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ArHi SS: Vertigo - Completed [Sequel link on Page 1] (Page 12)

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 7:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ivre

I like this song... You seem to be the first person who has mentioned it in a story.
Kind Arnav is nice :)


I like this song too... Yeah...I never understood the reason behind his anger in series...

Originally posted by tsultana

please keep on updating!!! loving ur story!!!


Thank you...I will...

Originally posted by Maanyita17

Awesome update! Thanks for the pm and update soon!


Thank you...hopefully update will be posted in next few hours...

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 8:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zafi

Fantastic update. ClapLoved it.
Update soon.Big smile THanks.Wink


Thanks a lot...

Originally posted by angelic shaz

wowww beautifull!!! loved it!!!


Thank you...

Originally posted by batgirl67

I like the story hope you can pm me the updates!


Thank you...Sure I will..

Originally posted by mollycoddle

awesome upd8


Thank you...
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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by littlemoi

superb update!! love the way the story is progressing!! plzz continue soon!!



Thanks...Update will be soon...

Originally posted by slgirl

hey! Great update..I like this bold Kushi..she is not hiding her feelings at all..not sure how Arnav is going to take it...Confused
I like this Arnav...


Thanks...Khushi isn't being bold...only honest...Arnav is being honest too...

Originally posted by desisweetheart9

Thanks for the PM. Really nice.


Thanks...you are welcome


Originally posted by nareshSV

Awesome narration yaar, please update for next chapter...


Thanks...
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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by qutiegiya

awisum updates..


Thank you...

Originally posted by tina_1234

waitin for next part


It is going to be little late...sorry...

Originally posted by renee27

this is a wonderful story...you write really well...loved all the chapters...do PM me when you update next...Smile


Thank you...will PM you when I update next...
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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
I just read the first 4 chapters of this story..and i must admit I am intrigued by the tension you have created between them...its MUTED, but very TANGIBLE...almost like a natural FORCE.  I like the understated attraction... I also like this Khushi...especially her parting words.  Would love to hear (read) Arnav's thoughts too...especially what he thought of as he head her words and drove off.  Looking forward to the next part...

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 7:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Nargis--

I just read the first 4 chapters of this story..and i must admit I am intrigued by the tension you have created between them...its MUTED, but very TANGIBLE...almost like a natural FORCE.  I like the understated attraction... I also like this Khushi...especially her parting words.  Would love to hear (read) Arnav's thoughts too...especially what he thought of as he head her words and drove off.  Looking forward to the next part...


Thank you very much. And you have nailed the basic theme of the story! Whatever is going on between them is natural and its tangible and it isn't because there is an attraction on only a physical level! Her confusion with her feelings and his confusion with his mild attraction to her is what I want to explore.

Thanks!

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
Updates were held up. Will start again soon.
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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 8:25pm | IP Logged

Chapter 5: Dream a little dream of me

Her final words had stuck in his mind throughout the drive home and even when he changed for bed, her words haunted him. There were very few things in this world which had the capacity to knock him off his game and he had never considered a small town girl to be one of those things. For a girl whose mind wandered mile a minute and incoherency was kind of a given signature, she sure was pretty articulate in expressing her state of mind.

He poured himself hot water and dropped a tea bag. It was quite late or too early in morning to ask his house help for hot cup of tea so he made it himself. These small mundane routines always calmed him down. He walked to the garden he had grown in courtyard and settled on a garden chair without bothering to switch on the lights.

His garden was his pride. He had started it to get away from people and their idiosyncrasies where he was expected to act with lots of societal rules. But amongst plants, he was just himself.

"You love it here, don't you?" He heard Khushi say. He was startled at the sudden voice and turned to see Khushi leaning on the wall and looking at him with a serene expression.

His imagination was working overtime making him think Khushi was there. He knew it was his imagination.

But he didn't care. For the first time, he dealt with an imaginary Khushi honestly. He smiled at the image.

"Yes, I do. Do you know why?" He asked fully knowing that he was talking to himself. He saw imaginary Khushi shake her head and walk down towards him and sit on the floor a feet away from him.

"I used to sit exactly where you are sitting right now and watch my mother working in garden. After everything that happened in our family, this is the only thing that makes me feel connected to her, you know?" He said, his voice dropped to a husky whisper.

Imaginary Khushi simply nodded her head.

"I am not most guys Khushi," he said and stood up. "I was too young when I was subjected to things that I didn't deserve. I dealt with it in my own way."

"How? By ostracizing yourself from everyone around you, including your sister?" He noted wryly that his imaginary Khushi was super similar to the real one.

"It wasn't intentional; not at first at least." He slowly walked along the path. After twenty steps he saw that Khushi was also walking next to him feet away but looking straight ahead. He smiled and shook his head but continued to walk.

Calmness enveloped him and for the first time he didn't know why he wasn't agitated with her presence. He was a self-proclaimed loner and he preferred his own company when compared to anyone else yet being with Khushi hadn't been bad.

"What is going on between us?" He said stopping, his voice little above whisper.

"You do not know?" Imaginary Khushi asked him looking at the sky, her eyes slowly blinking at darkness of it all.

"I don't think I do," he said looking at her. Why wasn't he getting angry for not knowing?

"What do you feel?" She asked rapidly changing subject.

"Content," he replied honestly.

"You don't feel love?" She asked him smiling.

He looked confused.

"Should I?" He asked, raising an eyebrow. She trilled in laughter.

"What?" He asked her in annoyance yet a smile playing on his lips.

"How many people you know who are in love and content?" She asked. He didn't respond.

"Is your sister content?" She asked softly when her previous question didn't warrant an answer.

"I sure hope so," he said immediately.

"Be honest Arnav. Think from here," she said placing her small hands on his chest right above his heart. His right palm clutched her small palm and squeezed it softly.

"I don't think she is," he said after several moments of thinking and contemplating. His voice laced with defeat and the thought of his sister not being content made him unhappy.

"I don't know how to fix it," he said immediately. "If I had known or seen it before, I know I would have done something, anything to'"

"Sh'." She said placing her other palm on his mouth stopping him from lashing out on himself any further.

"Arnav," she said. Her voice was hypnotic and mesmerizing. "You can make your sister happy. But only she can allow herself to be content." She said and took her palm away from his mouth and placed it on his shoulder. He sighed deeply and rested his head on her shoulder.

"Thank you," he said weaving his free arm around her waist.

"For what?" She asked and splayed her free arm across his shoulder. She still had her other palm resting on his chest and he was still clutching it as if it was his lifeline.

"For coming in to my life," he replied. She laughed in his ears and she could feel him smile on her neck.

"I am sorry," he said suddenly pulling himself off her. She looked at him in confusion.

"Things are going to get very hard on you. I am not sure if I will be around to help you out," he said. Once again she walked towards him and placed both her palms on his chest.

"I know. But that is not going to stop me." Imaginary Khushi was as spirited as the real one, he noted.

He shook his head and pulled her into a kiss.

Reality be damned.

(TBC)


Edited by Thyme - 23 December 2011 at 8:25pm

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