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OMG Vishwa...that was AMAZING!!
Seriously love M getting jealous parts..preponing the party ;) wow...hope she realizes her love for UDayveer soon
The towel scene was so well-written, reallly loved it! 😳 You knwo you are an amazing romance writer.i always find the scenes so hot but pure and natural at the same time 😊
LOL half teh fic i was thinking hmm how are you going to get rid of Akash, then the ending scene happened and im just like YESS! That should keep him away for a while at least, although no trusting the chipku Akash, hopefully a couple months? 😆
Overall I loved ur update and seriously cant wait for you to continue
also i actually really enjoy ur writing style. When the whole party was planned i was all excited and expecting it to be shown for a couple chaps but i actually ended up liking that it didnt and that u dont unnecessarily drag events but kind of hint at their significance and in this case I feel like every event that happens is just connecting and building to Manyata's emotions 👍🏼
Amazing job girl! Keep it up! 😃
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