SS:DTBHJ (A twisted KISS) Pg 34 - Page 14

Originally posted by: Chika_gurl

hey its suprb,thnxx 4 da pm

thanks gurl
no problem

Originally posted by: --ANGEL--

awesome part...lovd the manveer parts...update soon...thanx 4 the pm

thanks a lot hon!

Originally posted by: nidzlovekinrul

OMG

that was awesome

Thanks for the pm

Loved ittt😃

glad you liked it! 😳

 

Originally posted by: minizz

"Mujhse Dosti Karoge"😆Uday...Uday...Uday...Kya planning hai.well enjoy the feeling of being in control for some more days,after that all your plans are going to fall flat when love strikes.The tug-of-war has already begun.It will be interesting to see how that progresses.loved the interaction between Uday and Manyata.The best dialogue was that do you know the directions to your heart waala part.That was so funny yet somehow it sounded very sincere to me.I loved it.And you have to update soon...how can you leave us all hanging there😆.So jaldi jaldi update please😃

This was a wonderful chapter.Good work👏

🤣 Did you seriously think the player would've spared Manyata? 😆
oh his planning alright...but what...well...lets see...
haha...thank you so much... 😳

Originally posted by: pri01

Fabulous update Vishwa I love the last part❤️ hope you could continue it😳

Plzzz update soon and thxs for the pm

Thanks a lot gurl!
glad you liked it 😊

Originally posted by: CutePrincess

Great update dear :)

thank you sweety

Originally posted by: tvlover92

Hi, Vishwa! 😃

Aww... Ickle Udayveer reminiscing about the good old days 😉 ...before going back to his Kutta self No worries. I like his Kutta side anyways... Heck, i like his every side 😆 

And O-M-G! Manyata hugged Udayveer? 😲 *imagines the excuses that would come out of her mouth regarding this er-behavior 😆 *

Cannot wait for the next update!! *so excited*

And... btw, you sent me a PM regarding an ArHi VM rather than the SS update... Did you not want me to review your update or something? 😛 

I gave it anyways. I cannot resist an awesome update, what can I say? 😃😛 

TC.

WHOOPS! I am sooo sorry dear! Either ur not on my list or I just missed!
Won't happen again ...PROMISE! Who would NOT want to read such an entertaining review😆😳
yes they hugged...well kutta is kutta 😛
awww...thank you sooo much sweets!!! 🤗really appreciate it!

Originally posted by: rsk16

lovely story.amazing maanveer.plz do add me to your pm list.

thank you...sure will :)

Originally posted by: Nakita19

😍 I love your SS!!! Please add me to your PM list thanks!

thanks a lot!
will do :)

Gr8 update!!! Loved it!!! Btw when will u write the next part? I'm dying to read it!!!:)