Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
loved it Vishu!
Originally posted by: moksha89
o m g !!!
vish, what were you so stressed about! i looove your SS, honestly, the dialogues and everything are just so much fun to read ... your comic factor is so well intermixed with the serious and layered personality aspects!This part had me in stitches 😆""Oh and princess do you have the directions?" It startled her; she blinked twice before figuring out what he had said. She gave him a confused look; did he want to go to the beach or the chawl? Because that was all she knew, "To where?""To your heart," he winked at her and it took her a moment before realization crossed her face. He made a run for the door but was showered with pillows.
"Tumhe sudhaar na, bhe'ns ke samne been bajane ke barabar hai (ringing a bell in front of a buffalo) kitna bhi karlo, hilegi hi nahi ( no matter what you do it won't move)," she screamed at the top of her lungs while Uday burst into laughter as he came out."it was seriously so cute! i couldn't stop smiling.
can't wait for the next part!! 🤗
Originally posted by: moonstruck
oh nooo how could you stop like that!!!! 😡 lol
I was expecting more. can't wait for the next part. and OMG that line about directions to her heart - what a one liner lol loved it!!!😃
Yess it their first hug...sweet na 😳Originally posted by: limbu.simmy
"SACH!" She squealed and jumped into his arms.Her actions were so fast that Uday did not enough time contemplate what had just taken place until he felt her heartbeat racing against his chiselled body. Manyata stood with her arms around his structured waist and head placed near his heart, she felt so content, so warm and so peaceful. Uday grinned and took this chance to wrap his hands around her. His grin turned into a wide spread smile when he thought about how perfectly she fit into his arms, but there was something present about that moment. There was passion, there was a rush of blood sending both to a new world, there was a feeling of being - complete. There was definitely something in them and both knew it.
Totally Luvd the part ❤️❤️
How I wish it to happen onscreen as well..😍😍😍
Awesome Chapter..😃 😃Keep up the good work👏 👏👏and Thanks a lot for the PM🤗
thank you sooo much! n no prb 😉
😃OMG
that was awesomeThank you so muchf or the pmLoved itttPleaseee write one more scene for this weekend..PleaseeeAwesome ly written😳
Originally posted by: Kesarmania
Wow, so much of manveer scenes. Thank you for manveerian update i was bored after fri epi.:-)
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