π So exquisitely beautiful, worded elegantly and yet filled with emotion. But there are little descriptive touches which I found wonderful; Arnav's daughter - her earrings 'kissing her cheeks'...
And still the love, not overwhelming sensual passion, though I am sure it is there, sated by their bond, their marriage, the respect, the friendship and the depth of emotion between Arnav and Khushi shines through the page.
I adored this story...I am so glad you didn't make it overly complicated, but sweet. Sometimes in life it really isn't that complicated - it was good to read something simply plotted but with the brevity of longing that lies between two people falling in love and the contentment of being with each. Brava!! π
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