Bade Acche Laggte Hai

FF My Prediction track- 7th Jan Pg 35 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow another bombblasting update u r a born writer luved it do continue soon dear serial m to pata nai Kb define Kong milega bas parh k h kush ho Jane he

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Posted: 12 years ago
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
but sitll
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update.extraordinary.please keep dating .your FF is a life saver.or the wait for the episodes is killing me.Thanks Nehaji
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Posted: 12 years ago
😃 such a brilliant update hats offf u are the coolest!
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Anusha: Thanks so much
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@Anu: dnt know about BT right now i am happy writing this one :-) Aapki khwaish sar aankho par...
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊 thanku ... neha.    waiting 😍 for the update

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey nodi waiting 4 ur prediction update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Vikram: Toh kya ab hum party continue kar sakte hain?

Ram: Kaisi Party?

Vikram: Wah beta...tera kaam ho gaya toh dosto ko bhul gaya...are humne ab tak khana bhi nahi khaya hain...

Ram: Are toh jake khaa lo

Rajan: Common Ram ...are yaar main parso wapas jaunga...thodi der toh hamare sath rehlo...

Ram looks at Priya 

Rajan: Are Priya ki taraf kyun dekh rahe ho? Bhabhi aapko  koi problem agar aap log kuch der hamare sath waqt bitaye...

Priya: Nahi toh mujhe koi problem nahi hain...

Ram gives an angry look to Priya...

Vikram comes near Ram...: Thodi der ruk ja phir chale jana 

Ram agrees...

All come back to the table...and are seated.

Ram sits besides Priya...

Everyone is having dinner and Ram is trying to get Priya's attention...Seeing that she is busy with everyone...Ram takes out his phone and msgs Priya

Priya, you are looking gorgeous...sleeveless looks good on you...

Beep Beep

Priya looks at her phone whereas Ram feigns ignorance...

Priya reads the sms and blushes...

Neha: Priya kya hua tum itni khush kyun ho

Priya: errr kuch nahi woh khana bahut hi achha hain

Neha: Kya...tum aur khana ...yaar tumne toh fatty ki lines cheen li...wah kya baat hain 

Priya: Neha...bas karo

Ram : Chalo mera ho gaya...

Neha: Are kya chalo...how rude Ram...mujhe pata hain tum biwi ko long drive pe le jane ke liye utawle ho par yaar ...

Ram looks at Vikram for help...

Vikram: Neha...jane do inhe yaar kyun tang kar rahi ho? 

Neha: Thik hain...bhai ab kya keh sakte hain...

Ram: Band karo yeh melodrama...chalo hum chalte hain...Rajan thanks for everything yaar...

Rajan: My pleasure Ram...bye and take care aur meri bhabhi ka khayal rakhna...

Ram and Priya leave after bidding good byes...

While walking to the car...both are nervous...and their hands touch each other...leaving a sensuous feeling...

Priya looks the other way...thinking to herself : Relax Priya...relax kar...

Ram thinking : Yeh halka sa touch itna electrifying tha...what will happen when i touch those lips...

They reach the car...and drive back home..

Ram: Priya

Priya: Ji

Ram: Tumhe mujhse kuch kehna hai? 

Priya: Ji nahi toh...

Ram: Ohh mujhe laga k kuch kehna hoga...

Ram to himself: Are yaar yeh to conveniently bhul chuki hain ki ise bhi mujhse I love you kehna chahiye...kya karun kaise pucho?

Ram: Vikram Neha ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hain

Priya : Hmm dono bahut hi sweet hain

Ram:   Tum bura na mano to hum ghar ke bajaye thoda drive pe chale...i know its very late par

Priya: Ji chaliye na

Both reach Marine drive and are sitting on the pavement facing the sea...

Ram: Priya...i am once again sorry...maine jo bhi bartav kiya hain

Priya: Its ok Mr. Kapoor...yeh sab baatein jane dijiye ab

Ram: Mujhe kehne do Priya...tumhara yeh sab janana bahut zaruri hain. Mera parivaar...yani ke bauji...meri sagi maa, apeksha aur main, hum log dadi aur dadji ke sath bahut khush the...sab kuch tha hamare pass...Dheere Dheere Bauji kam mein busy hote gaye aur unmein aur maa mein thodi duriyaan aa gayi...Jab main bada hua maine business sambhalna shuru kiya...tab bauji bahut bimar pad gaye aur hospital mein aakhiri saanse lete waqt unhone apni dusri shaadi ke bare mein mujhe bataya aur unke is dusre parivaar ki zimmedari mujh par saupi...Maa is baat se bahut naaraz huyi aur woh Apeksha ko lekar ghar chodke chali gayi...Bas tab se le ke aaj tak...main apne bauji ko diya wachan nibha raha hun...Main janta hun koi mujhse pyar nahi karta...

Priya: Aap aisa kyun keh rahe hain ki aapse koi pyar nahi karta...Daadi, Rishabh, Natasha, Vikram Neha...sabhi aapse bahut pyar karte hain...

Ram keeps his hand on Priya's : Aur

Priya: Aur...woh...Priya's heart starts beating faster and her cheeks go crimson red...

Ram: Aur?

Priya lowering her eyes...Main

Ram: Main kya

Priya: Main bhi

Ram: Main bhi kya?

Priya: Ram ...bas kijiye ab

Ram: Kya bas karo? Tum kya keh rahi ho?

Priya: Maine abhi kahan aapse

Ram: Wahi puch raha hun...kya keh rahi ho?

Priya: Main ...Main bhi aapse pyar karti hun...saying this Priya is looking down unable to face Ram...

Ram: Priya...dekho meri taraf...

Slowly Priya raises her face to look at Ram...: I love you Priya...

Priya in a low voice: I love you too 

At that pristine moment the sun rises behind them...both look at it and smile...

Ram: Dekho Priya...hamara pyar sach much ek nayi subah leke aaya hain...aur is subah ka rang toh dekho...tumhare chehre se perfect matching hain...crimson red

Priya: Aap bhi na Mr. Kapoor...chaliye ab ghar nahi jana?

Ram: Chalo

In the car Ram starts on the radio...

Priya: Aap aur Radio...aap thik toh hain na

Ram: Haan mana ki main besura gata hun par radio pe toh achhe gane bajte hain na...

Ram takes out his cell and quickly types a message...

RJ: Good Morning...Namaskar..Aadab...shuru karte hain aaj ka yeh behtarin din ...toh good morning wish kijiye aur bhejiye ek pyari si request aapke apno k liye...

Aur hamare pass pehli request aa chuki hain...

Bhejne wale likhte hain...yeh agla gana meri patni ke naam jinse main bahut pyar karta hun...par unse yeh kehna chahta hun k...dosto yeh bahut hi unusual si request hain...pati dev keh rahe hain...Meri patni se kahiye ki plz mujhe Mr. Kapoor na bulaye...mera ek naam hain jo unke hothon se bahut hi pyara lagega...

Toh Mrs. Kapoor agar aap sun rahi hain toh plz...aapke pati ko naam se bulayiye...

Priya looks in shock at Ram and Bade Achhe lagte hain song plays on the Radio...

Ram gives a sheepish smile and raises one eyebrow at Priya...Priya smiles to herself and nods her head ...thinking  purey pagal hain yeh Mr...nahi Ram...

To be continued!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee...

u r tooo good...

plz cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
😃 u are a saviour when the epis of the serial are goin berserk thanks and continue soon yar.