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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
KHUMAARI- Beauty With The Beast
 
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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Awesome ff!!
Woh!!The introduction was breathtaking...
Never saw better words expressed for Beauty & Beast...
Mann is extremely ruthless...
Yuck!!..And disgusting too..
And Geet is such an angel...
In a given situation, Maneet's expressions are exactly opposite to each other...
Ok!!I will have to stop here...I think in the entire above comment, i described North pole & South pole(not literally)...
Loved the way you have written the ff...
You have given justice to the title in each part that u have written...
Maan's attitude towards Geet is slowly, very slowly changing...
In front of the world, no one can say anything to Geet but behind the closed doors he becomes a beast..
One thing...Why did Geet get punished??I guess we have to wait for the next update...

Please add me to your pm list..



Edited by pearl_warrior - 06 January 2012 at 11:28pm

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 10:13pm | IP Logged

KHUMAARI- Beauty With The Beast
PART- 6



OMG so many LIKES n COMMENTS me dead...!! BTW thnx guysEmbarrassedlove u loadsHeart



Why did'nt you said anything??

Maan was confused. He knew women to be bitchy, always scheming against each other so why she did'nt stopped Apoorva.

Geet was preparing her bed on floor. It was not a problem. Back home she always slept on floor whenever some guests used to come for visits.

Ji mai kya kehti? She said with her eyes downcast.

Why?? Are you dumb? No. You have got a mouth to speak

Par mai kaise...

Listen girl. You are no more Geet Handa. Now you are Geet Maan Singh Khurana. My name is attached with yours. If someone is insulting you it means my name is hampered. And I don't like to compromise with my honour. If you don't have any self respect then its not my problem. Maan said with a tinge of anger.

Geet listened to him with great concentration.

Now stop looking at me like a fool. He said irritated. Are you listening? Do my words even mean anything to you??

They mean everything. Her own audacity amused her.

Maan quickly closed the lights unable to control his wild fantacies which clouded his mind by seeing her.

After sometime Geet fell asleep while Maan listened to the slow tik tok of the clock.

Maan's soliloquy (monologue)

I looking at her simply because I am not able to look anywhere else.

Her face is glowing like last night. Her skin white as snow n whenever I touch her, it feels she is melting in the heat of my passion.

How can someone be so beautiful? So serene. Her mere breathing is making me hard. I just want her under me, to press her body against mine to death.


I am in the most exquisite distress
want you astride now, sweating
feeling an impetuous volcano
stain at its peak inside
wanting to explode
my wildest self all over you

-by L.H. Kennedy



But I don't understand!! Her attitude.

Is she really that naive???

Or is she mad???

I am not sure about her but she is certainly making me mad.

May be she is a witch. Who knows some black magic.


End Soliloquy

Sighing he controlled his overflowing urges n eventually fell asleep.


Next morning Geet took bath n changed into pink salwar suit as dadimaa said she can wear whatever makes her comfortable. She brought black coffee for Maan. He was sleeping. She was confused whether to wake him up or not.

He had to go to office n coffee was also getting cold so she decided to give it a try.

Maan She spoke ever so softly.

He moved a bit. Geet made a face. She bent a little to see if he was awake.

Maan pulled her by wrist. She fell over him. Their faces inches away, breaths mingling.



What are you doing? Maan asked rudely.

Wo... Mai...mai...dene aayi thi. She said breathing heavily, intimidated by his proximity.

Kya?? Morning kiss Maan said looking lustfully at her lips.

Nai mai wo coffee... her voice got choked when Maan started massaging her cheek making immaculate patterns with his thumb like Picaso working on his canvas.

She closed her eyes n pressed her face more against his hand.

Nakul knocked on the door. Geet straightened herself while Maan groaned.

Hmm...

Dadimaa breakfast k liye bula rai hai

Geet Maan came downstairs. Nakul was serving the breakfast.

He was about to put non- veg in Geet's plate when she stopped him.

I don't eat non-veg. She told him politely.

Her family ate non- veg n she cooked it for them. But Geet herself never ate non- veg. She found it morally wrong to kill animals for taste. Moreover she felt sick just by the smell of non- veg.




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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
hey nice update drSmile.Clap...
GOOD MORNING KISS!!!!! ...hmmm ...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
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update soon...
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Edited by mayapari - 07 January 2012 at 10:22pm
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lovely part dear
yes she is naive
hope maan soon understand this ...
and 
the test
omg!
what he wann to do with her now 
dont no...
but geet ll win the test dear
that we know
waiting for the next part dear
eagerly 
pls update soon dear
hope we get bonaza dear
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awesome update
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Superb...loved it...

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