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kashishk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ReahRaj

Do give us double/ triple update yaar... Waiting for a week is really hard...

Hey dear,
Even I want to update more but I have very restricted time, I am at my dadi's house for another hour and I still haven't done my breakfast in this time I have to update the next part, and send PMS.
But once I have net at my place I will try to update two parts at time but no promises as my exams are going to start :D

Luv u all<333

kashishk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 2:40am | IP Logged
PART 13 on PAGE 46

Hey guys,
How r u all?

Finally we will have net at our place from Wednesday, please pray nothing goes wrong.

Apart that, guys guys, I am also really happy as I am nominated for the awards so please vote me I will be so grateful of you Hug. Here is the link:
~*FF Awards 2012 Voting Thread*~

Coming to the parts: Thanks a lot for your awesome, fabulous comments, I completely loved them and also thanks to everybody who pressed on 'like' :).

I read them a lot of times and reading your guys comments really did made my day, thanks :D

As you already know, I truly want to reply to every comment individually but I can't as I am really busy :(. I hope you guys aren't angry by this fact but let me tell you once again thanks guys for showering me with your love and support, I will definitely press on like button :) please keep supporting and loving as it means a lot to me :D.

I am glad to know you all liked the part and I hope you'll like the upcoming parts and FFs too. :)

Guys, your response was really overwhelming :).

If you have any question and which I forget to answer please do make me remember.

I will update the next part today, hopefully :D
I request please do keep leaving your lovely comments :D

IMPORTANT POINT: If you ever find I wrote love making scenes explicitly please let me know :)

PS: IMPORTANT: please add me to your buddy list as 'kashishkPM' if you want PMs :)

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kashishk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 3:13am | IP Logged
PART 13 on PAGE 46

Hey guys please please vote for me if you like my stories:
~*FF Awards 2012 Voting Thread*~


"what are you thinking?" Maan asked her, as he found her lost and not paying attention to the baby.

Geet noticed that the baby had taken her mouth away, so she placed her to the other side and started feeding again. "I was thinking that what would I have done without you?" she confessed what she was thinking.

"Shhh, stop thinking that. We are together now, we are married and we a love each other a lot. Don't think about something like this again" he said pecking on her forehead and then her lips. He knew, she still would get emotional, with these fact and then he added "I love you and our baby a lot". First he kissed on her cheek and then their baby's head.

"I love you too and our baby love you too loads" Geet said, placing a kiss on his cheek. Maan placed his hand around her waist with a smile and rested his head on her shoulder.

Geet had decided what to do to take a step forward. She just wished nothing to go wrong as she too was looking forward for that night, the night were they would become one.

As the darkness took over the day light completely, Geet entered in the room and placed Geeta in her crib. Taking her bridal dress out, she placed it in the bathroom.

Once she was done with all the arrangements in the room, she went in the hall and saw Maan gathering Geeta's toys. As his back was facing her, he didn't notice her. Moreover, he was thinking something.

The next day, he didn't have anything to do so he would be at home, he was thinking to take Geet and Geeta out for a while. The doctor had allowed both the mother and daughter to go out, in fresh air.

She smiled widely, Maan was such a gem. He was always there with them. Never had he made them feel like unwanted or stranger.

After a moment, she went to him and hugged him from behind. "where is my hubby lost?" she asked giving him a peck on his cheek.

Feeling someone's warm arm around him, he came out from his trail of thought. One touch was enough for him to know it was Geet.

Maan smiled fully hearing 'hubby', it always made him feel so good, he was Geet's hubby. "I was thinking, that we should go out tomorrow" he replied, enjoying her hug.

"Nice idea, Geeta would also get some fresh air" once again, she pecked on his cheek.

"oye hoye, ma'am, I have lips too where you can kiss" Maan said hoarsely, with the effect of her lingering kisses. He loved her so much as well as respected her.

"don't worry, I'll kiss you there too" she said seductively, caressing his cheek.

Maan smiled widely, hearing her seductive voice. That was so not like the Geet he knew. As in she would often kiss but talking like this was something knew and he was loving it. Unknown to him, something good was awaiting for him.

"I am going to take a shower so please take care of Geeta" Geet said, ruffling his hairs softly. This very movement, relaxed him completely.

As Maan heard that, he held her hand and kissed it "Is there even a need to say please, just order me princess"

Geet was really touched "ok then, take care of Geeta" she said more like an orderly tone, yet with a cute smile.

Maan flashed one of his beautiful smile, that always brighten up Geet's mood. "Your wish is my command Princess" he said lovingly and then stood up taking two-three toys with him.

Both entered in the room and Geet entered in the bathroom. She quickly took a shower and wore the bridal dress, the same dress she wore as their wedding and now she was wearing it for their first night.

She looked at herself in the mirror hung on the wall, she blushed slightly. She didn't put any make up but filled her parted hairs with vermilion. She wore a simple necklace over her sacred thread, then she picked up the earrings and put them in the hole of her ear, she placed her 'Maang tikka'. Picking up the nose ring, she wore it, it had a long chain attached to it then hooked up the chain in the hair of the above the ear.

Opening a box, she took the beautiful bangles out. Admiring them, she softly wore them. Finally, she picked the anklets and tied them around her feet.

Once she was done, she stood up and fixed her veil. Moving closer to the bathroom door, without opening the door, she called Maan softly "Maan"

Maan went there hearing her voice, "yes, what happened?"

"Is Geeta asleep?" Geet asked, hoping she was asleep.

"She woke a while back but now she is in deep slumber" Maan replied looking at Geeta.

"ok" Geet replied with a smile. "Before I come out, can you please bring a glass of milk?" Geet asked with a smile, yet with a blush.

"of course, no problem" not once he doubted her intention as he was used to make her drink milk before she went to sleep.

As Maan left the room, she quickly came out and sat down on the bed. She spread properly her lenhga in a circle and covered her face with the veil.

Her hands were shivering in nervousness, her eyes were lowered down with shyness but she was waiting impatiently for Maan.

Opening the door, Maan entered in the room while talking of the cover he had placed over the glass. As he raised his eyes, he was left mesmerized, he thought he was imagining.

Not able to stop his steps, he moved toward her and once he reached there he sat on the bed. Placing the glass of milk on the bedside table, he took the veil off as he was still believing it to be a dream.

As the veil was taken off, Maan was speechless seeing her. Her eyes lowered down, a blush crept on her cheek, her lips and hands slightly showering. She looked so beautiful, so innocent. For sure, she didn't need any make-up as she had her natural beauty.

Geet's heart beat rose when she sensed him so close to her. All of this felt so new to her and she was loving each and every moment. Though she took the initiative but now she wanted Maan to take the lead.

"am I dreaming?" Maan couldn't help but ask it.

Hearing this, Geet raised her eyes and looked at him. She was amazed to see, Maan was thinking this as dream.

On the other side, once Maan saw her eyes, he knew it was really reality. "now i know it's reality. It can't be a dream but are you sure? as I love you Geet and if you are doing all this to make me happy, you don't need to, I can wait." he asked her worriedly.

Finally what seems like ages, Geet spoke with love in her eyes "I had never been that much sure before and I am doing this for us as I love you too".

Maan could clearly see the love and trust for him in her eyes. Geet picked up the glass and offered him.

"so you make me bring the glass of milk for our first night" he said with a chuckle.

"yes" Geet replied shyly.

"first you" he said, passing her the glass. She took few sips and then passed him the glass. He places his lips on the same spot as her and drank the whole glass.

As he was done, he placed the glass back on the bedside table and moved closer to her. He sofly caressed her face, their eyes were locked with each other. They were sure for this step, more than ever.

"do stop me if I hurt you" he said, kissing on her cheek, making Geet close her eyes in anticipation.

"I know that you'll never hurt me, I trust you" she said with so much trust in her voice.

Maan was really touched to see the amount of trust for him in her her heart. "I love you" Maan whispered near her ear.

"I love you too" she whispered back, in a daze.

He freed her from her jewelery while leaving kisses here and there, making her moan. Geet's hand were around his neck. He kissed her at every place he could. He was finally near her feet, he fondled her anklet and took them out.

Once he was done, he moved up again and claimed her lips. Both kissed each other passionately. Maan's tongue touched Geet's lips, which made Geet open her lips, giving him an entry to her mouth.

Maan placed his hands around her and deepened the kiss, he explored each corner of her mouth, she did the same. As their tongue touched, they gasped yet taking care to not wake-up their princess.

In this process, Maan untied the string of her blouse meanwhile Geet moved her hands on her chest, where she started undying her shirt's button.

They moved back as they were out of breath. Their heart was beating really fastly. Once their breath was back to normal, Maan took out his shirt as well as his sleeveless shirt, which made Geet feel shy.

Even though, she was used to see him only in boxers but that day it was different, they were going to become one in every sense.

Maan placed her lips on her neck and left a trail of kisses all over her throat and neck, making her breath with difficulty.

Not able to stop herself, Geet kissed on his bare shoulder and chest. They were becoming passionate with each minute..

In the process, Maan slowly took out her blouse, still leaving kisses on her neck. Soon enough, there weren't any obstacle between them.

As it was Maan's first time, he wanted to make sure, she was ready. "Geet, are you ready?" he asked softly.

Geet looked at him and smiled shyly "I am always ready for you" saying so she pressed her lips against his.

That was enough for Maan to loose his sense, after this there was no going back and both of them knew that.

As they broke from the kiss, Maan started making love to her. Still in this intoxication, he made sure to not to hurt her.

They both moved in harmony, they made love to each other until they were tired. Maan laid down next to her while hugging her.

"I hope I didn't hurt you" he said kissing on her bare shoulder.

"You can never hurt me, we both know that" she said controlling her breath.

Maan covered Geet and himself with the blanket and both slept till Geeta cried. If it had been on Maan, he wouldn't have let Geet wake up every night but he couldn't feed Geeta only Geet could do this till their baby grew enough to be fed by bottles.

As he knew Geet must really tired, he stoop up and wore his boxers. He went near the crib and picked Geeta up, which made her silent. "hey angel, you are up" he said pecking on her forehead. "let me bring some wet cloth then I'll tell your mama to feed you milk".

Geet was waken up and looking at them but she was really tired to stand up. Maan was a savior to her as before she could go to her, he stood up and went to her.

Still she was confused when Maan took Geeta with him in the bathroom. She waited for them to come, so she could ask him. After a while, they both emerged out from the bathroom.

Before Geet could ask anything, Maan handed , not Geeta safely. Removing the blanket from his wife's chest, he started cleaning her brea*t.

"what are you doing?" Geet asked with a frown, not that she minded him touching her but she was confused, not to mention feeling shy.

"you are going to feed Geeta, so I don't want our baby to get any germ as I was licking your..." he left the sentence in the middle in addition a blush too appeared on his cheeks.

Geet blushed hearing this but once again, she was left touched. He loved and cared for both of them a lot. So once he cleaned her, she started making Geeta feed milk.

Hey guys,
Thanks everyone for your comments and likes, please keep doing both these things as it encourages me writing further.
All comments, suggestions, questions and criticism are more than welcome. :D (please have a look on the T:Note) :D
A very very happy birthday for everyone who is born in April:D
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abinash079 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 3:30am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it

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love2_soma IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 3:38am | IP Logged
awesome update...

its really touching hw maan taking care of both mother n daughter...minute things which geet also cant remember...but he is dere always to tk care of everything...


thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

really loved it...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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Remya_Pillai IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 3:45am | IP Logged
That was so beautiful..
Impressed with maan's care..

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 3:51am | IP Logged
loved it

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meravigiliso IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 3:53am | IP Logged
loved d way maan took care of her .

Edited by hermoso - 09 April 2012 at 5:17am

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