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ArHi Os - WhItE lIe (Page 2)

vishruta Senior Member
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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged
thank you all the readers for ur comments & suggessions

will keep on posting my work 




love ya...
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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 10:52am | IP Logged
hey plz use a darker font colour... btw amazing os... loved it
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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged
really good..a tearful

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Hey nice one.. Though sad! But i liked it!!

One thing to point out - Font.. U know it's night here and reading this made my eyes paining!! Please use darker and bit bigger fonts buddy!Tongue

With update - Kushi's feeling was so so good.. I loved the way she lied just to protect Arnav..! Very true feelings..!

Nice work!Smile
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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
it was superbly writtenClapClapClapClap...i wasnt able to find any flaw with da emotions u wanted to convey....but 4 my own peace of mind i just changed da names to some XYZ's as i wont b able to c Arnav n Khushi lyk dis....it was hurtful painful n remorseful where u can see dat love was bruin...happiness was sortin itself n forgiveness was chasin awy da demons one fights till the end of their lives...
im sooo very impressed...

P.S. Nadiya is right...do change da color..its difficult 2 read

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 5:25pm | IP Logged
wowww beautifulll loved it !!!!!

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
simply beautiful although sad

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