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Her complete submission-#4 pt44-lnk #5 (Page 6)

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
wow...  loved it
finally talking to each other like a couple
this is a good start

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
Aaah...nice to see some progress...he touched her cheek...and she didn't pull away!!!  Nice!!!

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
Only one word - wow...just beautiful
 
their interaction was so heartfelt, full of unsaid choked emotions, sublime, unsaid but expressive.
 
Each and every word was like listening to an italian opera...melody which haunts you without words
 
start to finish...hesitation, understanding, love, pain, expectations, crushed dreams, hope of new ones, unconditional never ending love, tears, joy...everything.
 
I don't think i am doing a very good job of explaining how I felt Any. Fact is I am speechless.
 
Also, the last lines of Maan - to me that summarised his character till now. A man who broke evrything because he never wanted to understand his own restlessness and love. A man who realised and now understands and accepts Geet's distrust. A man who still dare to hope and is ready to wait for it.
 
I felt he was not talking about the venture but himself. It is all for you. Do whatever you want, only if you want. It will wait for you.
 
Geet - A woman crushed so badly that at tender age lost the ability to expect and dream. That bit was painful. I just hope one day, Maan's love give her the wings to fly...to dream and hope the same way her love has rekindled these very feelings inside Maan.

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
congrats for new threads, awesome updates finally dono baat karnai lagai, update soon.

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
Congrats for the new thread...
Lived the update

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
terrific part.. its really simple and beautiful the way they are slowly and cautiously going forward.. I love just how affectionately Maan tries to explain to her that she should do exactly like she feels.. very touching.
DO continue soon.

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 4:53pm | IP Logged
finally talking to each other.. good..
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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 4:55pm | IP Logged
finally m aneet talking and in positive direction

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