I Won't Fall In Love With You...*Manveer FF* Pg 60 - Page 28

Megha

@IndigoBlues

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

short but sweet and effective...😳 this just makes me more eager to read your longer works! 😃 waiting for the fourth chapter...also, i have exams, so you might see me missing, but do count me as one a regular reader. 😳

megz.😳

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kkate

@kkate

Groupbie

Posted: 12 years ago

👏 you r really great .i am feeling really sad about uday .

and eagerly waiting for there romantic scenes .

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ninii

@ninii

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

lovely but i felt this one too short wished it was more longer...well fantastic

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Mahak..! Kiara HATES YOU! U promised a BIGGER UPDATE but no madam updates after 2 bloody long weeks and so SHORT. I hate you though I love the update hmph..*scrunches her nose* hate u hate u hate u.

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â™ªáƒ¦â™¥Jazzy..!â™ªáƒ¦â™¥

@thejazzgal

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

nice :)

do cont soon with a long update :)

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minizz

@minizz

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

I loved the chapter.Uday's reaction was good.Please update soon😊

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Ask me (;

@Hot.Pink.Heels

IF-Rockerz

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

tht was nice :)

thnx for the pm and update soon!

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--ANGEL--

@--ANGEL--

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

hey mahak...😊...

awesome part..👏...loved how u displayed both their emotions..👍🏼...but again small part!!!..😔...plz try to update sooner..🤔...anyways felt a little sad for uday but i guess manyata was just sticking to her character....congrats on the increase in no. of readers..😃...may ur ff get more sucessful each day.🤗...btw i like ur siggie...👍🏼...better than the previous one..😉...

with love

angel...❤️..

p.s - thanx 4 the reply...🤗...and do u want more pics of recent episodes?..😊...pm me or reply to this mesg if u want the pics...😃

Edited by --ANGEL-- - 12 years ago

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Preet

@shrarrti

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

This is great Mahak! I wish it had been a little longer. I love how you go into detail about what each character is thinking! We don't have a lot of guess work to do! How soon can we expect these promised romantic scenes? 😃

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salekh1

@salekh1

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

😛Thank you so muchf or the PM

I lvoed the update

Pleaseee contniueee sooon

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