- Mahak

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FragranceOfLove IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged


Manayata's pov-

As I entered 'my' new room, I saw it was bigger than I expected. But then, everything is so classy. I don't know how I would cope-up with everything. I am not prepared for this... I never will be.

Uday is one person... I hate the most in this world. I don't like him at all. I HATE him. He has spoiled my life... distanced me from my reality. Since I met him, I just lost everything. And to think that I am married to him... what a joke!

I gazed at the centre bed, decorated with roses and jasmines. I love jasmines. I was just looking around and observing everything, when I saw Unnati and Jainandini entering the room.

Unnati smiled and said, "Bhabhi, kaisa laga aapko bhaiya ka... I mean, apna naya kamra?"

Unnati is one person, I can't hold grudges to. She always seemed to smile and talk to me politely. She is my friend... my only friend after Chiki and Soni. She supported me when no one else would. It's not her fault, that her brother is so damn irritating.

I smiled and said, "Bahut acha hai. Kam se kam us khadoos Uday se zyada acha. Warna pata nahi main yahan kaise rehti... haan nahi toh."

She laughed, while Jainandini gave me an irritated glance. I wish she disappears. I can't believe that God can be so cruel to make her my sister!

Unnati said, "Bhabhi, aap thodi der rukiye. Main dada se nek lekar, unhe aapke paas bhejti hun."

She went away, before I could stop her. Who wants to see Uday? I would love if he doesn't even come. Huh. Stupid, irritating... husband! Shit.

Jainandini broke my line of thoughts and said, "Tumne Uday ko hamse hamesha ke liye cheen liya. Uske baad bhi tumhe chain nahi hai kya?"

Who asked her to open her big mouth? I had decided that no matter what, I won't fight with her today. But I think she can't keep her mouth shut.

I replied, "Bandariya, apna muh toh tu band hi rakh. Badi aai mujhe samjhaane waali ki kya sahi hai aur kya galat. Aur rahi baat Uday ki, mujhe kabhi se nahi chahiye tha woh. Tu hi rakhle use...aur -"

Before I could continue with my little rant, someone said, "Tsk. Tsk. Mrs. Udayveer Manyata... humein aapse yeh ummeed nahi thi. Bhala koi apni hi suhaag-raat ke din apne pati ke bare mein aise shabd bolta hai kya?"

I looked back to see him entering the room. He was all decked up in a white sherwani with red embroidery. Even though I don't want to admit, he is extremely handsome. If I didn't already hate him so much, I surely would have admired him.

From the corner of my eye, I saw Jainandini exit the room, and Udayveer locking the door. What the hell? He won't touch me... would he?


That's it for today :) Hope you liked this one.

The next one is a little romantic one... in which Manayata finally learns another side of Udayveer. So, stay tuned :)

And the parts would be short... coz i wud be updating every now and then :)

Waiting desperately for your encouraging reviews :)

- Mahak

Edited by ...Mahak... - 20 December 2011 at 10:06am

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Awesome update girl... Yaar... I loved the 'Mrs. Udayveer Manayata' part :D

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lakshyasss IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged
i was reading it when u pm me..its great chappy...
loved it thnx to pm...

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lamz325 Senior Member

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged
awesome update! i loved it! can't wait for the next chapter! do pm me!

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Kya baat hai yaar keep it up!!! Clap

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SRJKiMahakaali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Thanks 4 ur update dear

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--ANGEL-- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 11:10am | IP Logged
hey mahak...Smile..
awesome part...Thumbs Up..liked manyata atleast admitting to herself that he is handsome...Wink...(its a start Big smile)...jaynandini still didnt get over him even after his marriage...LOL...why did u stop?...Disapprove..i wanted to read more..Ermm...plz update soon...soon means tomorrow.LOL...dying to see what happens at their suhaag-raat..Embarrassed...
p.s - will send u the pics tomorrow...Smile

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