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FF-True Luv Is Eternal-MG-EpiloguePg80(13/06/12) (Page 11)

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 6:09am | IP Logged
Amazing n lovely dear...

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 6:15am | IP Logged
part 3
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cont soon...

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Posted: 14 January 2012 at 12:18am | IP Logged
wow how mch he cares for her...

loved it dear...

cont soon

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Posted: 14 January 2012 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
Part 3 on PAGE 9
THANKS NOTE

Hey guys,
How r u all?

Guys, my Uni started as well as my exams. I so hate exams :(. All the best everyone for their studies and jobs and households. By the way, is anyone here, by chance, a businessman or woman, or at least work in a company that deals with import/export. Actually, I have prepared for a viva but have to make sure if I did well or not ;) :D.
 
As I already told, guys my uni started... so If I will be regular or not I don't know :(... Seriously I don't like to make delays or anything but this year is the toughest year of studies of my life. Guys I really need your support :D


Coming to the parts: Thanks a lot for your awesome, fabulous comments, I completely loved them and also thanks to everybody who pressed on 'like' :).

I read them a lot of times and reading your guys comments really did made my day, thanks :D

As you already know, I truly want to reply to every comment individually but I can't as I am really busy :(. I hope you guys aren't angry by this fact but let me tell you once again thanks guys for showering me with your love and support, I will definitely press on like button :) please keep supporting and loving as it means a lot to me :D.

I am glad to know you all liked the part and I hope you'll like the upcoming parts and FFs too. :)

Guys, your response was really overwhelming :).


If you have any question and which I forget to answer please do make me remember.

I will update the next part tomorrow :D
Do keep leaving your lovely comments :D

IMPORTANT POINT: If you ever find I wrote love making scenes explicitly please let me know :)

PS: IMPORTANT: please add me to your buddy list as 'kashishkPM' if you want PMs :)

Luv u all<333
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Posted: 14 January 2012 at 3:37pm | IP Logged
Part 3 on PAGE 9

PART 4

Maan prepared the food, when he was stirring the food Geet told him about Nikkita's invitation which he agreed happily as he too wanted to know what the surprise was, plus the next was Sunday so means no work. But little did they know along the surprise, something else was going to happen that day. Once the food was prepared, they both ate it. Geet completely loved the food and both went on walk as their routine.

The following day, Geet and Maan went together at Nikkita's house and they arrived there at the exact time. They met Abhimanyu and Nikkita while hugging them and Maan asked them "Guys, what is the surprise? I am dying out of curiosity"

"Maan, Sabar ka phal meetha hota hai and you know 'patience is virtue' " Abhimanyu said testing their patience.

Maan growled and said "you guys are impossible"

Meanwhile Geet noticed there weren't many guests but yet she didn't know so she felt quite left out which didn't went unnoticed by Maan, who said "come Geet, I'll make you meet my friends"

He took her to her friends, whom he met with a hug then said "Geet, she is Muskaan and he is Rahul" he said pointing toward a couple "he is Atul and Anjali" he said while pointing toward the other couple "both couples are married" he finished there introduction with a smile "and guys, she is Geet, I told you about her, remember?"

"oh yes, hi Geet nice to meet you" Muskaan said and hugged Geet, followed by Anjali. Geet was taken back first but then she felt at ease and smiled from heart. All the guys met her one by one. Geet was happy to meet them and she integrated in their group instantly.

"how come I never met you before?" Geet asked as all of them sat down expect Abhimanyu and Nikkita who were busy with some other guests.

"well me and Atul are partners and we had a project in foreign where we had to spend two months so along our wives we were there. We just came back today itself and here we are" Rahul said with a smile.

"do you guys want something to drink?" Atul asked everyone. All said yes so the guys went to bring their drinks. They came back after a while with theirs and girls drink. Maan passed Geet her soft drink, Rahul gave to Muskaan and Atul to Anjali.

They all were having their soft drink and were discussing with each other when Muskaan asked Geet excitingly "so Geet, how do you feel knowing that you will become a mother in like three months?"

"It feels so good, I truly feel over the moon" Geet replied with an exciting smile. Though it was difficult for her sometime to sleep due to pregnancy but she was waiting for the moment she will hold her baby.

Maan too wanted to answer this question and say that it felt heavenly, he was waiting eagerly the day he would be able to hold the little one.

"Ladies and gentleman, may I have your attention please?" a voice took their attention, they noticed Abhimanyu and Nikkita in the middle with a mic "first of all, thank you to all of you for coming here and secondly I want to call Geet here"

Geet looked around her and then toward Maan, who blinked her eyes. Now she knew that Maan knew all along about this surprise but she still was unaware. She went there with steady step, she was feeling everyone's eye on her.

"Today is one of the most beautiful girls's birthday" Nikkita said with a big smile and while side hugging Geet.

"happy birthday Geet" The whole hall wished Geet in unison.

Geet stood there with tears in her eyes and her hand on her mouth, she was really surprised so she hugged Nikkita. She was really touched and thanked them. "Geet all this wasn't planned by us but by Maan, moreover he did all the preparations" Nikkita told her.

Geet looked at Maan and smiled at him who smiled back. She took the mic and said "thank you guys for coming here. Thank you Maan for making this day special for me". After that, Maan and the other friends joined them. Maan told her to cut the cake, she cut it and fed Maan at the first then the others. Maan took another piece of cake and fed Geet "happy birthday... I'll always pray to God that your life may fulfill with happiness" he wishes her with his charming smile.

"thank you guys" she replied back with a smile. Then she was showered with loads of gifts. As per Muskaan's requests, Geet opened every gift and she was really happy, she was behaving like a kid.

After that, Abhimanyu helped Maan loading the gifts in his trunk and the back seat. Geet was still talking with Muskaan, Anjali and Nikkita.

"guys why don't you go and dance?" Geet asked everyone as boys joined them.

"but then you'll be alone" Muskaan replied her genuily concerned for her.

"you go guys, I'll be here with Geet" Maan told them so all agreed and went for dancing. "Geet, are you tired?" he asked Geet once everyone were at a distance.

"No Maan" she replied with a smile "...but yeah I want to go to the bathroom" she said, and as Maan nodded with a smile, she went to the bathroom.

On the very same time, someone came toward him, seeing whom Maan's blood boiled. He couldn't stop himself but talk rudely "what are you doing here?"

"well Abhimnayu invited his friend Manav and so how can he come without his girlfriend" she replied with a smile.

"whatever Sanjana, but stay away from me" he threatened her.

"I just came to wish the birthday girl as it seems like you are taking care of all her needs. I mean I must say, such a lavishing birthday surprise for her. I guess she must be pleasing you well in your bed" with that Sanjana crossed all her limits and Maan slapped her hard.

Sanjana stood there holding her cheek, she was really humiliated and she promised herself that he would pay.

"don't you dare utter a word, how can you think so low but again about whom am I talking to. You listen just stay away from me and my friends" he said angrily and left from there.

Sanjane was full of rage, she was so angry to know that Maan slapped her because of that birthday girl. She thanked God that due to loud music the slap voice wasn't heard otherwise she would have been embarrassed to the core.

When Geet came out, she saw Maan slapping a girl. She was shocked because Maan wasn't that type of person who would hit a girl so she decided to ask him what the matter was.

She walked toward Maan, who was standing angrily in a corner and was about to drink the alcohol which he was holding "Maan, what are you doing?". she was surprised to see him drinking

However seeing Geet, his anger vanished so he put the glass on the table and asked her slowly "can we go home?"

Looking at his condition, she knew he was stressed and he needed to be out of here so she nodded. After that, they made their way to their friends and said bye, who didn't say anything as they thought Geet must be tired. It was only 10 PM, when they left the hall.

Maan drove the car in silence so Geet decided to break the silence "what happened Maan?"

He wasn't replying, he just kept on driving then after a while he stopped the car near a beach. As Geet saw Maan coming out, she too followed him. Maan was walking slowly slowly.

Maan was numb, that day his past knocked on his door again, the past he was trying to forget not that it mattered to him anymore but every time his past hurt him, though lesser than before yet it did hurt. Moreover, the instant Sanjana blurted those words, he knew now her words or her presence could hurt him no more as what she said and did was the worst.

The soft blowing of the wind was calming his nerves. Even though, he was wearing shoes still he felt the gentleness of the sand. He knew Geet was right behind him and it somehow reassured him that he wasn't alone but at that moment he didn't know what to say her.

They kept on walking for a bit more but now Geet was tired so she held his hand and said "Maan can we sit and talk?"

Maan looked at her and noticed that she was already a bit tired from the party and now that she had walked for God know how long, she was really exhaust. "Geet, are you fine?" he asked fretfully looking at Geet and then he looked at her belly with panic "are you ok girlfriend?".

Geet couldn't help but just admire Maan, he was in pain yet he was caring for her and her baby as in his girlfriend. She nodded with smiled and replied "I and your girlfriend am tired, so can we sit down?"

Maan nodded with a sigh of relief that they are fine. Both sat down on the sand "Maan, not that I want to interfere in your life but you seem really tensed and morever I never saw you that angry to slap a woman. Is everything ok?" she asked apprehensively.

At that moment, Maan realized that Geet had seen him slapping Sanjana but he couldn't tell her about that as she would be upset. Nevertheless, he was going to share with her his past that he had shared with nobody but today he felt like sharing it with Geet. He respired and said "that's a long story"

"I am all ear Maan" she said calmly holding his hand.

"All this started when I was in Delhi and I was in first year of my college where I met her, Sanjana for the first time. She was a beautiful and a nice girl.We instantly became friends, we hanged out a lot with friends or even just the two of us, I really felt comfortable around her. We went together for shopping, to walk, to cinema, we were like best friends.

With time, I started loving her and she too gave me hints that she loved me. Two years after I met her, on one fine day I proposed her and she accepted my proposal. The whole college was aware of it, we were the love birds of our college. We spent most of the time together but still there was a lack in our relation. At that time I didn't know what or maybe I wasn't trying to understand it.

It was like only me who was trying to keep our relation on track as she had started fighting with me over every little thing but still I tried my best to never let her any chance to complain, I took care of all her needs, I had showered her with love and I fulfilled all of her wishes.

Well, time kept on going like this but our relation was not the same as the beginning. I mean, I know there are few changing when your relations change but not that hugely. She was not the same person I had fallen in love. As the girl I had fallen in love was just not beautiful from outside, she was beautiful from inside too but the girl who was my girlfriend was just beautiful from outside. As I spent more time with her, I got to know more about her and it was truly disappointing yet I didn't let down our relation as I believed the relations we made are to be fulfilled till the last breath.

But There was just one question in my mind 'is this love?' as normally both persons in love try to balance their relation but there it was only I. Still I shrugged that thought off.

Then one day, she left me without even informing, I was broken. From her friends I got to know she was in Mumbai and had been accepted in excel college. So I came here in Mumbai, taking few days off from college. My main purpose to come there was just to find her and ask why did she leave? was there anything missing in my love?
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Thanks everyone for your comments and likes, please keep doing both these things as it encourages me writing further. All comments, suggestions, questions and criticism are more than welcome. :D
A very very happy birthday for everyone who is born in January :D
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Posted: 14 January 2012 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
wonderful update
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