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MY FIRST SIDMA OS-LOVE NEVER DIES..

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 1:39am | IP Logged

hello ppl ..this isthe first time ive writtien sumting...hope all sidma fans will like it..plzz do comment if u like my post.

In Sanjeevani-

 ridz-''dr. kirti ...sid..i mean dr. siddhant kahan hai unse ek case discuss karna tha''

dr.kirti-"dr.riddhima dr.siddhant aaj hospital nahi aayenge unki tabiyat kharab hai".after that dr. kirti leaves

ridz-"i think mujhe sid se milne jaana chahiye"

at pent house..sid was changing in his room wearing a white pathani kurta and salwar.
ridz enter the pent house as she finds that the door is already opened.

ridz-"darwaza khula chodne ki aadat gayi nahi ab tak."she calls out for sid."zaroor apne room mein hoga."
she goes to the room and finds sid wearing the white attire.Her heart skipped a beat as he looked breathtakingly hott.

ridz-"sid aaj tum hospital nahi aaye.dr. kirti ne bataya tumhari tabiyat kharab hai"

sid-"haan wo thoda bhukhar hai shayad.maine medicine leli hai..ill b f9."
she touches sid to find the temperature

ridzz-"sid tumhe bahut tez bhukhaar hai.tum yahin ruko main abhi aati hoon."
while she was walking out of the room,she accidently gets hooked by a nail torning off her sleeves.she immediately got freezed at that point.seeing this sid turned his back on her face.

sid-"riddhima relax.tum wahin ruko ...main abhi aata hoon."he goes to his wardrobe and takes out a beautiful red shifon saree with a embroidered border.

"lo ye pehen lo."

ridzz-"ye saree kiski hai"
sid-"well..main to saree pahanta nahi..ofcourse tumhare liye hi hai..bahut pehle kharidi thi.par kabhi dene ka mauka hi nahi mila.Red tumhara fav. color hai na."

ridzz-"tumhe kaise pata?"
sid-"mujhey sab yaad hai ridhima..."
 
 
Sid goes out of the room and riddhima went to change.she came out of the room wearing the red saaree which was a bit trancelucent...she looked damm hott in it..she saw sid standing in the garden.as she made her way towards him sid felt an unusual feeling inside and suddenly he turns his back and saw riddima standing nxt to her.Sid got stunned looking at her.she loked drop dead gorgeous.sid in his mind

sid-"she never looked so beautiful as the way she is looking tonite..huhhh wats happening to me"

ridzz-"thanxx for the saree ...bahut khoobsurat hai"
...
sid-"par usebhi zyada tum..
ridzz-"kya?kuch kaha tumne?"
sid-"nahi to ..(in his mind)bach gaye"
suddenly,they hear sounds of lightning and it starts raining..they run inside the hall,getting a bit drenched up


 
Sid goes into his room to bring towel while riddhima on the other was setting her wet hair.waterdroplets falling from her hair making her look steamingly hott..sid brings the towell from his room and see riddhima all drenched in water and her trancelucently visible figure..Riddhima felt sumthing and see staring at her.she gets a bit uncomfartable and sid notices that.he quickly handover the towell to riddhima steps back..still from the corner of his eyes he kept gazing at her.sid slowly cums near her and ask her for a dance.
sid-"ridhima mere saath dance karogi"
ridz-"emm dance..."
sid starts leaving from there thinking she might have felt bad..

 ridzz-"sid..kahan ja rahe ho.'
sid-"kuch nhi ridhima ..."
ridzz-"kyun dance nhi karoge mere sath..mujhey bura nhi laga"
then the music starts and the song is my fav.kuch khaas hai...
they danced on they whole song leaving ridhima in sid's arms..suddenly the lightning blows with a huge gust of wind and electricity goes off.ridhima gets scared and holds him tightly.
sid-"relax ridhima mujhey pata hai tumhe andhere se darr lgta hai..main hoon tumhare saath..tumhe kuch nahi hoga"
ridhima slowly loosens his grip on sid and  meets his eyes.SR*EYELOCK*
RIDHIMA-"i m sry sid"
sid-"its ok"
they come close to each other till their nose touches..and then finally after much of resitence they kiss each other softly turning it into a passionate 1Embarrassed

as its my first attempt i cant think beyond kiss...but hope u all have liked it.Tongueplss bare with my typing mistakes.

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 3:11am | IP Logged
SR OS...after so long Day Dreaming
Fariya ji apna hidden talent ab tak kaha chupa k rakha tha Wink

"waterdroplets falling from her hair making her look steamingly hott..sid brings the towell from his room and see riddhima all drenched in water and her trancelucently visible figure" Blushing

Dil hi dil main Sid must b singing this song "oolala oolala...tu hai meri fantasy" LOL 

Can't believe its ur first attempt... its just so beautiful...missing my SR even more after reading it Cry
n the ending is just Blushing Blushing ...You shouldn't have ended at this point Angry ...You know what I mean Wink ... LOL
Keep writing...won't mind if you write something even more Besharam... LOL
I loved it...muahhhzzz fr writing it...Big smile

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 3:47am | IP Logged
hey its beautiful
u shud definitely continue writing
plzz start a ff soon and pm me wen u do 4 sure

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bubli1234

hey its beautiful
u shud definitely continue writing
plzz start a ff soon and pm me wen u do 4 sure
thanxx for liking it..well i havent thought of any ff yet..
but will try.Wink
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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 3:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonia1000

SR OS...after so long Day Dreaming
Fariya ji apna hidden talent ab tak kaha chupa k rakha tha Wink

"waterdroplets falling from her hair making her look steamingly hott..sid brings the towell from his room and see riddhima all drenched in water and her trancelucently visible figure" Blushing

Dil hi dil main Sid must b singing this song "oolala oolala...tu hai meri fantasy" LOL 

Can't believe its ur first attempt... its just so beautiful...missing my SR even more after reading it Cry
n the ending is just Blushing Blushing ...You shouldn't have ended at this point Angry ...You know what I mean Wink ... LOL
Keep writing...won't mind if you write something even more Besharam... LOL
I loved it...muahhhzzz fr writing it...Big smile
i know wat u mean abt the ending...but i think ive to take classes from u for that..LOL
 
but thanxx for such a big comment.

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 4:52am | IP Logged
wonderful os...
loved it

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 5:28am | IP Logged
nice start...continue soon...
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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by loveSR

nice start...continue soon...
thannxx but it was os ..so it ended there..
but will surely trysumthing new nxt timeSmile

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