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soni4eva IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 February 2012 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
wondaful updates luvd dem
maan is relii swt x

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TeamMcSwarek IF-Rockerz

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Mishti13 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 February 2012 at 5:43pm | IP Logged
superb update

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sdlife19 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 February 2012 at 8:00pm | IP Logged

Nice update. Waiting for vicky n geet meeting

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 February 2012 at 9:34pm | IP Logged

very beautiful updates...

Maan took Geet to collage for admission and he is planning to keep Vicky with Geet...

Vicky will be very happy to know this...

thanx for pm...

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Posted: 13 February 2012 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
part 65
awesome part love it...

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TanuDDian IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 February 2012 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
part 66
awww di 66 part is 4r me...                                                                                           
ThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyouvery much di
me to thz
its a awesome prt asusual... just love it
so geet is going to continue her studies...
waiting 4r more di

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vrinda22 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 February 2012 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
                                            U, ME,AUR...?

                                                                 PART 67
 Hai friends,

Thank you all for your support .Special thanks for my friends who clicked like buttons and commented my updates.. Please encouraging me in the same way'SmileI love you all.

Maan came outside n saw bahadur n raghav trying very hard not to laugh..seeing maan they left the place..he saw geet sitting on the verandah.hugging her knees.facing her back to him..

He neared her.he heared her cursing.maaan stood there crossing his arms over his chest. 

Geet:.dusht dhanav..kutha,kamina,muje..akhela choddhiya...he said he will come soon.. he forgot much time will he talk..whom will I talk to..he did not think about me..what will I be doing here..

I'm waiting for him..n he doesn't remember me at all'let prince come..i'll not talk to him'katti..katti...pakka..baath nehi karungi..


She was making all kinds of puppy faces..

Maan want to eat her..she looked so cute..

bcoz of this only raghav n bahadur were laughing..hmm..only geet has the guts to curse maan singh khurana.

a small smile reached his lips...

Maan:if ur cursing program has finished,can we talk princess..

 Geet:I don't want to talk to you..

She turned the other side..

Maan:achaa..then to whom u r talking me only na princess..

Geet looked here n there..wo..wo'I'm talking to this plants n wall

Maan:ok..if u don't want to talk..then ..i'll also not talk to u..its ok'I thought, u want to know,why I brought u here..

Geet looked at him curiously..

Maan:tum tho mujse katti ho na'so,I'll not tell..

Geet:nehi nehi..mei aap se katti nehi hoon tell me'

She stood up..

Maan: sachi..u are angry at me..

Geet:I was angry but not now..tell me na..why u brought me here..

She asked him excitedly..

Maan:u wanted to go to college na..


Maan;from tomorrow,u will also study in this college..

Geets eyes opened wide..

Geet:really'in this biiig college..


Geet hugged him..

Geet:thank u..

Maan:I want gift..not thanks..he said naughtily..n geet gave him kiss on both cheeks..

Maan:that's nice..come I'll take you a tour around this college.

.it took more than half an hour for them..

Maan:whenever I want to be alone ..i'll be here'

He entered a door'

Maan:principal is fond of birds'so he made this'

it looked like a small birds sanctuary..there was different kinds of birds..seeing him all chirped'geet looked around enjoying the view..

The most shocked her was a parrot'it called him by name..maan..maan'maan..

Geet: is calling u knew u..


Maan took her to the speaking parrot'

Maan:geet , this parrots name is Pikachu'.pikachu, this is geet..say geet'

It looked at her turning its beak left n right'

Geet ..geet..geet'

Geet jumped'

Geet:Hai'.its calling me also'

pikachu:Maan..gauva..maan guava..

maan:Sry .i forgot...i'll bring u 2morrow..

pikachu:too bad..too bad..LOL

maan:i'll bring 2 guava..

pikachu:maan gud..maan gud..LOL

geet looked at pikachu with her mouth opened wide..

with that they both came out of that small world..

Geet:which is ur class..

Maan showed the 2nd floor..


Maan :straight below in first floor'

Geet:alag alag..kyun..

Maan:I'm in 3rd yr n u r in 1rst yr..

Geets tummy growled'

Maan:u r hungry..


Maan: lets go home'


Vicky looked at the clock for upteenth time'1pm..

He  became restless.

papa said bhabhi will come ...its only a dream..i trusted it ..i wished it to come true.

.when dadi called him for lunch he sat there silently..n munched a little'the disappointment was clear in his face.seeing his mood dadi did not ask anything...he went to his room .he changed to a shorts n threw the dresses on floor..he fell on bed in his stomach n started to cry'bhabhi did not come...he slowly dozed off'

Maans car entered the palace..he asked the driver to go to mansion..

Driver looked at him,whether he heared it right or not..

Maan:did u hear me'go to mansion..

Driver :yes sir.

The car stopped before mansion.


Maan n geet stood at the entrance..maan hesitated a little to go inside..this mansion has only bitter memories'I don't want to go in'but,for geet..i have to'.

Geet:where are we kiska ghar hai..

Maan hold her arms n said

Khurana mansion..where dadi lives..

Geet:then lets go na..

She pulled him in..they both entered the mansion with right leg'rose petals started to fell on them..

Vicky has done this work .to welcome ...

Maneet looked up..geet extended her hand n enjoyed the flow of flowers..

Dadis,kala,nakul n the entire servants froze in their places looking maneet in mansion..

Dadis eyes filled in joy..maneet were about to enter.

Dadi:stay there..

Maan was about to go out of mansion..,he was hurt again.

Dadi:I said to stay there..not to go..

Maan turned n looked at dadi in confusion..kala,who knows dadi came out with rice pot n saffron water plate..

Dadi:geet,,till I say close ur eyes..

Geet closed her eyes'

Kala came out with aarthi plate'she did the aarthi n placed kumkum on their forehead..

Geet:dadi,now can I open my eyes..

Kala moved fast from there taking the aarthi plate'geet fire na dekhe..

Dadi:yes beta'I want u to enter mansion with all rituals'now u can enter..

Geet made her entry'n maneet sat in the living room.

Dadi:I'm happy n ur dadaji,then ur mummy papa n then  ur bhai n bhabhi all started our life here only'so,only I want my bahu to enter with full rituals..

Maan kept quiet..

Badi dadi fed them sweets..

Maan:kalakka,geet is hungry..give her lunch..

Kalakka:I'll place the dining..u too join her..

Maan :hmm..

Dadi looked at maan..he wants to say something..its visible..

Dadi:what do u want to say

Maan gave the admission form to her silently..

Dadi:maan u want Vicky to join college here with geet..


Kala:chotu.come n have ur lunch..gudia is waiting for u'

Maan left to dining n ate their silently..but,he did not fail to help geet to eat using spoons'

Daadis looked maan in awe'

They both came to living room.dadi waited for him to speak..if he has decided,he must give explanation also..

Maan:wo..dadi'uhgm..he cleared his throats..

maan:Geet needs change..we cant keep her inside 4walls..she needs to finish her studies also..but,in this stage she cant go alone to college..she needs someone to take care of her'till she is in college..i cant bunk my class also'so,I thought..vikranth can take care of her'so'so'I made admissions for them in college'ah..umm..but,its ur wish'u can ask him'I'm not forcing anyone to take care of my will be ur own decision..

Badi dadi came near savithri's ears n whispered..

b.dadi:ur grandson is too smart choti..he decided all..made admissions for,he is will be our decision..kamaal hain..

dadi:I'll talk to Vicky'

geet who was looking around the mansion,instantly said

geet:Vicky'.vicky..he too left me 'Cryshe sobbed..

maan hugged her..

maan:no tears geet..i already said u'don't cry..

dadi was moving to the lift..

maan:dadi,take geet with u..

dadi was super happy now'

dadis st:maan wants geet to meet Vicky'before he changes his mind I'll take geet with me..

dadi:chalo gudia..didi u also come up..

geet,b.dadi n dadi went to vickys room..

geet saw a boy sleeping in bed..his face was on other side..

dadi went n sat near him.she caressed his hair..


Vicky was in no mood..

Vicky:no dadi..pls..let me sleep now I ve  to be in airport at6..i ve to leave by5..

Dadi:u r not going..

Vicky:fir'where will I do my studies..

Dadi:here'with ur bhabhi'

This made him jump on bed'


Dadi rolled her eyes n showed geet'.

Dadi:I've a surprise for u ..see,who has come to see you'she is'.

Vicky closed dadi's mouth.

Vicky stammered..i.i..k.k.n.o.w..

he looked at geet..she was looking at him..

geets st:he is the boy I saw on that day ,playing with a dog..who is he?

Vicky looked at himself,he was wearing only a shorts no shirt..he covered him with spread.. dress'he shouted...

the dog came under from his gave him the dress,he threw on floor..

Vicky went to washroom changed n came out running..he gave a bone crushing hug to geet..

Vicky:m..y'bha..bha..bhab.bhabhi..maa'..he stammered'

Dadi :gudia,..this is vicky'maans brother , ur devar

Vicky was still hugging her n waiting for her to hug him back..

Geet was first numb hearing his name..then his hug'she thought what to do'how can a boy hug her..

Ranos voice came to her mind..whenever,u cant make a decision..think what will ur mother do if she is in ur place'

Mama ki devar chachu'whenever chachu hugs mama..mama too hugs him n kisses his forehead'n mama says..he calls him its not wrong to hug or kiss ur family member..

Now,Vicky too called me bhabhi maa..he is my family'so,i can reciprocate him...

She hugged him back'n that's what Vicky wanted'he cried holding her..

vicky:Bha..bha..bhi..Crybhabhi..maa.Cry.i've seen u'Cry

N geet was crying remembering her brother'Cry got u..

she kissed him as she used to kiss her brother..

Vicky was melting in her love'he hugged her more..kissed her n said.., bhabhi maa.sob.dadi.sob...i got my maa..

precap..a few more moments..
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Edited by valli22 - 13 February 2012 at 10:34pm

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