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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: anshra

@payal

luv ya dear
yeah me taking medi too

luv u too dear 
nice that u r doing so😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: payalpari

~Devil's Love Melody~

I wish I could show you, how much I Love You

I wish I could ever let you know, the depth of my Love

I wish to write a melody of my Love for you my Angel

A Melody you could sing Forever..

A Melody that you can hear amongst the Rustling of Leaves

Just like the way I can feel your breath even in the Cold Breeze..

A Melody that can warm your senses even in the Snowflakes

Just like the way I can see your tears in the Uncanny Rain..

I Treasure you my Angel& Bless the moment my eyes caught your sight

But no matter what I say or write

It wouldn't be enough to show my Love for you..

I wish I could write your name with Stars on the Dark Sky

And make all the birds sing Morning Glory for you..

I wish I could make all the trees dance for you in the Pouring Rain

And make all Flowers Bloom only for you my Angel..

I could never get enough of your Charming Smile

& the Fire of Honesty in your Beautiful Eyes..

You are like the last piece of a puzzle, that has been put in its place

and suddenly my Life is having a Meaning..

But no matter what I say or write

It wouldn't be enough to show my Love for you..

The Melody I am trying to write for you my Angel

can never sound as Enchanting as your Divine Voice..

I wish I could Steal colours from Rainbow & fill your Life

I wish I could Bend a Mountain & make a home to Reside

I wish I could hold on to our Days & never let them End

I wish I could catch the Harsh Wind & turn it away from you..

Oh Dear Angel with your touch.. you changed a soulless Devil into a Lover

& I promise that I will hold on to your hand & spend my every Breath Loving you

Because being in Love with you, makes me feel Alive..

I Love You.. That's the only truth my soul know

Loving you is the only right thing my Heart did in my entire Lifetime

Angel you did magic.. you turned a Devil into DEVIL IN LOVE..

I just want to Luv you & Be with you, till Eternity..

I will Seize the Day.. Cherish the Rhyme

Freeze the Moments & Stop the Time..!!

Just to be with you.. FOREVER my Angel..




wow sneha de it was indeed  wonderful ...



 
 
me too love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: payalpari

@ akku de : its going on nice de so de where r u from ?<div></div>


dear me frm lucknow nd u?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: ananya95

awesome superb updt
*sob* last updt me very sad wud miss DIL so much
longest updt ever i hv fallen in luv AGAIN with DIL lol
finally sr the heavenly sensual hot much awaited sr
uffo maan sweet torturing her n bringing out her wild side she nvr knew of
omg geet was fearing maan yet here she was totally different mrs devil in love n craving 4 mr.devil
awww geet getting all shy but our devil being devil nvr lets go of her
luvd d tears scene grt words of devil
omg devil n his guts picked her up directly
contso

 
 
thank u so much
for everything
for always commenting
n liking
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: tasshuu

awesome updates pls dont end it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: leverne

Ani me sobs..i was waiting at wrong busstop and the bus went..and now god knows how long till another one comes..i'l get late for church after shopping..


Pheewww..
finally caught u..
sorriee could reply to ur msg.. 
My mornings r very busy.. can't cum ol in mornings..
Newys r u done with Christmas shopping..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: anshra

 
 
me too love it

hey dear i have one more comment before this one ðŸ˜† it is for all of u this one was for sneha de for her wonderful poem ...😉
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: riya27

dear anshu./...its an fabulous update...
each and every word described maaneets feeling very well...
i was really addicted to ur ff...and now as it came to an end...am gonna start bugging u for next ff...not sacred sin...one more ff...plzzz😉
waiting for epilogue 😃 

 
will write real sooon
thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi @ani 
@ payal
@aaku