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swetha10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Awesome update..
luved geet's surprise for maan...
awww liked maan's concern for geeta..
continue soon

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-Mishu- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 3:35am | IP Logged
amazing update dear...

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kashishk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
PART 14 on PAGE 50

Hey guys,
How r u all?

Finally we will have net at our place from Wednesday, please pray nothing goes wrong.

Apart that, guys guys, I am also really happy as I am nominated for the awards so please vote me I will be so grateful of you Hug. Here is the link:
~*FF Awards 2012 Voting Thread*~

Coming to the parts: Thanks a lot for your awesome, fabulous comments, I completely loved them and also thanks to everybody who pressed on 'like' :).

I read them a lot of times and reading your guys comments really did made my day, thanks :D

As you already know, I truly want to reply to every comment individually but I can't as I am really busy :(. I hope you guys aren't angry by this fact but let me tell you once again thanks guys for showering me with your love and support, I will definitely press on like button :) please keep supporting and loving as it means a lot to me :D.

I am glad to know you all liked the part and I hope you'll like the upcoming parts and FFs too. :)

Guys, your response was really overwhelming :).

If you have any question and which I forget to answer please do make me remember.

I will update the next part today or tomorrow, hopefully :D
I request please do keep leaving your lovely comments :D

IMPORTANT POINT: If you ever find I wrote love making scenes explicitly please let me know :)

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kashishk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
PART 14 on PAGE 50

Hey guys please, please vote for me if you like my stories:
~*FF Awards 2012 Voting Thread*~


Maan handed, her Geeta safely. Removing the blanket from his wife's chest, he started cleaning her brea*t. He learned when he was in hospital with Geet that it was really important to be careful regarding the safety of baby.

"what are you doing?" Geet asked with a frown, not that she minded him touching her but she was confused, not to mention feeling shy.

"you are going to feed Geeta, so I don't want our baby to get any germ as I was licking your..." he left the sentence in the middle in addition a blush too appeared on his cheeks.

Geet blushed hearing this but once again, she was left touched. He loved and cared for both of them a lot. So once he cleaned her, she started making Geeta feed.

How days, weeks, months and years passed they didn't know. It had been three years to their wedding.

Their life was full of happiness. Never they fought a lot, yes they had their little sweet fights but nothing serious. All felt so heavenly to them.

Geeta was the life of the house, without seeing her a second they would get restless. They just love the other ones a lot. Not to mention, Geeta was her daddy's girl and Maan always saved her from being scold.

'But maybe happiness aren't mean to last forever' Geet thought closing her eyes.

It had been four hours that Maan came back at home from his office, coming home he kissed Geeta but didn't pay any attention to her.

She didn't want to loose Maan, he was her lifeline 'I have to talk him' she concluded with it. Not only she wanted to talk about this but also tell him something important. She entered in their room.

"Maan" she called him out.

"yeah" he said, without taking his eyes off the computer.

That was so not like Maan, he always looked at her whenever she entered in the room, he always gave her lovingly glances but what was going on now.

"Can we talk?" she asked, hoping a positive response.

Maan looked up at her and then went back to his screen "Geet, I am busy.. we'll talk later"

Listening that, Geet was left stunned. Maan never waited to hear what she wanted to say. She was feeling really worried.

Anyways, nodding her head she went to her bed where Geeta was playing with her toys. "My baby, let me make you sleep" she said lovingly and both of them laid down. Geeta slept in the same room as theirs, they had specially arranged a single bed for her in the room.

As for now, they didn't want her to give her a separated room as she was only a baby and too be truthful, they couldn't stay away from her.

Soon enough, Geeta and Geet had fallen asleep. After a while, when Geet's eyes opened, she saw Maan not here. She frowned while looking around the room for him.

'why is he behaving weirdly today... I want to share so much with him" she said, feeling sad.

She stood up, in purpose to find him. After a while, she was done with the whole house apart the terrace so she went there.

As she reached there, she found it dark so she turned on the light. As the lights turned on she was left shocked, the terrace was decorated really beautifully, it had 'happy anniversary Geet' banners, loads of flowers, beautiful strips.

Suddenly, she felt hands on her waist. She knew it was Maan, she rested the back of her head on his chest.

"Happy anniversary princess" he whispered, near her ear.

Geet turned and looked into his eyes "thank you and happy anniversary to you too" she said sweetly but then she frowned "why were you not talking to me?" her lips were formed in a beautiful pout.

"I just wanted to surprise you... I am sorry if you didn't like my way of surprising you" he said, pecking on her forehead.

"please don't ever stop talking to me. I felt so alone" she confessed, while hugging him tight and few tears came out.

Maan felt guilty seeing her like this. True, he had showered her with loads of love but still things like that could bring out the vulnerable side of her.

"I am really sorry princess, it won't happen again" he said kissing on her cheek.

He cupped her face and wiped her tears "Please forgive me, I am ready for any punishment"

"that you are going to get. You made me worry for 6 hours and when I ask can we talk you said later" she said, cutely.

He couldn't help but fall in love with her all over again "ok done, you can give me any punishment"

"You have to take a week of from office and take us on a trip" she said, in an orderly tone.

"Your wish is my command princess and why a week, we'll go for two weeks" he said, picking her up, she encircled her hand around his neck with a smile.

Maan placed her down when they arrived in front of the cake "I wish Geeta had been also here with us" she said, picking up the knife.

Maan held the knife and said "wait"

She raised a brow and looked at him. "come out my junior princess" as soon as he said this, Geeta came out while holding something in her hand.

Geet rolled her eyes and placed her hands on her hips "when did she come here?" she asked, while looking at Maan.

"when you were searching for me" he said cheekily, picking Geeta up.

Geet shook her head with a smile. After that she cut the cake with the two most important person in her life, well... maybe more. Geet fed Geeta and Maan together and in return they fed her.

"happy annivelsaly (anniversary) papa" she wished him kissing his cheek.

"thank you my baby" he gave her big kiss on her cheek, which made her giggle.

"mama mama" Geeta said, stretching her arms toward her mother to pick her up.

As Geetama saw this, she picked her daughter up. Geeta said, in her broken accent, while pecking on her mother's cheek "happy anniversaly (anniversary) mama"

Hearing this, Geet chuckled and kissed back on her daughter's forehead "thank you my baby"

"that's not fair, she gets a kiss and I only a thank you and happy anniversary" Maan said, making a baby face.

"Because she is my sweet baby" Geet said proudly, making her daughter feed more cake.

"so I am not sweet?" he asked with a frown.

"hmm let me see" she said, scrutinizing Maan's face.

"Geet" Maan whined, while making a cute face.

Seeing Maan like this, both the girls laughed "of course you are sweet" Geet said, pinching Maan's cheek.

Maan smiled, admiring his little family. Now that, he saw the dried tears on Geet's face he felt really bad. He couldn't believe how could he make her sad when he promised to himself. Seeing her sad or in tears pierced his heart.

Not able to control himself, he hugged Geet and said again "I am really sorry to make you cry"

"It's ok but it shouldn't be repeated" she said, pointing her fingers at him.

Maan kissed her finger and said "never.. I will never repeat it or do something that will make you sad"

Geet kissed on Maan's cheek, which brightened his life. "ok now what about my gifts" both Maan and Geeta gave her gifts, which they all opened together.

"ok let's dance" Maan said picking Geeta up and holding Geet's hand.

A sweet song's melody was filled in the air. Maan kept on twirling Geet softly while Geeta did her babyish dance in Maan's arm.

"mama cake?" Geeta said looking at the cake.

Her parents chuckled and then Geet picked her up. "come baby, I'll give you so more cake"

Geet and Maan alternatively made her eat the cake. Geeta was really happy. "I lobe (love) you mama papa" Geeta said sweetly, kissing on their cheeks.

"we love you too Geeta" Maan and Geet said in unison and kissed on their baby's cheek.

After enjoying a while, "papa, I want to sleeep" Geeta said in her baby accent, looking at her father so that he pick her up.

"come here my baby" he said with a smile, picking Geeta up.

All went down in their room and they made Geeta sleep on her bad, while patting or ruffling her hairs. She insisted to hear a story "papa stoly time (story time)".

As always, Maan couldn't say her no thus he told her a story and soon enough she was asleep. Maan looked at Geeta and kept admiring her, she was growing up really quickly. He still could remember the way she said for the first time 'mama' and 'papa', he still could remember her first step. He loved their baby so much.

He looked at Geet, who was still patting Geeta's stomach softly. She was half asleep. Maan smiled looking at the two beautiful women in his life and turned the light off.

Geet's eyes opened fully as the the lights turned off and she looked at Maan, who was coming toward her, with so much passion and love in his eyes.

Standing up, he picked Geet up and took her in the room next door. They made sure to not make love in the same room as Geeta, as only God knew when her sleep would be broken and they didn't want her to see something like this.

He made her lay on the bed and started kissing her lips. She was losing her control over her mind but she did want to tell him something which was really important."uh Maan, please can we talk before making love?" she said, in between her moans.

Maan looked up at her face and he knew there was something important. It was not like Geet to say something in moment like this. usually both of them would get lost in the moment to say anything.

Nodding his head, he controlled his breath and sat next to her. He hugged her securely and looked at her "what happened? is everything ok?" he asked worriedly.

Geet moved from his hug and looked on his face "Maan, everything is ok and actually I am.. I mean you are... you are going to become a father again" she said, while fumbling and her eyes lowered with shyness.

As Maan heard this, he got really happy, he just enveloped Geet in his arms. "I am really happy Geet, we are going to be parents and Geeta is going to be a big sister" he said excitingly, but the next second his excitement vanished and worry took over.

On the other side, Geet was feeling heavenly in his arms but soon she felt him stiffen. She moved back and asked, while stroking his hairs "What happened?"

"Geet, what if we got a baby and ignore Geeta in the process, I don't want that" Worry was completely visible in his voice. He couldn't bear to see his Geeta being ignored.

Hearing this, Geet gasped, she was completely stunned. "Maan, don't ever say that. I know you are there with me always, we will never ignore any of our baby." Geet said, cupping his face and then placed a kiss on his lips.

"Are you sure?" Maan asked with an insure stare.

"I am more than sure, now don't ever think like that, got it?" she said in an orderly tone.

"I got it Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana" he said, finally relieving a smile.

Geet smiled but then frowned when Maan stood up and was about to pick her up "what are you doing?"

"I am going to take you back in the room" he said softly and was in the midway of the process.

"make me lay back" she said in a firm voice.

Maan didn't get why she said that, he made her lay back "what happened?"

"what about love making?" she asked encircling her hands around his neck.

"you are pregnant so we can't make love, right?" he said so sweetly that she wanted to kiss him hard and that's what she did, she kissed him hard. He was so sweet and just cared so much about her.

"Maan, I am just two months pregnant and the doctor didn't say anything against our love making" she said with a smile.

As he looking in her eyes, he was assured so he moved closer to her and continued what he had begun a while back. They both made love to each other for long hours and then they went back in the room, fully dressed, in purpose to not shock Geeta.

They slept on their bed, hugging each other tight and feeling content. No matter what happens the whole day at the end of the day, they would be together and happy.

Little did they know, their past is going to knock again on their door. Only God knew if it would destroy their relation or make it more strong.

Hey guys,
Thanks everyone for your comments and likes, please keep doing both these things as it encourages me writing further.
By the way, I am really happy I have net at home :D.
All comments, suggestions, questions and criticism are more than welcome. :D (please have a look on the T:Note) :D
A very very happy birthday for everyone who is born in April:D
Please add me in your buddy list as 'kashishkpm' if you want PMs :D

And guys please please vote for me :D

Luv u<333

Edited by kashishk - 14 April 2012 at 3:33pm

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ReahRaj Groupbie

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
Wow... The first one to comment...keep it up...

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rizwanaq Senior Member

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
nice update - now it gets interesting.

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shalini_s IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 7:45pm | IP Logged
nice one.. but hope the past doesnt spoil it for them..

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abinash079 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
awesome upadte
so now Geet's so called husband is coming back
and he woudl try to take geeta or poisoned the mind of geeta

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