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ArHi SS: Vertigo - Completed [Sequel link on Page 1] (Page 48)

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ASRandKKGSRFan

Hey!
 
A beautifully written chapter - no doubt! Big smile
 
Emotional. Vulnerable. Sweet. Heart warming and the list is endless.
 
I'm sooo waiting for the next chapter!
 
Please PM me the next update. Thanks!


Thanks and welcome. :-) Update will be sometime during weekend.

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 11:05am | IP Logged
that was the sweetest thing i read in such a long time... pls continue soon..  loved it Smile

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Wow!!! Just bought up with this amazing FF...
And it's so well written!!!!
Im a sucker for office romance..and this was so differently described,written...I'm stumped!
Though I felt bad for lavanya...eat happened was good for her...she deserves better :)

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
oh dear , where have you been.hiding.this beauty ? I feel like I'm in love after such a long time <3
this story is love, the concept is.brilliant.and the way you have portrayed arnav and khushi's realization of.their feelings for echo other , especially arnav's, is heart warming

oh this is such a beauty, truly a breathtaking.story

please please please.add.me to your pm list and pm me whenever you update , although I'm going to be stalking you very regularly

cheers
sonia

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 8:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by littlemoi

The conversation between Arnav and his parents was amazing and so perfect!! The ending with Khushi and Arnav in the office finally confessing their love to each other was so simple and unique... I loved it!!
This chapter is definitely one of my most favourite updates from this story!
And lastly this definition of love completely blew me away!
 
"Love is a million things and love is nothing. It can be the first gasp of air a drowning man takes after being under water for several minutes. It's in the gentleness of the moment when a mother hears the first heartbeat of her baby. It's in his relinquish when a man rips of his heart by letting his lover go to the one she loves. It's in the first tremor in your fingertips when your hands brush against hers and you realize that it's going to happen for the rest of your life." At the last part, she threaded her fingers' with her husband's - Arnav's father and the two smiled without looking at each other. "It's in growing old, sharing towels, raising kids, stealing kisses behind grown up children's back, holding hands when first grandchild arrives, dying knowing that there is someone waiting for you on the other side."
 
Thank you so much for the pm!
Can't wait for the next update!
 


I am glad the conversation between Arnav and his parents is liked...it's one of those things where fantasy element was used as a tool instead of a lengthy monologue...technically all this is a conversation happening inside his head, but adding an element of known faces, changes the execution dramatically.

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 8:55pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM. Loved it. Sweet how Arnav talked to his parents. Loved how they met in the office.

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
Arnav's mom explained it so beautifully! Loved the update except for the singularity-entropy line...went over my head and I was too lazy to open a dictionary. 

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mystique_girl

I like this story very much...it kind of touches my heart a lot...further, its different from your other pieces of work that I have read...

The update was beautiful...it showed the longing in both hearts ..


Well, it was a challenge to break the norm and write only romance. Vertigo is an experiment (for me) in that direction.

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