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ArHi SS: Vertigo - Completed [Sequel link on Page 1] (Page 71)

Rasgulla_sp IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 11:38am | IP Logged
My final comment to this story.

I've never done this before for a completed story, that is to review each chapter individually. But for Vertigo i absolutely had to. It's easily amongst the top 3 stories that I've read on IF on Arnav and Khushi.

The story is really very simple but the treatment is poetic. Yes, that is what this story is. Poetry masked as prose. Each update had so many sentences that would leave me speechless with the sheer beauty of your narration. You described emotions and the complexities created by it really well.

I had just chanced upon this story and thank God i did.

Thankfully it is a completed story. Between two of your updates you had taken a couple of months to update. Good i wasn't reading it then. I would have died of impatience.

My sources tell me that you have three more stories going, 35 MM, the Noob and the Thoughtful and Waves and Particles. But you've not updated those in a long time. Please continue those stories. I would love to read more of your work.

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story with us

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 15 August 2013 at 4:02am

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Posted: 04 April 2013 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
I would easily throw Nicholas Sparks book, if I ever get a chance to pick your writing over his. I am in awe with the story, and bashing myself for missing out on this amazing story. A year later, this story was recommended to me (Rasgulla_sp), and I wouldn't mind reading it all over again. 

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 10:55am | IP Logged

Awesome story...written really good Smile

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 7:49am | IP Logged
This story is so well written, I heard music when I was reading this, beautiful and poetic!
Lovely...

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Oh n 'rasgulla', thanks for this wonderful recommendation!

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
This is one of the best Arshi FFs. The way you described everybody's feelings is just too good! I could feel Khushi's pain when Arnav was on the business trip with Lavanya. Also you have written Lavanya's character and her feelings so well! No other FF, not even the show, has actually done justice to her character.
 
In short, I just loved your FF!

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 7:11am | IP Logged
Cool story. Awesome epilogue. Very
romantic

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Posted: 19 April 2013 at 6:50pm | IP Logged

This is such a lovely story! Simple yet beautiful, one that made me smile contentedly at the end.. You are a superb writer, I will definitely lookout for any other stories written by you.. :)

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