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SS:DTBHJ (A twisted KISS) Pg 34 (Page 15)

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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Vishwa-

Originally posted by moksha89

Originally posted by -Vishwa-

NOTE:

Just like to mention before the update that I will be having Akash and Monia together for some scenes...trust me its really Dead even writing about them but I want the story to go through a MAJOR twist,


@blue ...ROFL


kya ridz Ouch
I am almost commiting suicide here and ur laughing...
Probably world's first writer whose own story is the cause of her misery CryLOL

kyuuun? yaar, the way you phrased your joy in monash was so funny!
don't be sad! your story is so much fun to read.
waise dinner ke baad - i shall read & comment. i will reserve a spot though Wink

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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
o m g !!!

vish, what were you so stressed about! i looove your SS, honestly, the dialogues and everything are just so much fun to read ... your comic factor is so well intermixed with the serious and layered personality aspects!
This part had me in stitches LOL
""Oh and princess do you have the directions?" It startled her; she blinked twice before figuring out what he had said. She gave him a confused look; did he want to go to the beach or the chawl? Because that was all she knew, "To where?"

"To your heart," he winked at her and it took her a moment before realization crossed her face. He made a run for the door but was showered with pillows.
"Tumhe sudhaar na, bhe'ns ke samne been bajane ke barabar hai (ringing a bell in front of a buffalo) kitna bhi karlo, hilegi hi nahi ( no matter what you do it won't move)," she screamed at the top of her lungs while Uday burst into laughter as he came out."

it was seriously so cute! i couldn't stop smiling. 

can't wait for the next part!! Hug



Edited by moksha89 - 08 January 2012 at 5:42pm
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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 5:10pm | IP Logged
oh nooo how could you stop like that!!!! Angry lol
 
I was expecting more. can't wait for the next part. and OMG that line about directions to her heart - what a one liner lol loved it!!!Big smile
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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 5:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Vishwa-



"SACH!" She squealed and jumped into his arms.  

Her actions were so fast that Uday did not enough time contemplate what had just taken place until he felt her heartbeat racing against his chiselled body. Manyata stood with her arms around his structured waist and head placed near his heart, she felt so content, so warm and so peaceful. Uday grinned and took this chance to wrap his hands around her. His grin turned into a wide spread smile when he thought about how perfectly she fit into his arms, but there was something present about that moment. There was passion, there was a rush of blood sending both to a new world, there was a feeling of being - complete. There was definitely something in them and both knew it.

Totally Luvd the part HeartHeart

How  I wish it to happen onscreen as well..Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

Awesome Chapter..Big smile Big smileKeep up the good workClap ClapClapand Thanks a lot for the  PMHug






Edited by limbu.simmy - 08 January 2012 at 5:16pm

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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 6:54pm | IP Logged
Big smileOMG
that was awesome
Thank you so muchf or the pm
Loved ittt
Pleaseee write one more scene for this weekend..
Pleaseee
Awesome ly writtenEmbarrassed

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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 9:24pm | IP Logged
Wow, so much of manveer scenes. Thank you for manveerian update i was bored after fri epi.:-)

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hey its suprb,thnxx 4 da pm

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