VriKa OS - Just One Kiss...Please? - Page 3

Originally posted by: tatan4karan

Beautifully Written!! i wud Love 2 Hav dese Kinda Stuffs😊 I LOVE VIRIKA MOMENTS,As Em An Ardent Fan Of VIRIKA😊

Originally posted by: rev4eva

Awesome, you have beautifully described Viren & Jeevika. I think after watching the wonderful chemistry that they share during this week's episode, there will be more OS/FF flooding the forum. I really wonder how Viren's expression would be when Jeevika said she will be back. 

Originally posted by: Brklyn_gal

Omg this was amazing I also fell in love with the two just one look. Especially after the kheer incident it was like this guy is so mine. It was like his expressions that held me tight. Then jeevikas upset face as she found out he lied just to
Make her stay
Out of trouble I'm literally in love with them virika and virmaan

And the way you described them and thei feelings I'm in love love u for this

Originally posted by: sofiya05

Hey,

Awww I love it- and I don't think it's completely out of character either, especially from today's episode :) I think my favourite bit is when Jeevika says "I'll be back!"

Sofi

Yeh, I wrote this after the sofa scene, was bored at work so I started drafting up an OS 😆 and when I saw today's VriKa scene I was like oh my..😆 

Originally posted by: tara_211

awesome...absolutely loved..it!!!

plzz do write more...i also love ur SS...on Vadhera boyzz...plzzz do write more :)))

so beautiful written

Originally posted by: Kajpreet

Hhhaaayyyeee. 😊 Anytime you write I always get excited thinking, "Yay! She wrote!". I am always smiling when I read your work. You are a awesome writer!

Hugs and lots of sisterly love,
Kajol

Kajol, you reminded me of Viren's Chachi, whenever she says 'hayyyneee' 😆

Originally posted by: missingremix

I like al d four leads n find virika vry cute though i'm majorly a virman fan..bt here reading ur os i fell in love wid virika..loved d way u portrayed them stil shy yet d comfort n intimacy between them increasing..gr8 job!!👍🏼

Thanx for d pm..write more often..u r really gud!!😃

I love everyone in the show! Apart from Gabarsingh and Mugambo...you can guess who I'm on about right? 😉 Thanks😳 i honestly think I protrayed them abit too...hot? 😆 VriKa is all about the innocence and sweetness you get from a relationship, I still think I need to nail that but I'm glad everyone liked it 😊

Originally posted by: Jeevi-cuteness

awww this was sooo cute and hot at the same time! totally loved it <33 plsss if you could PM the next time u write a virika scene :D do write more if you can coz ur a fab writer

Originally posted by: Jeevi-cuteness

 

@MariFuze: 😆 I hope you're still alive! And thanks, I hope so!

 

tell me about it it was sooo hot😳 donno wut virika r doing to me these days😆