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maansee IF-Sizzlerz

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Tuli Senior Member

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Posted: 29 December 2011 at 4:21am | IP Logged
gr8 n also a diffrnt start. Love it. Kashish added u as buddy,accpt it n pm me d updts 4m now on.

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kashishkPM Groupbie

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Part 1 on PAGE 4

Hey guys,
How r u all?
Besides that, as I already told, guys my uni started... so If I will be regular or not I don't know :(... Seriously I don't like to make delays or anything but this year is the toughest year of studies of my life. Guys I really need your support :D

Coming to the part: Thanks a lot for your awesome, fabulous comments, I completely loved them and also thanks to everybody who pressed on 'like' :).

I read them a lot of times and reading your guys comments really did made my day, thanks :D

As you already know, I truly want to reply to every comment individually but I can't as I am really busy :(. I hope you guys aren't angry by this fact but let me tell you once again thanks guys for showering me with your love and support, I will definitely press on like button :) please keep supporting and loving as it means a lot to me :D.

I am glad to know you all liked the part and I hope you'll like the upcoming parts and FFs too. :)

Guys, your response was really overwhelming :).

If you have any question and which I forget to answer please do make me remember.

IMPORTANT POINT: If you ever find I wrote love making scenes explicitly please let me know :)

PS: IMPORTANT: please add me to your buddy list as 'kashishkPM' if you want PMs :)

Luv u all<333

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kashishk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Part 1 on PAGE 4


A friend is someone with whom you dare to be yourself."
Frank Crane

It had been a month that Geet had settled in Maan's apartment as his roommate. They were good friends but they never asked each other about their past, just lived in the present. Geet got to know Maan was a businessman and Maan got to know that Geet was a doctor.

Geet was in her six month and her stomach had started showing off a little more. That day, she had appointment fixed with the doctor and Maan was going to him.

After quiting her room, she entered in the sitting room and sat on the table. Soon enough, Maan appeared wearing an apron and chef hat, with the breakfast.

Actually, Maan had allowed Geet to cook lunch and dinner if she wanted but with his help whereas breakfast would be prepared by him and only him.

As Geet looked at the breakfast, she said with an approving nod "not bad not, you are improving"

Maan growled at this because he burnt the bread a day before "Geet yaar, it happens something" while Geet laughed seeing him. He pouted and bent down on his knee before Geet "hey princess, tell your mom not to tease your boyfriend"

"oww, what is this Maan?" she was amused to see Maan behaving like this.

"well, your baby is my girlfriend" he said while pretending to shy only to receive a punch on his shoulder from Geet

"You are impossible" She giggled and then asked with a frown "by the way who said that it's a girl?"

"bas, I just know." He so wanted it to be a girl, he had bonded so well with the little one in short span of time.

Geet shook her head and started eating. They both discussed about daily routine. "Maan, you know I so want to join back hospital but this health of mine doesn't let me" she said sadly. She wasn't in the condition to work because as soon as she started working nausea started so the hospital gave her leave till she delivered her baby and was fit and fine to be back on her duties again.

As doctors had to be healthy themselves to treat someone else properly.

"Oh come on, you need rest and you shouldn't be thinking about working" he said strictly yet softly

"but I am bored at home" she said while pouting

He took a breath and then said "I know Geet, I can understand but you too have to understand that working is not good for you and are your baby. "

Listening that Geet nodded and then he said reminding her what she had to do "ok now get ready, Nikki should be here any minute then you both can go for shopping then I'll take you for your ultrasound"

Geet got knew Nikkita very closely as they met a lot. Nikkita was Maan's best friend. Once when Abhimanyu and Nikkita came over the dinner at their home, Abhimanyu told her "you know Geet, today if I and Nikki are married it's all thanks to Maan otherwise her parents would have never agreed"

I was confused so I had asked "but why were your parents not agreeing?"

"because my parents wanted me to get married to their friend's son but then Maan made them understood" Nikkita replied.

That day, she got to know how much Maan loved his friends and trust them. He was one of those type, who cared his friends a lot, like he cared for Geet now. In fact, he cared more for Geet as she was not one but two.

"Maan I can go to the appointment by myself" she tried to convince him but that was one of the few matter in which he never gave up.

"I know you can but I want to accompany you. I want to see the little baby. You know I never experienced this but now that I am so close to your baby I want to know how it feels to see the baby in ultrasound" he said dreamily.

"uff" she sighed and went to her room to get ready. She wore a simple blue anarkali dress. When she came out, she heard the door bell so she went to open it. It was Nikkita, standing there with a shining smile.

"Hey Geet, how are you? and how is the little one?" Nikkita asked while giving a hug to Geet and then both entered.

"I am fine and we are going for baby's ultrasound today" she said with a smile that said how happy she was thanks to her baby

"good, where is Maan?" Nikkita asked while looking around

"see you called me and here I am" he said while appearing from the corridor. He greeted Nikkita with a hug "how are you?"

"I am fine, what about you? so getting ready to go to work?" Nikkita asked as she found him in his suit and he was also holding his briefcase

"I am fine and yeah, I have a very important meeting. Normally, it would last an hour so I will join you guys in the mall and Nikkita take care of Geet. Moreover don't let her walk too much" he said with concern

"Maan I am not a baby" Geet said while defending herself

"oh you are worse than a baby" he teased while sticking his tongue

Nikkita was amused to see them, she had never seen Maan behaving like this but then again she was liking her friend's in this new avatar. In fact, she was liking both Maan and Geet together.

"ok jokes apart, Geet do take care of yourself" he said her worriedly, he didn't want her to go under any stress. He knew it could be proven dangerous.

"I will Maan don't worry" she said while blinking her eyes softly

"Good" he looked at his wrist watch and said "now I have to go so see you guys later" he left giving both of them a friendly hug

"come Geet" Nikkita told Geet and then both of them left the apartment after locking it

They went to the mall and did lots of shopping, their bags were full. Geet didn't shop anything for her but for her baby and for Maan.

They were now in the women section as a fed up Nikkita dragged her there "chose something for you as well"

Geet just followed Nikkita. Nikkita had chosen few dress for Geet which she told her to check them. Geet told her "please Nikki, I am tired"

Nikkita noticed that Geet was indeed really tired so they purchased the dresses without trying. Then they went in a restaurant, where they were going to have lunch.

In few minutes, Maan joined them and they all had fun during the lunch. After that, Nikkita left for her office and Maan took Geet for her appointment.

"Geet what's your doctor name?"

"Dr Kritika" she replied him back after glancing at her file

Maan nodded and followed Geet. As they reached there, Maan said "you go I'll wait for you outside"

She had her mouth wide open "then why did you came?"

"I want to come in Geet, but I don't want anyone to mistake our relation" he said honestly

Geet nodded and entered in her doctor's cabin. Meanwhile, outside the cabin, Maan waited impatiently for Geet to come out.

Finally his wait was over as Geet came out with her biggest smile possible, there was beautiful glow on her face. "let's go' she told Maan and both went in the car.

Geet took out the ultrasound and showed him. Maan was overwhelmed, he couldn't help but whisper "Wow" unknowingly a tear leaked from his eyes which didn't go unnoticed by Geet.

"Maan what happened why this tear?" she said while wiping his tear off.

"I don't know Geet, I just couldn't help" he said while looking at Geet "you know I am already in love with the baby"

Geet was really touched, this guy knew her for a month and he loved her baby but her husband whom she knew for two years just throw her out.

"by the way, is it a baby girl or baby boy?" he asked excitingly

"Let's keep it a surprise" she said with a smirk

"then let's make a bet, if it's a baby boy you get to name him if it's baby girl I'll name her" he said super excited about this

She thought for a while then said "ok done" they seal it with a hand shake and with a smile.

"I'll drop you at home where you are going to take rest as I was seeing how much you were tired while shopping"

"but Maan, I want an ice cream first" Geet said innocently, nowadays her mood swings were high yet she tried to control them as she didn't want to be a burden on Maan but she was never able to control herself so as usually she told her wish.

"Geet, the weather is cold so I don't thing ice cream's idea is good one" Maan said carely. Though he knew she was having mood swings yet he was worried for her health.

"Maan please" she said while pouting.

As Maan looked at her, he wasn't able to say anything but yes. Geet beamed happily. Maan smiled looking at her.

They both stopped at an ice cream shop, Geet had one double ice cream of vanilla and chocolate flavor and Maan took the same. Even though, it was cold but both enjoyed their ice cream.

Then both made their way at their home. Geet was truly amazed, he always cared for her. Maan parked the car in the parking, both came out while Maan was holding all her bags "Maan do you need some help with the bags?"

He shook his head and both made their way toward the apartment. As soon as they entered, Maan put all the stuff in Geet's room. After that, he went in the kitchen and fulled the jug with water which he took in Geet's room along a glass. He placed it on the bedside table.

"Thanks" she said while looking at him, she was really tired and at that moment she just wanted to have a nap.

"your welcome" he replied with a smile "listen, if you need anything do call me, I'll be back. Take care, bye" After saying all that, he left.

He locked the door with his key and made his way to his office. On the other side, Geet slept for four-five hours but once she woke up, she had no desire to sleep so she woke up and decided to arrange her baby's clothes.

Finally, Maan was done for the day. He took his briefcase and made his way toward the parking lot. So much happened in his life, he had seen so much ups and downs, so much twists and turns. Maybe, he would have never come here but then he had to come for a reason which only destroyed him. Then, he started working here itself.

From the day, he met Geet, he felt alive again, he felt like his pain was nothing in front of hers. Her eyes spoke volumes even though now too she smiled but her eyes contained pain so deep that he actually felt his pain so little in front of hers.

In the last month, he had bond so well with her  and her baby, he even had started choosing names for baby girl. He was certain that it would be a girl as sweet as her mother.

He thought to call Geet as to confirm that she was alright so took out his mobile from his pocket and called her. The ring was going but no answer. He tried for three more times and then he got worried. He rushed toward his car and jumped in. He drove on the maximum speed while driving he tried calling her again but still no response, he was really worried.

He came out from his car and quickly locked his car. He didn't care if the car was locked properly or not. In full speed, he entered in the building and pushed the lift button. It felt like lift was taking ages, so he decided to take the stairs.

He ran to stairs door, he opened it and ran toward the second floor. He was now in his corridor, he opened the apartment with his keys and...

Thanks everyone for your comments and likes, please keep doing both these things as it encourages me writing further. All comments, suggestions, questions and criticism are more than welcome. :D
By the way, happy new year 2012 in advance Hug
Please add me in your buddy list as 'kashishkpm' as I will pm you from that account only and not one that I mentioned in the first post :D

Luv u<333

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abinash079 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 8:48am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
maan is really a sweet heart
continue soon

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meena.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 10:09am | IP Logged
awesome dear
cont soon
thanks 4 pm

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harshithaaaaaaa IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
awesome...loved it...caring maan...such a sweet him

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Remya_Pillai IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 10:48am | IP Logged
omg!maan s such a cute one..
so he too hv a terrible past...


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