Her complete submission-#4 pt44-lnk #5 - Page 17

soni4eva

@soni4eva

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

superb update luvd it

maan is so cute luv da way hes tryin 2 make er 4give im

cnt w8 2 read more plzz cont soon

fanx 4 da pm x

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647008

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

amazing update

good to see maan is trying his best to woe geet

waiting for next update

cont. soon

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

superb!!!!

maan is now on the right track!:)

continue soon!

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SONU_29

@SONU_29

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome part.
I loved it.
Precap is interesting.
Continue soon.

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Smily

@angel_smily

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

awesome part

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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455024

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update,thanks for the PM

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saam123

@saam123

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

anu so breath taking

update .maan bending

down & giving flower

just imagine that & u

already fell in love with

this maan & he putting

flower in her hair haaa

aaa. my heart already

lost there. maan went to

geet's office some where

he know that geet can't

handle the things &

peoples questions about

their marriage that why

he wants to be with geet

hope geet will understand

him .at least try to believe

once . please anu update

soon.

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sweety

@lalitha..

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update

thanks 4 pm

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ursrithika

@ursrithika

Senior Member

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Great Going Dear... I liked it... Very Very much... Where, Maan went on his knees offering a rose to geet...Well, Only our little devil-angel "Angeli" can think like that...

Beautiful way of portraying maan's emotions... and Geet confusions... Waiting for next update...

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preethia

@preethia

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 12 years ago

loved the update...

this is getting very interesting...

i cant believe that mana went on his knees and went with her to her office...

waiting for the next eagerly

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