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ArHi SS: Vertigo - Completed [Sequel link on Page 1] (Page 33)

forevertaanu Senior Member
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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
just come across ur FF and it was awesome ...

please add me to ur pm list

thnx u Big smile

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N0306 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 3:47am | IP Logged
awesome update.. sorry for the delayed comment.. but i needed to read all the parts again to refresh my memory and it was worth a read...

poor khushi.. well written.. no one is wrong or right here.. that is what i love about the story...

i just wish arnav sees what he feels before it is too late..

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 5:21am | IP Logged
nice update...
waiting for next

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racheal Newbie
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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 5:58am | IP Logged
wonderful story... read all the parts in one go... pls do pm me wen u update... if u can increase the font size it wud be easier to read... waiting 4 nxt update...

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 7:46am | IP Logged
WOW! You are updating after a very long time.  It is one such beautiful story that it always stayed in the back of my mind and in my favorites.  I was very glad to see the update and couldn't believe my eyes.  I am very much willing to read further to see how the story unfolds.  what is gonna happen in this week?  and what is lavanya do to save her NEVER-REAL relationship with arnav? 
Are you going to update soon??? Or you going to hide again for several months hangin us to a cliffWink

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 11:40am | IP Logged
I read it one go... Wonderful writing!!!
The whole plot, characters everything!! You given a new touch n direction to original story!!
I wished it was the way in actual show!!!!
Great job dear!!
Continue soon

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
read it one go!! wow!!! me like alot :)

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
"Have a safe trip," she said, her voice betraying every bit of emotion she felt. She grabbed table for support and prayed for a stroke of sanity; she couldn't decipher the range of emotions dancing within her and the pain that arose in its wake.

"Thank you," he said. He took a step forward keeping a close eye on her. She was struggling with something, he could see, but didn't know what to infer from it. "I should probably go," he said taking another step towards her. She looked up to see him standing a bit closer to her than before. She lowered her gaze once more to avoid any conflict. She bit her lip and nodded her head, not trusting her voice.

"Will you please look at me?" He asked taking yet another step. He shook her head in 'no'.

"Khushi," he said. His voice was hoarse and barely above whisper. She refused to show him her vulnerability, her attraction and her tears.

"Please," she begged. She couldn't face him. She couldn't let him see her attraction towards him while she only saw sympathy and kindness in his.

"Khushi, I..." Arnav couldn't complete his sentence as he heard voices of his staff.

She looked at him first and then the entrance of their office where people would enter any moment.

He reluctantly took a step back first and then few more as the voices became loud and nearer. He turned and walked away before people could see the two of them together and start questioning her unnecessarily.

She collapsed on the chair once he was out of her sight. It was going to be a long week.\


I read ad re- read this part almost 4 times..Felt the heart ache and don't have word, but love it!

Loved your writing..



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