Originally posted by: arrylineAwesome part👏👏👏.I'm already craving for more😳.You have actually captured Manveer's emotions in a suttle manner.Please update the further part soon😊
Originally posted by: KaShfan7damn that was too good! please add me to your pm list!
Originally posted by: mjht_oneOMG it awesome yaar...aww they were so close and they nearly kissed...
i m really enjoying reading ur FF
Originally posted by: VampgirlHey mahak, Fantastic update 👏...really loved it... they nearly kissed 😳 ...i'm already in deamland 😍 ...
do continue soon
Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadiI replied, "You know what? Jab tum hamare liye itni rang birangi bhasha ka istemaal karti ho na, toh hamein bada acha lagta hai. Lekin yeh sab chodo. Aaj in baton mein samay barbaad karne ki jagah, I would prefer to do romance." OMG..he rembmers all these things.. So cute..
really loved the part.. but it was short..
continue soon..
thanks for the pm...
take care
Originally posted by: Tanya.angelAwesome story.. gal..!!
It's freakin' great..!!!Please add me to your PM List! 😉
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