Jeene ke ishare mil gaye - SS - Page 14

I read everything in one take.  You are an amazing writer.  Please PM me 

Oh i loveddd dis part..it was awesome..Virman back in their element...manvi al set, let d game begin!!

Loving loving loving your SS! So I finally found the time to start reading it since opening the thread two days ago, & just read all the parts in one sitting.  seriously, everything is flowing like a track would and all the characters are how i would expect them to be .. before and after a leap. your pacing is just too good too, hitting so many different story points, please continue soon! I am addicted, just want to keep reading and reading 😆

Awesome gal, it was again another great update. I loved how Virat understands Manvi so well, he knew that is Banderiya is capable of doing the most unpredictable.😉  Kadambari chachi is always classic with her capabilities to relate almost everything to Bollywood. If Shlok is a walking encyclopedia then he inherited it from his mum who is Bollywood encyclopedia.

The VirMan scenes were awesome, esp how Manvi's first word was Chep. Loved how both of them hid their emotions and love for each other yet still maintain their nok jok. I m also waiting for the game to begin.

Am waiting for more Virmaan parts... Wonderful Update.. So let the game begin... ;)

i luvvvd it!!!😊...manvi shd giv tit  for tat to bua...i kno i sound lyk a broken record but i will say again continue sooon...😉😆

Thanks for the PM dear  😊... I m very happy that Mannu is found and she is fine😊
Loved the Virman convo and his concern for her
Plz cont soon

thanks fr the pm pm me d next part 2!!

thanks for the pm...awesome update😊 love the care virat has for manvi :D

wow! the story is developing quite well... i can't wait to know how the rest of the story is going to be... totally excited! i am so eager for the story to develop!