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Maneet ff-U,Me,aur..?# 2..pt72.pg.108-Mar2 (Page 9)

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 8:54pm | IP Logged
 VALLI STILL SO 
SAD & WE  ALL SILL
CryCry 4 OUR SO LOVELY
MAAN IS SO FREAKING
AWESOME  HE IS A KING
OF HIS OWN WORLD.
SO SORRY VALLI LITTLE
LATE 4 THE COMMENTS
HELL BUSY WITH WORK
& CHRISTMAS WEEK.
UPDATE SOON.

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
nice part
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
CONRATS FOR THE NEW THREAD
GOOD UPDATE
SHOWS HOW MUCH MAAN CARES FOR HER AND HOW WELL HE KNOWS HER
HE ALLOWED HIS DADI TO HIS ROOM FOR HER 
HOPE SHE RECOVERS SOON

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Loved it, amazing. continue soon.

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
valli pz continue soon

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 4:15am | IP Logged
oh poor geet 

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Fab update

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
                                   U, ME,AUR...?

                                                                 PART 52
 

Hai friends,

Thank you all for your support .Special thanks for my friends who clicked like buttons and commented my updates.. Please encouraging me in the same way'SmileI love you all.

sorry friends these two parts are going to  be an emotional hatyachaar.



Maan sat near geet caressing her head.nurse changed geets saline .kala came with  2 flasks.

Kala:Chotu,in 1 there is black coffee for u n in other milk for gudia..if she wakes up feed her.. or call me..

maan:ok akka..kalakka take nurse with u ..let her take rest.
nurse:its ok sir.i'll stay here with gudia..

kala understood maan wants some space only for them.
Kala:its ok..if  he needs u he will call u..i'll show u the guest room..u also need to take rest..just take a nap..

nurse didn't argue more..

nurse:ok sir.i'll be in room..if  gudia wakes up call me..n  call me before the saline ends.

maan:ok.

kala n nurse left the room leaving maneet alone.

Geet was deep asleep.maan  slides down on the bed relaxing himself on the bed post.He took her hand that was not in saline.

Maan:geet,come back.I can't take ur silence.its killing me inside.i have gone through enough in my life.please you also dont test my patience..i have no courage to see u like this..
i want that bubbly geet.,which made me fall in love with her..
i want that non stop chatter box to hear her voice..
i want that geet who fights with me.
i want that geet  annoying me with her questions..
i want u to cry.
ur family is no more..
ur papa is no more to love you..
ur mama is nomore to teach u .
ur bhai is no more to pull ur legs.ur chachu is no more to support u
ur puppy is nomore to play with u..
u must cry remembering them..
.i remember. U cried when i twisted ur hands in farm for accusing u as  aam chor..that day ur tears made my heart wince in pain..i thought that day,i'll never want to see ur tears..
but,today i want to see ur tear..
i want u to cry..
i want u 2 scream..
i want u to pour ur heart out..
i want to take out all the sorrows from you..
i thought of giving you all happiness in the world..
i thought i'll enjoy the happiness of life with you..
but,now i lost everything..
i'm losing hope.

please geet..

he lifted her head n placed it over his heart..
Maan:this heart now beats for u...can u hear it..if u didnot respond geet,this will also stop its beat..

He made her face look at him..

Maan:ur mother told u na...listen to ur husbands words..
now listen..i'm ur husbandna..i'm saying u...i want u to cry..
do u hear me...i want u 2 respond to me..
atleast open ur eyes ...i want u 2 see me..see my face..
how much i'm worried for u...
i promised ur chachu,i'll look after u..if u keep urself shut,then how can i keep my words..
geet,u always keeps promise na...now help me to keep my promise..open ur eyes..talk to me..

He dont know how much hrs he spent on talking with her all the night..inbetween he called the nurse n changed the drips..after 4  bottles of saline,nurse said its enough for that day n lets wait for Dr.  n then can continue with what she says..


Geet was having a dream.(remember part 4)
  Rano:Gudia get up  Its alredy 7am u r still sleeping

  '
Geet: mama..pls sone dona.let me sleep for some more time..She  pulled the blanket over her face n she slept again.Vicky.came there ..He pulled her blanket in full force..n took away from her..n ran into his room.

Geet: Mama...Vickyko dekona ..he is disturbing my sleep..

Rano:u both started in the morning itself.gudia.. get fresh up n come here.

Rajendar:Ranu..let her sleep'bachi hai..

Rano: wo ab bachi nahi hai..she is going 2 b 18..yrs..ek do saal mein hum uski shaadi karni hai..agar ye yesehi sasural jakar b soyegi tho wo log kya kahegi.

puppy came n started to lick her feet..

puppy dont lick me..u have started to lick me daily to wake me

she wakes up some where else.

she was wearing a  sari..she lays in rano's lap..mama..

Rano:gudia,ab tumhari shadhi hogayi hain.sasural mein yese soyegi kya.get up.i am saying u again .u have to obey ur husband..he loves u a lot..he cares for u .talk to him beta...dont make him worry..see him how he is worried at u...

                                 the dream ends




22.12..2011..11.45pm..

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