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awesome fida over dis maan...

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                              Beautiful Glitters   Update...


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indeed a beautiful and emotional part .

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PART 12 on PAGE 41

Hey guys,
How r u all?
From about two months I don't have internet at my home so I am obliged to update the part on Saturday Night, as I stay at my dadi's place. Thus I am trying my best but yet if in future such mistakes happen again please do forgive and also inform me :D.

Coming to the parts: Thanks a lot for your awesome, fabulous comments, I completely loved them and also thanks to everybody who pressed on 'like' :).

I read them a lot of times and reading your guys comments really did made my day, thanks :D

As you already know, I truly want to reply to every comment individually but I can't as I am really busy :(. I hope you guys aren't angry by this fact but let me tell you once again thanks guys for showering me with your love and support, I will definitely press on like button :) please keep supporting and loving as it means a lot to me :D.

I am glad to know you all liked the part and I hope you'll like the upcoming parts and FFs too. :)

Guys, your response was really overwhelming :).

If you have any question and which I forget to answer please do make me remember.

I will update the next part today, hopefully :D
I request please do keep leaving your lovely comments :D

IMPORTANT POINT: If you ever find I wrote love making scenes explicitly please let me know :)

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PART 12 on PAGE 41


"I am fine.. Maan how is our baby? how does she look like?" Geet asked getting quite excited, yet weakness was visible on her face and in her tone. She was really curious to see their daughter.

"She is fine and I too haven't seen her" Maan replied softly.

"why?" she asked with a slight frown.

"because, she is our daughter thus we'll see her for the first time together. She deserves to see her parents together" he said lovingly.

Geet smiled softly through tears. She had married one of the best human in the world. Not only he loved her but he loved equally her daughter, actually not her 'THEIR DAUGHTER'

The nurse came with the baby girl, Maan and Geet took the baby in their arms together, making sure she was comfortable. After that, the nurse left. They kissed the baby lovingly, taking care to not hurt her as she felt so fragile and looked so tiny.

they were overwhelmed to see their baby. "she is so beautiful" Geet said, while tears came out from her eyes. As she saw toward Maan, his tears were also leaking down as at that moment he was feeling the luckiest man.

"I know Geet, I am so happy today" he said hugging Geet, his eyes still fixed on their baby.

Geet stayed in his embrace peacefully, she felt so secure in Maan's arms. They stayed in that position for sometime, then Geet looked at Maan's face and declared with a smile "so you have won, you have a girlfriend"

Hearing that, Maan looked at her and realized the bet he made with her. In the last few hours, he had been emotionally wrecked that this thought didn't even go through him. "You knew it all along, didn't you?" he asked, looking at her lovingly.

"Yeah, I knew it but I also knew how much excited you were. I was sure as you'll get to know the baby is a girl when she'll come to the world, you'll be more happier than then." she said, with a wide smile. She was happy with her decision.

"Thank you Geet. I don't know how to tha..." before he could continue, Geet placed her hand on his mouth.

"Don't thank me, as we are one. Anyways, if someone has to thank it's me, I have lost the hope to be happy like this, the way you make me. Than.." now it was Maan's turn to place his finger on her lips.

"As you have said, we are one so don't ever thank me" he said placing a kiss on her lips and she responded back, with equall love and passion, they both got lost in the moment.

As they broke apart, they were breathing heavily. Looking at the baby again, "so what do you want to name her?" Geet asked, staring at their baby then at him

"Geeta" Maan said, softly looking at Geet.

She was amazed hearing the name yet touched deeply. "done, but next time I am going to name our baby" she said with an approval nod, as well as a deep smile.

"So Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana, is already planning for our next baby" Maan said teasingly.

"Maan" Geet whined and hugged Maan.

As the baby started crying, Geet realized she must be hungry "oh my Geetu is hungry". She moved her patient wear and started feeding the baby. The name 'Geeta' felt like music to their ears.

That was the first time, Maan was seeing her like this. He felt flushed though nothing was vulgar but he felt shy.

"what happened?" she asked, when she noticed Maan's cheek red.

"uh It's the first time I am seeing you like this" He said, with his cheek all red.

"Don't worry, now you'll see me like this most of the time and it's you right." she said softly, with a smile. "just a month and few days, then I'll be yours in every way" she said honestly, with so much love and trust for him.

"I am also waiting that day, when you'll make me yours fully. When we'll belong to each other in ever sense" he said with a smile, looking at both his wife and daughter. Once Geet was done feeding the baby she passed the baby to Maan and laid down as she was really tired. Maan held her and placed her against his chest so that she could burp which she did and fell asleep.

"she is so cute" Maan declared, admiring her.

"After all, whose baby is she?" she said, playfully

"of course she is ours" he replied, proudly. Geet didn't miss it, she felt so secure with him and now she couldn't link their 'Geeta' to anyone else, she was 'THEIRS', her and Maan's. Of course, their Geeta was related to their friends and their friend's parents but all the others lost their right. Maybe time would make disappear the distances.

The nurse came back after a while and said looking at Geet "the room is ready for you to shift". Then looking toward Maan, she said "you'll have to wait outside until we shift your wife and your baby there" Maan nodded and left the room reluctantly as he didn't want to leave their side for even a second. They led Geet to a general room.

When the nurse allowed to go and meet her, all their friends entered in the room and where left in an awe to see the baby. They had never seen a baby since so long and this happiness was really big for them.

"Hey princess, we am your massis" Muskaan said, caressing Geeta's cheek.

Then Nikkita picked up the baby gently. "Geet, you won't believe but she has eyes like you" Nikkita declared, noticing the baby's big blue hazel eyes.

"really?" Maan asked, with excitement and looked her eyes. "Geet, she really has her eyes like you" he said, happily and gave a hug to Geet.

Atul held the baby and declared "she is so fragile, I feel even scared to hold her" which made all of them chuckle but they couldn't agree less. All of them held the baby, one by one. They all were really happy. Finally, Maan was holding the baby.

"I think we should also start planning about babies" Rahul said, hugging Muskaan who was now blushing badly.

"You are right man, you'll feel the happiest man in the world" Maan said, with happiness expressed from his face and tone.

"by the way, we are talking non-stop what have you both named the baby?" Atul's father asked. He was the one who along his wife blessed this couple on their marriage.

"what about you make a guess?"Geet suggested, with a naughty smile.

"hmm, first tell us who named her?" Abhimanyu's asked, with his brow raised.

"I have named our baby" he said giving a kiss to Geeta.

"hmm then it should be something related to Geet's name" Anjali said, as she knew Maan really well.

"you are absolutely right" Geet said, with a grin.

All of the suggested names but it didn't occur to any of them as of yet that it could be 'Geeta'. Muskaan suggested "Geetanjali?"

"no" Maan said, shaking his head.

"so then what is it?" Nikkita asked with a pout.

"I think I know" Muskaan said, as a realization hit her and there were no reason to not try it. "Geeta?" Muskaan asked, looking at Geet and Maan.

"you are right" Maan and Geet said together.

"wow, we said all the names expect the easier one" Rahul said, clearly amazed with the name and shocked about all the thinking they did to find the name.

"I think we should leave now as Geet needs to rest now" Atul's mom said, sweetly passing her hand on Geet's head.

"yeah mom, you are right" Atul seconded. All of the left, expect Maan, Nikkita and Abhimanyu.

"you are really lucky to have someone like Maan, who loves you a lot" Nikkita said softly, passing her hand through Geet's hairs as she knew she must be really tired.

"Maan always makes me feel so lucky. From the day, he came in my life, he showered me with loads of love" Geet agreed, while looking at Maan who was staring back at her.

"and you know what Geet? when you were taken in the ER, he was in a really bad state, he was crying really badly." Abhimanyu said disclosing the event that took place when she was delivering the baby.

Geet looked at Maan, all amazed. Meanwhile, Maan looked anywhere but her. Once again, his depth of love for her left her blown over.

"well it's about my Maan that you are talking about" she said, flashing a beautiful smile. At that moment, Maan looked at her and finally flashed a smile.

"that is true" Nikkita agreed, with Geet's statement.

"I think we should also leave" Abhimanyu announced, as he noticed the time as well as that Geet was really tired "you both take care of yourself and of the little one" Abhimanyu said kissing softly the little one, followed by Nikkita.

"see you guys later" Nikkita said, both of them left.

From that day on, Geet fed Geeta and the rest of the tasks, most of the time Maan used to do it alone-especially in the night- or with Geet, as in to change the diaper, to give her a bath and other stuff.

After few weeks, Maan started going at work as Geet forced him, yet he would be at home as soon as he could.

It had been a month and few days, since Geet gave delivery, she was now able to walk properly and do all the works on her own.

The trio were sitting in the lounge and playing with the baby with her toys while she was smiling widely. The lounge was full with toys, that Maan brought mostly.

As the baby started crying, Maan softly passed Geet the baby, who started breastfeeding her. Till now, Maan was used to this sight, in fact he felt so amazed to see this beauty of motherhood.

While breastfeeding, Geet had been thinking that it was time that she and Maan took a step further in their relationship but she didn't know how to take the initiative. As when they get intimate they would have to take care of their baby too

The situation was really confusing, they were not two people anymore, they were now three. That third one, their baby, was really important in their relationship but now she also knew, she had to give Maan, his full right.

Whenever she thought about the last few months, especially after their marriage she couldn't help but respect her husband more than she already did. He was always really understanding and respecting toward her and not to forget really loving.

From the time she get to know him, her past was forgotten. She didn't remember her parents much as she was showered with loads of love. She had forgotten Samir. Geeta was not Samir and hers baby but Maan and her's. Since the day, Maan accepted her, she and Geeta were only his and he was only theirs.

What a big irony, she had grown up living with her parents, where she had spent most of her life. Her parents should have been the ones to understand her but no they refused her and kicked her out whereas Maan, a mere stranger till a few months back was now her life and Maan's friends were like her siblings. Indeed she was really lucky.

Now that she thought, about being lucky, she realized that in the world there must be loads of women who didn't get love after being ditched by their husband. Few times, because they were having affairs with other girls, few time because they believed others over their wives.

Leaving alone in this big world was tough especially with a child. She didn't know what she could have done. She must have come to terms to live alone but she wouldn't have been experiencing all these beautiful feelings that she got with Maan around her.

"what are you thinking?" Maan asked her, as she found her lost and not paying attention to the baby.

Geet noticed that the baby had taken her mouth away, so she placed her to the other side and started feeding again. "I was thinking that what would I have done without you?" she confessed what she was thinking.

"Shhh, stop thinking that. We are together now, we are married and we a love each other a lot. Don't think about something like this again" he said pecking on her forehead and then her lips. He knew, she still would get emotional, with these fact and then he added "I love you and our baby a lot". First he kissed on her cheek and then their baby's head.

"I love you too and our baby love you too loads" Geet said, placing a kiss on his cheek. Maan placed his hand around her waist with a smile and rested his head on her shoulder.

Hey guys,
Thanks everyone for your comments and likes, please keep doing both these things as it encourages me writing further. All comments, suggestions, questions and criticism are more than welcome. :D (please have a look on the T:Note) :D
A very very happy birthday for everyone who is born in March and April:D
Please add me in your buddy list as 'kashishkpm' if you want PMs :D

Luv u<333

Edited by kashishk - 31 March 2012 at 3:31pm

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that was SOOO perfect
and SOOO beautiful !

Edited by lil.mizz.smexii - 31 March 2012 at 5:16pm

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Posted: 31 March 2012 at 5:30pm | IP Logged
Awesome !!!
Love it !!!!

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