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ArHi SS: Vertigo - Completed [Sequel link on Page 1] (Page 69)

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Posted: 31 March 2013 at 9:54am | IP Logged
wow..i loved ur story. It is simply awesome story. Love ur writing style.
Thank you Rasgulla_sp  for providing the link of this story.

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Posted: 31 March 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
This story was really beautiful and very well written. I just loved how you progressed it from an attraction to friendship and then to love in a natural way instead of forcing it. Hope you start writing more on Arhi, as you are very talented!

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Posted: 31 March 2013 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
For chapter 9-

Love is in the air.

Love is in the air, in the office related book that is being read at home, in the name of the owner of the book, in the soft voice, in the small smile, in the caress to the name on the book, love is there for Payal to perceive.

Love is in the air, in the personal time and space they have created for themselves at work before work, in the discussion of everyday happenings, in the light banter, in the conscious forgetting of the fact that he's the boss and has a girlfriend, in the compulsion to update her about his absence, in the pain experienced on knowing that, in the steps taken closer when he should actually be going back, in the barely veiled emotions, in the need to see into her eyes and in the need to not let him see them, in not bartering attraction for sympathy or kindness, love is there for Arnav to turn back when he doesn't want to so that people don't misunderstand their presence together.

Love is in the air, in the way Khushi's eyes sought Arnav's on learning that Lavanya is accompanying him, in his instant yet formal explanation to her about the need to take Lavanya, in her good bye wish when she calls him sir as a pretence before Lavanya so that she doesn't understand what isn't to be revealed, in the frown on his face, in her turning back from them, love is there for Lavanya to comprehend that while Arnav and she were miles apart even when together, Arnav and Khushi are together whatever the gap- financial, economical, social, educational...

When love is in the air it's bound to hurt someone...

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 31 March 2013 at 12:35pm

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Posted: 31 March 2013 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Beautiful story. The way ou have described the surreal communications was awesome. I read the conversation between Arnav and his parents twice.
Just brilliant !!

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Posted: 31 March 2013 at 4:56pm | IP Logged
Thanks to Saiyu, I read this story... It really holds the beauty of a tranquil poem.. well versed...

Loved the story...

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Posted: 31 March 2013 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
For chapter 10-

There are so many sentences, so much of narration that i liked in this chapter, i feel that if i start quoting it all you won't really appreciate hearing your own words again.

So, pain.

Khushi. Pain in being forced to be tied to someone else, in forever paying for making the right decision for one's family, for putting up a docile face in front of the society, pain in hiding one's tears from the family, in holding on to the love of her sibling- her only constant, in waking up to the reality, in the helplessness with the struggle, pain in unrequited love...

Lavanya. Pain in being affected by a man whom you don't affect, in blushing only to be met with wonderment in his eyes, in the acceptance that her relationship is stilted, in the confession of one's love when that man has emotionally moved on, pain of unrequited love...

Arnav's acceptance of the change in him caused by Khushi was beautifully portrayed, and in just one impactful sentence...

I liked this similarity you showed. Women in the society being considered as lesser beings. Be it Khushi in her home or Lavanya in the boardroom...

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Posted: 31 March 2013 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
beautiful story. very well written.

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Posted: 01 April 2013 at 6:52am | IP Logged
so much feelings, so much love...so well written 

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