Originally posted by: Manahil192Woahh man dat was a ride of epic-intense emotions one thing fr sure i will fall in love wid ur ff*winks* oh wait i have*sticks her tongue out* ur da first person i noe who ryts exactly like how i do givin ma action details in brackets..im nt tawkin bout da ff *scared* well sry buh i can neva stand shoulders wid ya U R SIMPLY OWSUM*too hard to frget nd too hrd to resist ur ff* evn if dey r shrt hawtt yet sweet ...mwuahxx one conphusion :p ur mahak r anchal?
Originally posted by: ...Binny...Mahak.. Loved it.. you have portrayed UV's confusion and desperation to protect yet never fall in love so beautifully.. Can't wait for the next part update soon..😛
Originally posted by: sheeza98hey
just read both parts 4 and 5 and they were great as usual. your parts might be short but they are very explanatory. you have given good reasoning as to why manyata and uday don't want to "fall in love" with each other. bechaare...yeh bhi nahin jaante ke pyaar to already ho chuka hai...bas kahin chhupa hai...zaahir hone ki der hai!waiting for the next part.sheeza.
Originally posted by: sheeza98oops sorry. i meant i just read both parts 3 and 4 (not 4 and 5)!!
see the effect maanveer have...sab kuch bhoolva dete hain!
Originally posted by: Add123Heyy Mahak , its nice to see you here on India Forums, I have been a silent reader of ur FF on ur blog, and I must say I enjoy it tremendously ... :)
Lovely Concept ... and plz do PM me when you next update, Cheerz. x
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