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SS:DTBHJ (A twisted KISS) Pg 34 (Page 17)

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Posted: 14 March 2012 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by adventure_gurl

loved it Vishu!


thank you jaana! I luv how ur always the first to read Embarrassed

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Posted: 14 March 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by moksha89

o m g !!!

vish, what were you so stressed about! i looove your SS, honestly, the dialogues and everything are just so much fun to read ... your comic factor is so well intermixed with the serious and layered personality aspects!
This part had me in stitches LOL
""Oh and princess do you have the directions?" It startled her; she blinked twice before figuring out what he had said. She gave him a confused look; did he want to go to the beach or the chawl? Because that was all she knew, "To where?"

"To your heart," he winked at her and it took her a moment before realization crossed her face. He made a run for the door but was showered with pillows.
"Tumhe sudhaar na, bhe'ns ke samne been bajane ke barabar hai (ringing a bell in front of a buffalo) kitna bhi karlo, hilegi hi nahi ( no matter what you do it won't move)," she screamed at the top of her lungs while Uday burst into laughter as he came out."

it was seriously so cute! i couldn't stop smiling. 

can't wait for the next part!! Hug




awwwHug...thank you sooo much sweets!!! means a lot!!
haha...yea...it was just a little cheesy line from UV's part LOL
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Posted: 14 March 2012 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by moonstruck

oh nooo how could you stop like that!!!! Angry lol
 
I was expecting more. can't wait for the next part. and OMG that line about directions to her heart - what a one liner lol loved it!!!Big smile


ROFL whoops!BlushingLOL
thanks dear...haha
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Posted: 14 March 2012 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by limbu.simmy



"SACH!" She squealed and jumped into his arms.  

Her actions were so fast that Uday did not enough time contemplate what had just taken place until he felt her heartbeat racing against his chiselled body. Manyata stood with her arms around his structured waist and head placed near his heart, she felt so content, so warm and so peaceful. Uday grinned and took this chance to wrap his hands around her. His grin turned into a wide spread smile when he thought about how perfectly she fit into his arms, but there was something present about that moment. There was passion, there was a rush of blood sending both to a new world, there was a feeling of being - complete. There was definitely something in them and both knew it.

Totally Luvd the part HeartHeart

How  I wish it to happen onscreen as well..Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

Awesome Chapter..Big smile Big smileKeep up the good workClap ClapClapand Thanks a lot for the  PMHug




Yess it their first hug...sweet na Embarrassed
thank you sooo much! n no prb Wink
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Posted: 14 March 2012 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by salekh1

Big smileOMG
that was awesome
Thank you so muchf or the pm
Loved ittt
Pleaseee write one more scene for this weekend..
Pleaseee
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glad you liked it sweeets...
haha...sorry for being sooo late...i think u'll need to read it all over again :(
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Posted: 14 March 2012 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kesarmania

Wow, so much of manveer scenes. Thank you for manveerian update i was bored after fri epi.:-)


No prob...Manveer are just so entertainin to write
thnks
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Posted: 14 March 2012 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zigzagway_sadi



Embarrassed I love your unique way of appreciating my work! Its so cute!!! Thank you!
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Posted: 14 March 2012 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chika_gurl

hey its suprb,thnxx 4 da pm

thanks gurl
no problem

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