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Posted: 11 July 2012 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Omg omg omg this update was AMAZING!!!
I am loving this jealousy that game that Uday is playing. The last scene with the kiss was HOT Day Dreaming
I am pretty sure that Akash was the one who saw them kissing. Good for him Evil Smile
Update the next part soon please!!

Edit: So it was Akash afterall LOL


Edited by fia21 - 11 July 2012 at 1:01pm

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Posted: 11 July 2012 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fia21

Omg omg omg this update was AMAZING!!!
I am loving this jealousy that game that Uday is playing. The last scene with the kiss was HOT Day Dreaming
I am pretty sure that Akash was the one who saw them kissing. Good for him Evil Smile
Update the next part soon please!!

Edit: So it was Akash afterall LOL

totally agree with u fia...last scene was effing romantic nd passionate at the same time...Embarrassed
i really hope its akash , who saw kissing thm nd he straight go to his chawal nd dive into the well of tht chawl like """chullu bhar pani mei doob marna"""LOLLOL
ok jokes apart,,,,,, loved this part.Clap

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Posted: 11 July 2012 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
ClapClapClapClapthanks.awesome...brillaint...loved it...ClapClapClapClap
ilvuday Goldie
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Posted: 11 July 2012 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
loved the update ...it was amazing n it was nyc seeing manyata jealois...i enjoyed d updateClap...plz update soon 
ps thanx for pm

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Posted: 11 July 2012 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
Omg...this was awesome...more than awesome...I hope show main bhi aisa ho...amazing...I love to see M getting jealous..how evil i am...

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Posted: 11 July 2012 at 4:22pm | IP Logged
OMG Vishwa...that was AMAZING!!
Seriously love M getting jealous parts..preponing the party ;) wow...hope she realizes her love for UDayveer soon
The towel scene was so well-written, reallly loved it! Embarrassed You knwo you are an amazing romance writer.i always find the scenes so hot but pure and natural at the same time Smile
LOL half teh fic i was thinking hmm how are you going to get rid of Akash, then the ending scene happened and im just like YESS! That should keep him away for a while at least, although no trusting the chipku Akash, hopefully a couple months? LOL
Overall I loved ur update and seriously cant wait for you to continue
also i actually really enjoy ur writing style. When the whole party was planned i was all excited and expecting it to be shown for a couple chaps but i actually ended up liking that it didnt and that u dont unnecessarily drag events but kind of hint at their significance and in this case I feel like every event that happens is just connecting and building to Manyata's emotions Thumbs Up
Amazing job girl! Keep it up! Big smile

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Haniibee Senior Member
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Posted: 11 July 2012 at 7:10pm | IP Logged
Ooohhh...DRAMA!
What I wouldn't give to see Uday in a towel in the actual show!
Hayeee...
Yes! Ab Pakash can go back and leave ManVeer alone!
You know even though J is acting I still HATE it!
That girl just gets on my nerves!

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Posted: 11 July 2012 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
That was awesome!! and the kiss was hot!!!

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