Her complete submission-#4 pt44-lnk #5 - Page 24

Yeh kehne ki jarurat nahi he phir ur update was amazing dear par please thoda lamba chahiye kyu ki yeh dil maage more...

amazing loved the update

Lovely update darling.

awesome update...
loved it...
omg... maan made aloo paratha for geet...
now maan is in full charge to get his geet back to herself...
feeling bad for maan... cant see him in pain...
continue soon dear...
thanks 4 the pm...

Awesome part.
I loved it.
Bechari geet hv to eat dat 4 bland parathas
Precap is interesting.
Continue soon

allo ke parathe mast idea wqaiting for dargiling trip

wonderful update...

Awesome update
Loved it
Continue soon

hi maan is trying his level best to please her... or mughe pata hai vo use mana bhi lega ... vo jo kaam shru karta hai use pura karkey hi dam leta hai...

anu,
aww...too good, me loving the way this tale has shaped up so far...do continue...