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ArHi SS: Vertigo - Completed [Sequel link on Page 1] (Page 59)

-Dee- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 11:35am | IP Logged
I know... I know.. I am not reading this FF so I have absolutely no right to be here but I was just sneaking in trying to give it a silent readers read and leaving behind a like when I notice something. Something which is the cause of a little hope... Sookie, Infinity is a beautiful word and it will become more endearing the day you say it is not a taboo.LOLSmileWink

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sonia_92 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
like I said before, this is, for me, the.perfect practical fairy tale. The magical story. The simple yet beautiful and truly a dream. It's like living a fairy tale in words, like living in words the fairy tale you've grown up imagining in your head, the perfect love story, the perfect happily ever after.

so beautiful. i truly feel so happy for having read this story and no matter what I can never praise you enough for this beautiful concept. its a simple concept but it becomes magical with the way you decide to write it, the way you present it, the words you choose, the actions you portray, the characters you build and the situations you create to lead your story to that ultimate fairy tale ending and you have managed to it so well It's commendable.

let me know when you start with your next story

till then, adios ;)
boyznaka IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6224

Posted: 05 October 2012 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Thyme

Originally posted by boyznaka

Originally posted by Thyme

Originally posted by boyznaka

Wait, I ahve perfect timing or what? Big smileDancing

Freakishly perfect timing LOL

I posted and in less than a moment, you had commented...i was like 'ehhh'

I commented and saw the purple font above and I was like Shocked

Oh yeah... i have this annoying OCD which is - first post of any FF is index, two line summary and title have a specific structure - <Title> <Chapter number> <page number> <date>. And this purple color has been my signature for a while. But I think I am little over purple color LOL

Finishing an FF/SS is euphoric!

LOL It's kinda creepy but I did notice that once. LOL
Haha the purple color is surely unique! Keep it, so it's easier for us to understand the next time Sookie becomes Thyme/Coriander/Basil etc LOL

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.vrshn. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Gosh Such a beautiful ending! You made me cry! Such a warm update! Beautiful! I'm going to miss this story :(
Stapleton IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 11:58am | IP Logged
superb ending.

thanks 4 d pm
kvarsha IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5416

Posted: 05 October 2012 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
awesomeee onee...
i must sayyy its was beautifully writtenn...
i loved the arnav saying one linee...
"we made one damn awesome kid" ROFL
tht was awesome and side by side khush blusing LOLLOL...
 a happy ending ..
thnx 4 pmBig smile
Dalmuthuya IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4931

Posted: 05 October 2012 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Would it be cheesy if I said there were tears in my eyes for this chapter? Lol Beautiful, beautiful ending.. loved it <3 SO glad I found this story and I hope you keep getting more views. 
moomin4455 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 08 March 2012
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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Cry So exquisitely beautiful, worded elegantly and yet filled with emotion. But there are little descriptive touches which I found wonderful; Arnav's daughter - her earrings 'kissing her cheeks'...
And still the love, not overwhelming sensual passion, though I am sure it is there, sated by their bond, their marriage, the respect, the friendship and the depth of emotion between Arnav and Khushi shines through the page. 

I adored this story...I am so glad you didn't make it overly complicated, but sweet. Sometimes in life it really isn't that complicated - it was good to read something simply plotted but with the brevity of longing that lies between two people falling in love and the contentment of being with each. Brava!! Clap

Edited by moomin4455 - 05 October 2012 at 1:07pm

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