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ArHi SS: Midnight Swim - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it. Awesome update.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
this was such a good part!! and i am extremely sure that arnav knows how to swim hihihi😆 but why did u stop??!😔 i want more hihihi!!

u r such a faaab writer 😃 keep it up and u r really talented at writing things
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Posted: 12 years ago
Why did u ended it like that ???? Update quickly plzz
Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: nayika

Oh come on Khushi, you don't really believe that Arnav has had a pool all these years and doesn't know how to swim? :P

I loved the update! And their kiss, so hot. Looking forward to the next part!


Haha Khushi is so clueless when it comes to Arnav :P
Thank you! :D

This content was originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

OMFGGG, I'm Sure Arnav Can Swim, But He Was Teasing Her ;) 🤣 The Last Paragraph Is AHHHAHHHAHHH 🤪 ☺️ Come On, Continueee . Why Are You SOOO Cruel Ending At The Best Moment ?! 😈 😆


Yeah, he was teasing her! Sorry, I just love cliffhangers! :PP
Thanks for reading & commenting!

This content was originally posted by: -Garima-

O.M.G. ☺️ 


Hotness personified, that's what I would call this update! *siggh* it was sooo intense. ESPECIALLY the last part where he was like "then that could be a problem" 

a;dkfj;asdkjf ahhh omg im dying. ☺️ this was an awesomee update shreya! (: 

great job! can't wait for the next one, which I'm assuming is gonna be wayy hotter. Oh lorddd. 😍

--Garima


Thank you so much Garima! :D
Hopefully it will be :PP
Glad you liked it!

This content was originally posted by: CHIKA784

That was spicy!

Loved it,thanks for the pm 😛


Thank you!

This content was originally posted by: areeba_blossom

Man, Arnav is soo naughty!!


Haha yup he sure is! :D

This content was originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Shreya!!

Loved this.
My God...he is such a tease!!
She's no less though.
You need to update sooner hun...😉
Thanks for the PM.
⭐️


Thank you! I will try to update the next part sooner! :D
Glad you liked it!

This content was originally posted by: dumas

he is such a liar come on he have that pool how long and he can't swim the kiss was hot and you left us on a cliff hanger again you are so bad awesome update loved it thanks for the pm 


Haha but Khushi still believed him :P
Sorry for leaving it at a cliffhanger! And glad you liked it!

This content was originally posted by: -Noorii-

Hayyee update 😳 Haawwtt updatee :D


Thank you!!

This content was originally posted by: LX2FX2

Fantastic...you have got to continue soon😆


I'll try to update ASAP! :D Thanks!

This content was originally posted by: ccuteaangel

Ahhh such an awesome awesome update, please write more soon! Dying to read more of this, you are a fabulous writer.

 
xx Hayles


Thanks Hayles! Glad you like it :)

This content was originally posted by: karisma

could easily picture the roguish glint in arnav's eye 4 this scene!he's so mischievous and proved it in the end!! warm tingles all over! thx 4 the update


He is, thats why we all love him :P
Thank you! So glad you liked it! :D

This content was originally posted by: zafi

 Loved it. Awesome update.👏


Thank you! :D

This content was originally posted by: loveydovey

this was such a good part!! and i am extremely sure that arnav knows how to swim hihihi😆 but why did u stop??!😔 i want more hihihi!!


u r such a faaab writer 😃 keep it up and u r really talented at writing things


Lol he does, he was just being a tease :P
Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment! :DD

This content was originally posted by: shybabe

very well done sweets!😃


Thank you very much! :D


This content was originally posted by: SiRul

Why did u ended it like that ???? Update quickly plzz


Sorry! Will try to update ASAP :)




Edited by reyabear - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
And I burned! HOTNESS! I swear, that was hot! I was like this when I was reading it > ☺️ Their kiss was just .. hot? yes! And the endinggg! YOU better update this SOON! Because I really REALLY want to read more of this SS!  I know, I am such a besharam person but what to do! 🤣
Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: ..Jojo..

And I burned! HOTNESS! I swear, that was hot! I was like this when I was reading it > ☺️ Their kiss was just .. hot? yes! And the endinggg! YOU better update this SOON! Because I really REALLY want to read more of this SS!  I know, I am such a besharam person but what to do! 🤣


Lol I'm the biggest besharam for writing it you know. :PP
So glad you liked it! I'll try to update soon! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi Is TOOO Innocent & That's Why She Believed Him : P 😆 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
arnav is so naughty i bet he knos hw 2 swim lol
relii wanted 2 read more plzz cont soon 
fanx 4 da pm x 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update!! Too good; thnks alot 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Didn't know Arnav was the mischievous one

Poor thing believed him