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ARHI: FF: A Thorn In The Heart Complete (Part 28) (Page 52)

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Posted: 24 March 2012 at 6:10am | IP Logged
lovely and beautiful last part dear 
worth the long wait 
looking forward to the new FF

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Posted: 24 March 2012 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by YPNHK_kiFANno.1

OMG! Yay! Thanks for the mention Embarrassed. My inbox was full for ages and then I didn't get any PM for the parts. I was really missing this FF (Party it's an FF!). I'm so glad I checked up on this otherwise I would have missed out on a couple of amazing chapters.

Their date was super romantic and it's so cute that Khushi is so innocent and Arnav looks after her so much. I really like these subtle touches you place in your writing e.g. how he longed for her when her hair kept blowing in his face, how he thought she looked like a doll all the time. He is so protective and caring and it shines through your words.

So a bit of suspense and drama with the return of Shyam. I was shocked, everything was so perfect and he had to come and scare poor Khushi. You dealt with it well, bringing more love into their relationship. How he tends to her, but asks her permission. As I've said before and will say again, you can feel their love through this FF! I'm so glad you turned it into an FF and please PM next when you update. I don't want to miss it again.

Keep up the awesome work always, beautiful FF! ClapStar
Thanks for the huge comment I have PM'ed you hopefully I am not sure if we are buddies but if we are then I have most definitely PM'ed you with the final part of my FF

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Posted: 24 March 2012 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by devishree

lovely and beautiful last part dear 
worth the long wait 
looking forward to the new FF
Thank you so much, I am still super sorry for the long long long long wait though :)
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Posted: 24 March 2012 at 6:15am | IP Logged
thnks for da pm
was very sexy
lve da shower part
xxx

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Posted: 24 March 2012 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Hi
This is a perfect ending for this beautiful story.
Khushi and arnv have their perfect family which has filled their life with happiness. Arnav would never have a dull moment in his life because of his khushi.
Waiting to read your next FF
 

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Posted: 24 March 2012 at 6:33am | IP Logged
gr8 ending..waiting 4 d nxt ff !

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Posted: 24 March 2012 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Loved it !!!!!!!!
It was an amazing ending to an amazing FF !!!!!!
Loved the FF !!!!!!!
Thnx for the pm !!!!!
Will wait for ur new FF !!!!

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