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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear...loved the rose scene...quite unique
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Posted: 12 years ago

o lala Maan bending on kness and giving rose to geet was a great idea

So Geet still thinks that it is a drama but Geet kabhi toh yakeen karogina
 
I have fallen head over heels in love with this maan he has decided to do everything to win his wife
 
the romantic moments were really beautiful
 
office scene toh i loved maan ne yash se sorry kaha MSK and sorry pyar achhe achho ko badal detha hai
 
Di the highlight for me was the last sentence where u mentioned that he wanted her to gain and not to lose Standing ovations for this part Di I loved it
 
well meri wish list toh kafi lambi chaudi hai but filhaal k liye i would love to see a maaneet  scene with the new maahi tune
 
love u
 
urs Piggy (Piya)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
He has no idea to woe his wife
Geet is simple and she like simple things...
Love the way give rose to Geet and then later put it in her hair
Their moments were amazing
Geet is still in little doubt but now i am sure that her doubts will be gone with passing time
Really like Maan to accompany Geet to her office
Precap is nice
Waiting eagerly for next update
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it, how he is trying to win her ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...loved it...maan buck up man...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome...
am really liking maan's efforts...
awww luved the way he gave her the rose..
continue soon 
plzz add me onto ur pmlist...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear...
loved maan soo much..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update Anu.
 
You know first thing which struck me was how his inspiration is Geet and her selfless love itself. It is kind of ironical.
 
But I am loving this side of Maan and things he is doing to gain back her trust. Today Geet may just think that she is just letting her expectations go but very soon she will get used to his attention. I am sure he will pamper her so much that she will not even know when those expectations will come in the right sense and all that haq, that right which she has on him and he on her
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow nice
luving maan's attempts
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome wow how dreamy he asked sorry ... superb update dera plz continue soon...